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Psychotic Maniacal Sanity
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 Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 11:51 am
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 12:11 pm
I have to say, I thought that was a great story. I don't know, I tend to shy away from teen angst but this one was really good...and not even as you say your best work. I hope you do post again, after all its not whether you win or lose. Winning's nice of course, but as long as you know you did well that's all that matters, and this was good.
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 3:22 pm
Apperantly, you write the things I love to read biggrin I felt really close to Amy when I read this and, I must say, if it is published, I'll read it!
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 10:31 am
Yippee!! ^^ I promise to post the finished piece once it's been sent in 3nodding
I'm really surprised you like it! It's my first.. Teen story... I guess =^-^=
The witchy's happy too.
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The good thing is that the seven winners get it published, but they also win a state of the art laptop for their story work!! Cool... I wish.. xD Oh well, a girl can dream, no?
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Psychotic Maniacal Sanity
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Psychotic Maniacal Sanity
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 10:37 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 9:43 pm
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Psychotic Maniacal Sanity
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 3:31 am
You know what you said about the ending? Well I totally agree with you, I hated it. I am going to concentrate on a whole new ending, but after the Nanowrimo... I'm just too lazy to get started yet n_n
Anyways, thanks for the comment... You really think it could be published? I thought it was total BS... -cough-
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 3:10 pm
I think it sould seriously be published, but yah, work on the ending first. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:45 pm
Yeah, the ending lost me kinda. It was... weird. Not bad, really. Just weird. Anyways, I happened to notice just small things... Like the word stationary... It was supposed to be stationery. I know they're basically the same and it doesn't matter too much, but in meaning, they're different. Stationery is paper, and stationary means, "not moving".
I only pick up on small things like that, I don't know why. confused
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