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Shy Yukii
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:27 am


DragonBall Nightmare


Chapter 1 Pre story

In a universe long before the one you know now and long before the hero's you know from Dragonball z was two saiyans that started it all.

these saiyan fought and tried to protect a planet that later praduced in population and this planet was called planet vegeta, but where gonna look at 100 years before planet vegeta was born.

these two saiyan one with the name of Vegeta and the other with the name Renji journeyed through many encounters along the way and began to trust each other more then anyone els they would meet and together they where pretty much invinceible they went planet to planet to find the right habitate for them to live on and the rest of there surviveing race, 50 years later they came apon a planet with high gravity and good air, water and nature to start building a refuge there where several attacks along this road but they fought off countless enemys, Renji set off and grabed the few hundered saiyans that where still left and when he came back he saw that the camp they had made has been destroyed but he could care less about that because what he saw laying in the ruble was he dearest friend vegeta laying there unable to move dieing and his last words to renji was to build a strong planet and destroy this one they called freeza, Renji looked around and saw nothing but ruble and dust as he tightend his fist tightly and yelled at the top of his lungs with fire burning in his soul, then said to himself this one they called freeza will die for this you will be avenged Vegeta.

20 years later the population was growing and there strucures where becomeing quite big Renji became King of the planet and named it after his friend and had a son named vegeta that is how Planet Vegeta and King Vegeta became one.

10 years later Renji caught a hint of where this freeza was and set out to destroy him when he finnaly found him, he diden't think; he fired a huge blast at him and yelled out "You'll pay for killing my friend"
Freeza laughed loudely and used a large ball of energy which froze Renji, Freeza put Renji inside a pod and went him far off from his planet and from Freeza him self where Renji would have to wait till someone awakend him once again.

Freeza knowing about this saiyan race decides to pay them a visit and puts fear in all there eyes, so now freeza own's some of the strongest fighter in the galaxy and will do what ever biding his tells them two, its has now been 130 year since vegeta and Renji found this Planet and the story is already known about Bardock the father of our earths hero Goku, and how Bardock stood up against this tirant and lost and also how King vegeta loast his life as well to freeza soon after there whole planet was destroyed, Freeza thought all saiyans where gone but as you know King Vegetas son, Prince Vegeta, Nappa, Raddiz, Brolly, and Goku survived and made there own story.

As Goku when through his child hood fight off evil then his adult hood protecting earth first with Vegeta, Raddiz, and Nappa then soon after with the Ginyu Force, and then killing Freeza as he was the first to turn super saiyan, and this was the first change in the relationship of the two rivales Vegeta and Goku, Years past and Goku's son Gohan grew up training and aswell as Goku's friends, Tien, Yamcha,Piccolo, Chotzu, Vegeta, and Trunks just to face another enemy the androids a fierce enemy that seemed like a big threat then came cell and struck terror in there eyes, a while later cell held a tournament when alot of lives where lost and Gohan managed to save the day being the first to hit SSJ2.

after cells defeat there lives began normal again and Gohan meet Videl and Vegeta train his son trunks, everyone just live peacefully then came bibidi, debura, and Majin Buu to ruin everything, the whole world almost died from this all there greatest heros fail eccept at the end with Vegeta and Goku finnaly working as a team Destroyed Majin Buu.

Then came Babi long after who had long wanted revenge over the saiyan race for destroying his own now this was a intresting yet very terrafiying attack which pretty much whiped out the earth but Goku manage to reach SSJ4 defeteing Bebi Vegeta and restoreing order again but as you know this right after became hell as the enemys that they all destroyed came back for revenge thanks to Dr. mew and Dr. guro with there new creation Super 17 who dident last long and all the enemys where sent back to HFIL.

Pan-Chan and Goku set out to defete there last fight of the Black start dragonballs Shenrons one after another they defeted them leading them to the final one the one star shenrong who managed to fuse with all the balls but the 4 star ball which was also a Shenron who teamed up with Goku even with him they coulden't win the fight it was with SSJ4 Vegeta and SSJ4 Goku fusion they Damaged shenron badly could of killed him if they wheren't playing around so much.

Goku and vegeta reverted back to normal Goku to kid for and Vegeta back to SSJ4 Goku wasen't much help know so vegeta tried fight it along but was no match it was only for Gokus Univers Spirit Bomb that they kill Shenron and Goku had to leave with the Dragon for all peace to come to earth and vegeta was left to Protect it being the strongest one on earth now.

Chapeter 2


It is now 100 yrs past Dragonball GT and the battle between Goku jr. and Vegeta Jr. looked after by Pan-chan and bora Brief the battle was intensed and the power was very high for there age it was almost a look back on the Rivals Vegeta and Goku and there life that became a friendship that could never be replaced.



