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Its good but the stockings really bug me. You can hardly see the yellow stripes on them, so the white really throws it off for me. Honestly I would just ditch them...

Your color distribution also kinda bugs me.
See how on your head you have mostly black, then yellow in the 2nd biggest quantity, and then only little bits of orange? You should follow that all the way through...
So maybe find a longer black tie to cover up more of the yellow shirt.. or even a black tavern wench corset. (or cincher!)
... Then you've got the g-lol skirt and the nitemare parasol.. which, overlapping like that, kinda bugs me. Is there a way to angle the parasol so it's pointing to your feet instead of all horizontal like that? Or maybe I'm just too a**l. sweatdrop Although honestly, I'm being overly picky, it's fine.

I like how the superior form adds that tiny bit of orange to your hip/leg area and breaks up the black a bit.
But maybe you could try to break it up even more by layering some orange shorts underneath the skirt. I know the grecian shorts are really good for that.. maybe even one of the swim trunks too.

But then... your legs.
Like I said, I would just ditch the stockings because it adds white to it.
If you take my advice and add the grecian shorts, you could then go and layer some of those Snug Leggings to add some black.. then orange class socks, with black jenny shoes and some egyptian anklets to even it all out....

Well...
here's one edit I did, it's not that great because I only spent a minute on it but I tried to choose some within price-range items to balance out the color a bit.



...But then again. xD
yoru current avatar is fine. XDD
6/10.

No. The yellow bow on Gaia is too... YELLOW. The other yellows you have are golden.. the bow would just look out of place.