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 Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 4:57 pm
Here's one.
Thank You C.J.
For all you've done.
I felt so saaaad back then
I used to shun those who I'd call my friend
I thought the pain would never end
Now I'm placed, enveloped to send
I can live and lie, alone
64, 28, and home
I can see that I'm not a drone
With my fate and my love in stone
I remember when I shoved and crossed
Lied, as I wasn't one to be scoffed
And I didn't care who got hurt
As I'd end up the one they'd desert
Then I'd sigh, in pain
All of my efforts up till now, in vain
The exit I found would drain
My spirit til I was insane
I always felt I was just so different
Thought I flew, during my descent
They tracked me down, from my dead scent
I'd hurt those I cared for, now I lement
I kept on pushing, never taking
Never really stole, I tried this making
Cold and alone, my head slept shaking
The bonds with my loved were always breaking
The odds in my favor, yet never staking
Risks became fear, my legs were quaking
The chances flowed in, yet never raking
I became a shut in, god always forsaking
For I, there is nothing to just no winning
Trapped and confused, the world just spinning
Layed alone by the fire, the embers kindling
Really just hoped that my life was ending
But now I'm different, Dawning of a day
The love of my life did say she'd stay
And even though we're so far away
She promised she come to me someday
And nobody cared for me so true
I feel like I'd do what I'd never do
Nothing can split this "one" into two
So right now all I can do is thank you.
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 8:04 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:27 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:30 pm
yeah my best one tht i made this year ended up getting deleted unfortuently
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:37 pm
That must suck.........
Too bad you cant remember.
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:39 pm
Out of sorts
Quiet, the day is gone. The day is gone.
Pushing you away again. But you’re not the only one.
The day is almost over. But I can see the shining sun.
I try to reach your hand, but this day is almost done.
I’m tired. You keep getting taken away from me.
You told me that being friends was our destiny.
Now stop it, cause I told you to, you’re making me blue.
You know I want the best for you, for one I need it too.
You give too much, without getting any back.
From this the reddest of hearts will turn black.
There’s so much I’ve learned about you, oh so much.
But it’s time for the beginning of the end’s mourning touch.
It looks to me, that I’m about to lose you.
I trust that you believe this love of yours is so true.
It’s time for a new start, were gonna begin again.
But at the end, I hope that we will still be friends
The right to move.
The right to fly.
The right to love.
The right to live.
I’m feeling so down.
You can do it right for you
But it wont be right for me way deep down
I hunger for your wishes.
But this other sticks around.
I dislike my actions vicious
But I cannot stand this anymore,
For us to coexist in harmony,
Somebody has to leave,
Maybe, oh maybe,
Maybe it’s me………
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 6:27 am
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 10:25 am
This was one I did a while back for my GF.
_Every person has a chance
to love someone and dance
In the light, alright, uh-huh
And though the heart inside of me
yearns for her, but yet she
had to leave, and kissed me
inside, well well, oh well
I guess it's my destiny, to stand again and fall,
alone, my tears to ball, away
and shut you out, I think too much
wonder if you know me anymore
yet we've never met in life, not yet
and yet again you've filled me up with life
again
and though I love you, I still feel so empty
inside
Though the dank and dark is deep
my heart is yours to keep
and even If you're sick of me
you've filled me up to the brim
I'm not lonely anymore
I never plan on ever hurting you
again
again
again
though I didn't mean it the first time, again
I know you're sick of all the hurt, again
and everyone has pushed you aside
to make way, for the new one
but you're my only one
I guess I just think to much
again
again
again
again, and again
but what does that mean anyway?
It's time for me to change
It's time for me to shine
I have to make me better
for you, again
It wont be able to work the way I am
so far away, and yet
I'm not selfish, I've just never felt this way
before, and yet, so far away
And I need you all the more, the more
And It won't work, the way I am
It's time for me to act
It's time for me to shine
It's time for me to give you all I am
again
the way I was, no more
the way I am, again
I need to change
I need to shine
we love each other
To know you're mine
To show you're mine
I love you
It's just gonna take a long
long time
a long long time_
......................This is a poem I just made up...............for somebody I really care about..........I really care about.............
.........I hope you read this, my sweet.......before anything happens............and if it doesn't make sense, to you, the tell me.
I think too abstractly improving.........It's just raw Ideas thrown out.........all of which just happen to float............
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 5:31 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 7:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 1:04 pm
Thanks.......
.....though I can say it was the "GayesT" poem I've written for a girl......
.....I still like it though.
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 6:07 pm
yeah..... i dont think its gay
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:21 pm
That's not what I mean........
When I wrote it, I was listening to a song.
The poem picked up the tempo of the song, and the song was George Micheals' song in his last album, about how he came out of the closet, and was having fun with all the other "freaks", so he said in the song.
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 8:25 pm
:shock TMI TMI TMI TMI TMI TMI TMI TMI
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 7:20 am
Yeah......... redface
I just happened to like that song. I'm not gay or bi or anything, I just liked it.
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