Pan-chan look over watching the fight as it went on in equal threads of power it made her smile see a resembleince of Goku within him, as she looked across the way she saw someone, who look just like Goku in the stands; she stood up and started running through the crowed as she finnaly got to the other end Goku was no where to be found only the sent of his precence had stayed there, Pan-chan turned around to look at the fight between hers son and Bra's son and it was over it ended with Vegeta Jr. victory.

Pan-chan and Goku jr. started off home when Goku jr. saw Vegeta jr. sitting on a hill and asked Pan-chan if he may go " She nodded her head yes"
Goku jr. ran off the see Vegeta jr. and Bra and pan left to there house, the two kids talked about what adventure there grandfathers have had together and how strong they gotten before it all ended and made a promise with each other that they would get strong and protect earth just like there grandfathers.

As day turned to night Vegeta jr. was watching the news and saw something that they said.
"A meteoright of some sort have crash landed on earth and has been took in for investigation by the Orange county Police" Vegeta jr. laughed like this was a joke
the next day Vegeta jr. and Goku.jr set off to look if this rumor was true or if it was another hox like useal people like to make stuff up or over elaberate things a bit.  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:29 am


Dragonball XP Sample Story I made


DragonBall: Xtreme Power

This is the begining of the new.

Episode 1: New power, new threats. Made by: Josh Grant aka shy yukii


After goku left with Shenrong Vegeta smiled knowing that one day they would meet agean, 300 years later Goku jr. and Vegeta jr. had a battle in the tenchie tounament it was a great battle just as it would be with goku and vegeta they where both equal in streangth and power, speed But as Pan sat in the bench's watching the Fight between thoughs to she saw Goku watch on the other side then she jumped up and bashing through other people trying to get to him and when she finnaly did he was gone was she dreaming or was he really there.
Meanwhile Goku was there but left befor anyone one could see him knowing that danger would come agean if they knew he was back so Goku headed up to the ki's planet to do some more training but felt a strong power comeing from the planet some where he went to search it out and found Vegeta sitting there smerking at him then said ( Kakarot You dident think i forgot about u did U) Goku smiled.
6 Years later they felt a strong power heading to earth and it was pure evil So Goku and Vegeta Both hurryed to earth to gather every one and they new fighters Goku and Vegeta jr. Pan was shocked to see them agean goku told her they needed to wish Gohan, Piccolo, Goten, Trunks, And all the rest back for a great evil was heading this way so they went on the search for the Seven Mystic balls then new dragon balls that where made to make sure that the destution that happend befor never happend agean this ballz could only be use after every 10 years so When they finnaly got all the balls they wish for every on back to life and when they all found out they all had been revived they look at goku and thought it was a dream later found out it wasen’t and that they only had been wished back to protect the Earth One More time...........



Episode 2: Preparing for the worst

As the new threat inched closer towards the peaceful planet of Earth, Goku and Vegeta and the Jr's began to spar intensly to prepare for who ever or what ever was coming.... Goku threw a punch towards Vegeta face, Vegeta quickly countered, grabbing Goku's arm and slamming it into the ground. Goku powered up creating a small crater where he arm was, he then jetted up wards, Goku jr. following closely behind him. Goku jr. quickly turned super saiyan throwing a punch towards his great great grandpa. As his hands came inches from him Goku quickly turned turnning supers aiyan three and grabbing Goku jr.'s fist, throwing him high into the air. "No fair!" Goku jr. stopped himself, but it was to late, Vegeta jr. brought his hands over his head then spiked Goku jr. towards the ground. Goku jr. put his hands forwards firing a ki wave to slow the impact, he then quickly flipped back sliding into his fighting stance. The other three fighters dropped to the ground sliding into their own stances watching each other closely.
Meanwhile in town, Tempest was walking observing everything around him. He stopped for a second hearing a faint cry, he then sped off towards the source, as he arrived he slid to a stop finding four thugs attacking a girl around Tempest's age. "Get away from her," Tempest spoke calm, the thugs turning towards him, "What are you planning on doing about it?" A chuckle arose from the group as they flicked their wrist extending the blades on their knives. Tempest just smirked sliding into fight stance, "comon you want some?" The small gang begin to get angry so one charged ahead pulling his knife back then thrusting it forward. Tempest grabbed his arm then broke it at the elbow, he then followed up with a round house kick to his stomache. "Now all of you at once," he stood as the thug fell face forward into the pavement. The others then lunged at once swinging their blades blindly, Tempest dodged them with ease then jumped high into the air landing behind them, beside the girl, he looked over his should, "Are you alright miss?" The girl nodded looking at Tempest, thankful but a little freaked out by his amazing fighting skills. Tempest smirked then placing his hand on his to his side, his sheath materalized quickly, he then pulled out his katana, "You want more?" The thugs screamed and ran out of the alleyway, where they had just faught.
Back in the mountainous area Goku locked hands with Vegeta, their aura burst around them. They slowly sunk into a crater, while Goku jr and Vegeta jr exachanged attacks, high above the air. Vegeta smirked as his aura widened and he overpowered Goku send him into the air, Vegeta then quickly vanished apearing above Goku spiking him down, then appeared below him, ramming his knee into Goku's gut. Goku flipped back after the impact, "your better then last time Vegeta i'm impressed." Their aura disappeared, as Vegeta jr, hit the ground. "You win this time." He smirked looking up at Goku jr. who was doing a little dance in the air.


