The first two pictures need more definition and clarity. The first is good for a first rough draft, but you need to build on it. Make the colors crisper and bolder, no more white background should be seen, the texturing process should come as you create depth. The second picture needs less blurring effects. I'm not saying to get rid of it altogether, but vary between sharp smooth edges.
The third is coming along nicely. Lettering, ideally, is in the very central part of the bubble, and always Center-align the text. The "Hey! Watch It!" can still pop out of the circle, but there shouldn't be that awkward white gap in between. Use spell check! It totally helps if you write out all the dialog in Microsoft Word first before pasting it in a comic. Example, you wrote "jsut" instead of "just" in the third bubble of the last panel. It's one of those things the brain doesn't always process on it's own.
Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 8:02 am
Thank you very much for the critique I'll take that into effect as soon as possible and plus fix that damn spelling error. This is part of a Bridgman study that I couldn't upload last night since the scanner refused to cooperate. I'll work back on the elf picture and the dsg pic. As for the bubble I'm still experimenting with text and speech bubbles. Anywho here's the pic, more to be uploaded later.
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 10:51 am
I like your skulls !
Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:34 pm
nice. i like it!
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Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:59 pm
Thank biggrin! But I much prefer crit to praise so please do if you can. Any ways, here's the next batch of stuff, I don't think that a nadshot will really offend anyone(not that you can really make out anything lol razz. Let me know if you want it removed and I'll place a sensor bar, in any case I'll put up a NSFW tag in my thread title.
Anywho on with the show, and that chibi was done at like, 3:00 AM XD.
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