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 Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 7:52 pm
Good shots. I like the third the most.
My advice - work with the grey levels more. The first doesn't have enough contrast and seems too flat. Second is a great image but i feel that certain spots could be darker (aswell as the wall, it seems to skin toned - should burn the wall in to get a tad darker. The subject will pop more). The third is a great shot, Good contrast and color BUT i think the white around the hands and bracelets is a little much.
Nice photos regardless. :]
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:20 am
The first look grace 3nodding . Light is where it really need. Pleasant color tones. Right (at my sight) emotional pose. Next two I cant catch. %) I'm sorry.
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 1:55 pm
To be honest I find all your photos really flat, cliche, and poorly composed.
Like if you surf through deviantArt's most recently posted stuff, or the popular photography section, you find SO MANY photos like this - girls standing against a wall in a poorly lit room with something written on or stuck to whatever part of their body they are choosing to bare.
I get the idea you have behind these, but I think you need to communicate them in a better way, not something so obscenely literal.
In general it's just boring, from idea to composition to exposure.
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