Episode 3: Tournament Tyranny

As they finish training intesfully they all decided to take a brake and enjoy the peacefull earth around them for as long as they can befor they have to protected mother earth once more.
Goku, Vegeta, And the Jr. went fishing and to talk and to get to know each other a little better, Goku and Vegeta jr. both wondered why they look so much like Goku and Vegeta.
Goku then explained the it is every genaration that something like that could happed Goku jr. look at Vegeta Smirking then stuck out his tong, Mean while Gohan, Goten and Trunks where talking about the things they missed out on well being dead any way.

Gohan sensed a simie Power Level comming towered them at a fast rate and as a Kid came walking bye Gohan Stud up and asked him to stop!!

The Kid turned in cunfushen Gohan then asked him who he was and the kid replyed ( I am Tempest I have live here for my whole life)
Gohan then asked him ( I sensed a high aura comming from u are u a) then Tempest said( yes i am a saiyan just like you Gohan i have been studying you and i know you are here to save the earth once more, You and the others are great heros and known for it)
After have a talk Gohan then sensed a even bigger power level comeing 10 min later Piccolo showed up after his training then they all set of to Goku and the others.

As they all got to gether have some tie and some sandwitch's Vegeta stud up in fury And said there is a exstreamlly strong Power comming to earth They all stud up and got ready for tommorow it could be the fight for there life.


Episode 4: The Battle Begins


Tempest stood at the edge of a cliff, looking out into the ocean, the suns rays glimmered over the water, as the new day began. "It's time." He turned slowly to see the others watching him silently. "The power's close, get ready for a big battle." He spoke in a calm voice looking into the sky as a pod broke into the atmosphere, the burning space pod cut threw the air towards South City. "No," Goku face looked worried but angered at the same time. His aura burst around him as he jetted off too the explosion the pod had caused by the impact, the other followed closly behind him. As they landed the pod's door slowly opened, steam rose from the pod as a figure stepped out, Goku looked at him with a shocked look. "Raditz I thought we killed you long ago!" Goku clenched his fist knowing he would be in for a greater battle now. "Baby brother, why are you acting so stubborn you should be glad I came back to kill you again," he turned to Vegeta, "prince Vegeta what are you doing? Why aren't all of them dead already?" Vegeta just leaned against rubble with his eyes closed. Tempest stepped foward, "umm Goku is he related to you?" Tempest had a curious look on his face looking at their faces, Goku and Raditz stared each other down then slid into fighting stance, everyone else slid into their stance also.
Vegeta jr. grew impatient with the staredown and quickly jetted towards Raditz, he quickly threw four punches towards his head, all Raditz did was smirk as the hits landed and did no damnage. He then grabbed Vegeta jr. by the head and swung him around slamming his head into the ground knocking him out, he stood back up kicking Vegeta jr's body to Goku. Goku jr looked at the damage done and then quickly flew over Goku's shoulder turning supersaiyan then begin to throw a barrage of kicks and punches towards Raditz. Raditz grabbed his leg during a kick then threw him into the air, "Double Sunday!" energy quickly gathered in the palm of his hands, Raditz then let off the blast flinging Goku jr towards Goku. Goku stepped to the side and grabbed Goku jr's gi, laying him down softly, "That's enough Raditz!" Goku's aura burst around him, as Vegeta turned to a super saiyan. Tempest watched in amazement at the two warriors. "Amazing," Tempest powered up white aura bursting around him, "Ready guys let the battle begin!"


Episode 5: Raditz's New Strength



The Battle Begins with Tempest blindly jumping into battle aginanst Raditz. Goku starts yelling at Tempest "NO YOU CANT HANDLE HIS POWER!"
Tempest turns Supersayian and Laughs at Raditz "You cant handle my power!"
Raditz just laughs at him and says "Alright kid i will give you an open shot."
Tempest begins to charge a Shadow Slash attack. Tempest "SHADOW........SLASH...............ATTACK!"
Tempest hits Raditz full force. A huge dust clound arises blinding everyone. When the dust clears Raditz is standing there dusting himself off and laughing. "Is that all youve got?"
Tempest wisely falls out of supersayian ands flys back with the rest of the group.
"Wow Raditz i never thought i would see u this strong." Vegeta says smerking. "But i am still stronger than you!" Vegeta as easy as flying goes SS4 blinding everyone with the bright yellow arua.
"Now let the real fight begin"
Could this be the ultimate test for Vegetas SS4 powers or will he fall just as the young Sayians did? FInd out in the next episode of Dragonball Xp.
Epidsode 6: A new fighter

Vegeta observed Raditz then powered down to normal, "you aren't worth my true power." Vegeta then smirked sliding into his fighting stance, Raditz chuckled then dashed towards Vegeta. As Raditz reached about five feet away, stopped suddenly as a blast came from rubble to their left, "what the hell!?" A boy around Tempest's age floated to the ground smirking, his red hair floated in the air as his white aura calmly flowed around him. "Hope I didn't miss the party," he smirked then looked at Tempest, "Long time no see Akto." Tempest smirked looking at his old friend. "Enough with the greetings time to do business."
Akto stared at Raditz then powered up, Raditz smirked floating away facing Akto. "Another pest huh? Bring it shrimp." Akto flew towards Raditz before Tempest had a chance to warn him about his power. Akto furiously threw punches at Raditz, but he dodged with ease, then grabbed his fist, and began to punch Akto in the stomache repeatedly. Tempest powered up and flew out to battle telling Goku and Vegeta to stay because no one else would get hurt. By this time Vegeta jr and Goku jr were up and waiting for their chance to attack.
Akto broke free of Raditz's grip flipping back, Tempest flew from behind kicking Raditz. "We will have to work as a team again." Akto smirked at the idea as he thrusted towards Raditz. Tempest and Akto attacked Raditz quickly watching each others back. After about a hour of fighting Raditz jumped back smirking, "You are pretty good when you are a team, but I will have to show you my new strength." Raditz clinched his fist as his hair flickered gold and spiked at the end, and electricity sparked around him. "I am a super saiyan two, now try your team attack again." Tempest glared at Akto then they both flew towards Raditz, each throwing a punch towards their opponent. Raditz dissapeared appearing beside Tempest grabbing him by the leg, he then swung him over his head into Akto quickly. "You will have to do better then that.
How will the new warriors be able to dil with this new power and why are the others waiting? Find out next time on Dragonball XP

Epidode 7: The art of fusion, Tempko is born

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Tempest and Akto stood quickly, "hit power is unreal, there is only one chance.." Akto began to breath heavily his aura bursting around him. "It's time to show you my true power!" his hair began to float upward flickering gold, electricity sparked around him as his eyes faded green with black pupils. Goku and Vegeta stepped forward, bursting into super saiyan four, "No it is our turn, Tempest take the jrs and Akto and teach them the fusion dance." Goku spoke in a calm but serious voice, Tempest nodded then began to float in the air, "Akto, we have a new technique to learn, he then motioned to the jrs to follow him and jetted away to a small mountain village. As they landed he immeditely began to explain the art of fusion. "Fusion is when two people combine to create a stronger being." His allies nodded as Tempest began to slowly do the fusion dance, "make sure your fingers are out or your really screwed." He then did it the other way to show how the two people would connect...
Meanwhile Goku and vegeta exchanged punches with Raditz, sparks can be seen for miles around. Vegeta quickly dodged a punch from Raditz then countered by pushing a ki ball into Raditz's stomach blasting him back. Raditz stopped himself only to be spiked down by Goku. "Your not so tough Raditz." Goku began to taunt Raditz, angering him. Raditz then stood to his feet smirking, "it is time to show you my true power!"
The sky began to darken as Raditz surpassed super saiyan three, "try your luck while i'm at my max." Raditz smirked motion to Vegeta to attack. Vegeta put a hand out and fired a blast into Raditz's chest. Raditz then looked surprised, "Is that all you got traitor." Raditz then flew at Vegeta grabbing him by his head and slamming him into a partly destroyed building, leaving a crater in the side of the rubble. Goku dashed towards Raditz only to be kicked in the side by his opponents left foot. "Now now now brother, it's not nice to hog me to yourself." Goku hit the ground spitting up blood, "Vegeta, are you ok?" Goku tried to stand but Raditz slammed him back down with his foot, causing him to return normal. Raditz then repeatedly stomped on Goku, shattering his ribs, turning to Vegeta, "the almighty prince has been reduced to this." Vegeta glared at Raditz his aura burst wider, realeasing him from the ruins. He then threw a punch at Raditz, landing it in his face. Raditz stared at the hit, "That all!" Raditz grabbed Vegeta's head and slammed it into his knee.
Raditz kicked them around for a few more hours, while Tempest and the others mastered the technique of the fusion dance. "Alright we have to hurry I feel two powerlevels dropping and one hasn't been altered." Akto nodded and burst into the air flying straight towards Raditz, Tempest flew in around the battle field to catch Raditz from the other side, and the jrs flew closly behind Akto. As the three reached, they quickly burst into super saiyans. Goku jr. looked at raditz, "Time to show you our new power!" Tempest came from the other side flying past Raditz, landing beside Akto. "Ready guys?" Vegeta jr. nodded standing a few feet to the side of Goku jr., "Fuuuuuuuuuuu-sion HAAAA!" they both yelled as their fingers made contact with each other, smoke then kicked up as a new warrior was made. Tempest burst into supersaiyan, and Akto nodded as the two reapeated the technique. Smoke kicked up as a new warrior was born, "Raditz your rain is over, I am Tempko, and that's Gogeta Jr. you will remember our name for a while."


episode 8

The dust cleared as the two new fighters can be seen. They both yell out at the same time "HEY RADITZ ITS TIME U FIGHT SOME REAL STRONG WARRRIORS!" Raditz starts to chuckle and says "You fools think you can take me well just try and we will see who the winner is."
Gogeta jr. rushes Raditz chatching him off gaurd and lands a knee right to raditz face followed by a marge of Ki blasts. Raditz flies backwards from the blast.
Gogeta jr. contiunes the attack by chasing after Raditz and uppercuting him sending him straight toward Tempko.
"Good job Jrs." Tempko says as he gets ready to attack Raditz. Raditz comes fliying toward Tempko at increadable speeds. Tempko starts to transform into SS2 not releasing his full power he is saving that for later.
"KA...........MA.............HA.............MA................HA........BOMB" Can be heard miles away as Tempko gathers energy for his blast. Secounds before Raditz would hit Tempko, Tempko unleashes his attack sending Raditz flying back down straight into the ground, creating a huge crater from which Raditz lie motion less.
Could this be the end of Raditz? Keep reading and find out in the next episode of Dragonball Xp

Eps.9: Last chance for survivel



Raditz is sitting up in the air taking a break something the z-fighters should not let him do. At this time Gogeta jr. finally lost there fusion state reverting back to Goku jr. and Vegeta jr.
Vegeta takes off powering up flying straight for Raditz attacking him full force, sending him fling straight for the ground. Raditz catches himself right before hitting the ground and starts to laugh.
"Whats so fuuny Raditz i am the Prince Of all sayians and u will knel before me for i am stronger than you!"
"You make me laugh Vegeta, you are only Prince in your little fantsy world. This is the real world wake up and feel my true power!"
Raditz slides into a power stance and begins gathering energy for his transformation. All falls silent......To be rudly disturbed by an explosion of raw untamed power from Raditz the explosion covered the whole earth creating a huge crater while at the same time thorwing Akto and Tempest's lifeless bodies 100 yards away from thebattle. The explosion also caused Goku, Vegeta , And the Jrs. to shield there eyes from the light Raditz was letting off from his Transformation.
"Well Raditz that was impresive but now lets see if all the show actually helped you any" Vegeta Slides into a power up stance and starts to draw energy from Goku and Vegeta jr. When he has all there energy inside him, he goes SSJ4 and waits for Raditz to emerge from his Energy cloud.
When Raditz emerges an hour has past Vegeta has gotin very restless. "Come on Raditz i know what your doing your putting up an energy field to give yourself time to rest from that beating you recevied from Tempko, Come on enough of the wait lets fight already!"
While all this is going on Akto and Tempest finally come too.
"Wow Temp we must have been beat up bad man i cant remember anything and how did we wind up all the way over here?"
"I dont know Akto i cant remember anything either.But looks like the battle is getting exciting."
"Ya lets go over there and check it out Temp."
Tempest and Akto fly over to the battle grounds and wait for the action to start. Goku fills them in on what has happened.
Finally Raditz steps out from his energy cloud and is finally ready to fight. "ok Vegeta are you ready to experince true Sayian power?"
Vegeta says nothing he just charges at Raditz ready for anything. The battle begins agian with a loud thundurs noise of kicks punches energy blasts and everything else they could hurt each other with.
They lock hands, There aruas combine making a huge energy field, almost enough energy to destroy the whole earth, Vegeta bangs his head with Raditz knocking Raditz out of hand lock.
"Well Vegeta i guess u are better at fighting than i thought. But you are still no match for me."
Easyly Raditz flies up to vegeta at increadable speeds and sends him hurling towards the ground, creating yet another huge crator. "See Vegeta you cant handle my power!"
"Akto, Tempest i have an idea. I want you two to fuse agian and use your full power and distract him as long as you can ok?" Goku asked them
"Ya we will do it goku" They both responded.
"I dont think so i wont let you two fuse agian!" Raditz flies right for Akto and Tempest to be blindsided by a Super Big Bang Attack from Vegeta.
"Vegeta you dirty rat i will take care of you now!"
"NOW AKTO AND TEMPEST THIS IS YOUR CHANCE FUSE NOW WHILE VEGETA IS DISTRACTING HIM" Goku was very adgutatied
Akto and Tempest flew backwards and got into the fusion pose.
"FU............SION....HA!"
A dust storm appears and Raditz stops attacking Vegeta to see the mistake he has just made.
From the smoke steps out Tempko, SuperSayian3 Tempko. "Alright Raditz its time for us to fight agian only this time the outcome will be diiferent!"
Tempko gets ready to attack Raditz and Raditz is gettinga alittle scared at the site of his new opponet.
Will Tempko have enough power to defeat Raditz and what is this plan of Gokus? Or will all of Earths heros fall to the power of Raditz? Find out in the next exciting episode of Dragonball Xp!


Epidsode 10: Super Powers Collide!
Raditz stared down Tempko down once more, "I underestimated you, these time make me bring out the heavy guns." Raditz smiked, "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" Raditz, yelled in pain as his yellow aura widened as white swirls appeared around him, "I call this my mystic transformation." His aura flared around him as Vegeta floated back to Goku, "do you think he will be able to defeat Raditz?" Vegeta had a serious tone in his voice, "No Vegeta he is just giving us time to charge up our attacks , jrs i need you to fuse and charge up a kamehameha at full strength, and Vegeta get powered to your max this will take every thing we have." Goku looked at his allies bursting into super saiyan four. Goku then bent his knees cupping his hands gathering energy, "hit it guys!" "Fu...sion HA!" Gogeta jr, was revived already charging a kamehameha wave, Vegeta smirked preparing a super big bang attack.
High above them Tempko swung a punch at the newly found power of Raditz. Raditz grabbed his fist and then threw one towards Tempko, Tempko dodged as he began to kick Raditz in the side. Raditz flew back firing five ki blast at Tempko. As the blast came closer Tempko faded away, leaving an image of himself in his place, "you have to do better then that Raditz." Tempko faded infront of Radtiz began to throw a series of punches, Raditz moved threw the air quickly dodging then began his offensive, Tempko dodged them quickly flying back. He then cupped his hands collecting ki, "Shadow bomb!" The ki turned black as sparks formed around it, as Tempko released his attack Raditz powered to his max, quickly reflecting the blast back at his opponent. Tempko barely dodge the blast watching Raditz closely, the blast let off a huge explosion sending Tempko forward a little, just enough for Raditz to gain the advantage. Raditz flew foward headbutting Tempko then kicked him in the gut, following up with a ki blast to his back.
As Tempko fell to the ground, he began to image the innocents that died from Raditz, "No, I can't let them down, I won't LOSE!" Tempko's aura burst widely causing a crater where he would have landed, "I have to give them time to charge up all the way." He then flew towards Raditz, his fist igniting in black energy. He then quickly threw punches around Raditz, causing small balls of ki to form slowly. "Raditz, how much hits do you think I just hit you with?" Tempko smirked watching his opponent, "None you fool you missed completely." Raditz began to laugh not noticing the balls of ki around him. "Wrong!" Tempko then swung his hands over his head then swung them down quickly, the balls then seemed to shoot small beams connecting to each other then inclosed on Raditz, " I like to call that my crystal cage." Radtiz smirked begining to streatch the cages as he extended his arms and legs out. He then fired a blast destroying the cage, he then dashed at Tempko disappearing infront of him. Radtiz appeared below him, grabbing hold of his foot begining to swing him around in circles. Raditz let go after a minute flinging Tempko into the side of a destroyed building. Tempko emerged his aura blazing.
Wil Tempko have enough strength to hold of Raditz or will the fusion wear off before the blast is ready, find out the stunning conclusion, of Dragonball XP!


Eps.11 part1: Raddiz Fate..

"Is that the best you got Raditz?" Tempko flies straight for Raditz arua blazing widley in the air, Tempko starts to throw punches and kicks super fast as to where Raditz cant even see them. Raditz takes blow after blow, blood flying from everywhere. "I WONT LET YOU DESTROY MY FRIENDS!!" Tempkos Aura grows bigger as his anger rises crating a massive amout of energy knocking Raditz backwards.
"Alright you little punk, You will pay for this!" Raditz gathers energy and flies at Tempko, throwing punches and kicks to learn that he has done no damage to Tempko.
"Come on Raditz...... Can u find me?" Raditz figuered out person he just attacked was a projection, not the real Tempko. "Raditz i can see you can you see me?"
Tempko comes out of no where and hits Raditz in the back with a full on Shadow beam.
"Alright im done fooling around its time for you die Tempko!" Tempko begins to laugh.
"You fool all this time and you still havent figuered it out. HAHAHAHA! Look above you Raditz this is my ultimate move it is called The SHADOW KAMAHAMAHA BOMB!"
Raditz looks above him to see the attack coming straight at him. "This is your end Raditz, you can not survive this!" Raditz prepares himself for the attack.
There is a huge explosion of power and energy flies around madly strangly right to the Jrs. and Vegeta and Gokus blast.
"Heh you missed Tempko. That was too close even for me but it hit your friends. Ironic you hit the people you wanted to protect! hahahaha."
"Wrong Raditz take another look." Smoke clears away from where Goku and the others where standing to revieal there attacks which had taken alot of Tempkos blast energy. The blast where almost done if fired now they would only hurt Raditz but not bad enough for Tempko to win. "Im only the beggining, prepare yourself Raditz we are sending you where you belong, straight to HFIL, Where the rest of the losers are!"
"I dont think so!" With saying that Raditz disappered and the reappered behind Tempko,"Double Sunday!" Raditz sends Tempko flying foward from the attack.
"Alright Raditz thats it!" About that time Tempko falls out of SSJ3 to return back to his normal looking fusion state. "What im losing energy oh no my Fuison must be wearing off!"
"Well well looks like its time for the great Tempko to die!" Raditz flies at Tempko and hits him in the gut knocking the wind from him then doing a chop right to Tempkos neck knocking him out cold. "I wont make the same mistake twice!" Raditz begins charging a Sauterday Blast attack aiming it stragiht at Tempko.
"BYE BYE TEMPKO!" With an evil look on his face, Raditz began to fire when a ki blast came from no where.
Temko Jumped back then started smirking saying.
"I will take care of you in a second!" Right before he fired his blast he remembered out vegeta and goku. "Forget This, I am going to kill you now"
Then im going to kill your friends.HAHAHAHAHAHA!"
Raditz fired the blast straight at Goku and the rest of the people, but right before it hit, Tempko flew over in front of it and started to push it back at Raditz. He pushed it back at Raditz but Raditz dodged the blast and had forgoten all about Goku and the Other's.
Vegeta sent Tempko a message though telepathy saying "All right me Kakarot and the Jrs. are ready.Tempko relized that Yajarobie was standing over him then handed him a senso bean, Tempko grabed it then quikly eaten it being fully charge up to fight agean. Vegeta then said" Hold him off for a sec hold him or something Where ready now GO!!!!!"
Tempko flies right at Raditz but jumps over him grabing him and holding him so he cant move.
"You little pest, what are you doing?!"
"Time to die Raditz!" Can be heared from all the fighters
"ULTIMATE BIG BANG ATTACK!"
"ULTIMATE KAMAHAMAHA!"
"BIG BANG KAMAHAMAHA!"
"WHAT NO NOT AGIAN!"
All the blast hit Raditz full force. There is a very loud noise caused from the blast hitting each other and exploding. The shockwave from the blast was enough to blow all the fighters back 100 yards. The light from the explosion was blinding.
When everything cleared Raditz nor Tempko could be seen yet Raditz power was completly gone and Tempko was still there.
Right before the blasts hit Goku Instanttransmission and saved Tempko from the blast. Raditz body lie on the ground lifeless, dead completly.
All the fighters where celeabrating at the victory. Now it was time to give him a proper barial.
Find all this out in part 2


Part 2:The Celebration

The battle field was vacent, nothing but waste land and craters from the battle that had just taken place. Raditz body layed lifeless on the ground. The z-fighters where sitting on the ground taking a break from the battle they endured. Tempko and Gogeta jr split back into there one selfs. Akto looked around at the site with a smerk on his face "We did it, we beat Raditz!"
All the others started to laugh and just sat there staring into the waste land they had created from the battle. It came time for the fighters to go to the look out and get the Dragonballs which they had stored there. They woke the dragon and asked him to repair the earth back to her formor self. Akto stood there and looked in awe and said to himself out loud "I wish we could have a party or something im bored." And with that Shinron's eyes glowed red and the dragonballs scatered. After the skys cleared, Aktos wish was granted and the party began. With any ritual they took Raditz body and gave him a true warriors ceramony. Theu put his body in the flames and partied with there friends. Goku was alittle saddend that he had to kill his brother but he knew it was the only way. The celebration contiuned though the night. Akto and Tempest where sitting under some trees talking about teenage boy stuff, the Jrs where running around playing, ChiChi and Bulma where cooking dinner, and as allways Goku and Vegeta where sparing, not hurting each other just messing around for fun.
Deep in space away from the happyness of the party on earth there is two sayian space pods flying toward earth, and the occupants of the space pods looked very familer. Kepp watching to find out what happens next on Dragonball Xp

Eps. 12: A new guardian

Three Years later...
"It has been three year since we had deafeted Raddiz and made 2 new friends said Goku"
Vegeta shrugged then started to laugh then said, "Kakarot we still need to settle are score that training we had before was nothing"
Goku replyed "alright but before we have our battle, where is piccolo I thought he was going to be here today."
Gohan then said "Piccolo said he was going to denda's look out to do some business." Goku smiled then told Gohan to grab his shoulder, Vegeta did so as well they then set off to dende's look out to find Piccolo and dende chatting in a small hut.
One hour later Piccolo came out and anounced that he was going to be the new guardian of Earth.

Goku sighed then laghed, Piccolo stared at Goku and then yelled, "I am not kidding Goku why is it to hard to under stand about me becoming a guardian of Earth?!?" Goku soon stop then said he was sorry.
Vegeta looked at Goku and said, "Lets go, let him do his thing and let us have are battle."

Vegeta smirked then they both left to a desert like terrain with no one around to start there battle to see which was more superior.

Keep watching this bored to see what happens next on DRAGONBALLXP!

Eps13: Vision or reality

Goku an vegeta had finnaly got to there fighting grounds where they both got into there fighting stance and powered up ready for a fierce battle Goku took the first run at Vegeta throughing many punch's Vegeta then quikly turned Super Saiyan Jin 4 then dodged Goku and round house kick him right in the gut Goku fell too his nees then stud up and said. That was fun Vegeta now let have a real fight Goku quikly turned Super saiyan Jin 4 and once agean thrusted at Vegeta.
Vegeta Powered up a blast and before Goku hit him Vegeta Vanished and appeared behind Goku doing a Super Gatlick Gun blowing Goku straight through a 200ft Mountain then Goku quikly reacted and did a Instentransmission whitch appeared behind Vegeta and did a Kamahamaha wave.

Vegeta sinced Goku comming and counter with a Big Exsploshion Between the 2 Blast it created a crater ove 400ft and 100 ft whide, Goku quikly without staling nee'd Vegeta in the face then spiked him to the ground but out of no where Vegeta power up a BIG BANG ATTACK!!

And shot it at Goku getting a clear shot to the chest Goku droped out of the air with smoke trailing him.

Befor Goku and Vegeta got to set there next attack a Saiyan space pod had hit earths atmosphear and had 1 min till it hit earth it was moving fast and then hit the ground creating a serg of energy and fire all around them.
soon came a nuther space pod then hit then ground, Vegeta and Goku look at eatch other puzzled, then went to see who or what it was.

The pods open and what they saw could not be true, only a dream but they where right in front of what cant be real it was there father's Bardock, and King Vegeta.
Vegeta Looked in cunfusment and said( No NOoooooo! This cant be real i saw Freeza destroy Planet Vegeta) King Vegeta said( No Planet Vegeta had been remaid we whould like for u too, to come and be with you own race once agean and you Vegeta can take your place as Prince Once agean.

Eps.14: The Choice

Goku and Vegeta and there father's sat down to talk about the things they missed out on all these years.
Bardock was tense, Goku laghed alot.
King Vegeta had some humer but Vegeta did not it was kinda funny as you think about it, As the night drawn on Goku had interduce there fathers the there family Gohan, Goten, Trunks, and all there friends they all where so happy together ecept one person.

Vegeta could not understand how there father's where alive right know and why they would want them to go back to planet Vegeta after all these years of living on earth.
King Vegeta stud up then said( Vegeta, Goku in a calm but stricked tone it is time to decide are you going to come back with us or stay here)
Gohan and everyone els paused for a split sec.....

(Dad said Gohan in a confusing tone ....what is he talking about) Goku then said King Vegeta can you get us a moment to decide ) Goku and Vegeta went in to a small hut to talk .
1 hr later they came out anouncing that they where going to go and to see if that is where they belong King Vegeta then said( Ok then it is time to go at the break of dawn)

Gohan, tempet, and akto snuck off makeing a plain then saw a capsul corp pod and got it ready to set off but befor hand set a trans metter on the pod the two saiyan's where going to use then went to sleep!!!

Morning hit and King Vegeta, Bardock, Goku, And Vegeta all set off to the New Planet Vegeta where they would see if they truely belong to that planet.

 

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