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 Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 6:45 am
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 3:35 am
Why are tears crying Alone?
My satire.
Unobligatory passion and drunk, wait, intoxicated people driving,
And um...My poem should win first place.
I'm cutting um, something and you don't care!
You don't care.
You don't care.
You don't care.
I don't really care either.
So I'm gunna, um, suicide someone and be cutting them and uh...
Your eyes are raining!
And I gotta get this poem longer.
'Cuzn it's angsty.
Ooooh.
Yeah.
Something about the ages...
Doo doo daah.
And ham, hamsters.
Yeah Oh.
Nobody cares about drunk drivers cutting suicidially.
And their eyes are raining, um, blood.
Ooh.
Fin.
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 10:25 am
Nice
Heres 'mine'
'My life is a mess,
just figured everyone should know.
I don't want pity
I don't even care
I am apathetic
Poetry should have feeling,
I have a thesaurus,
which with have to do instead.
My tears are falling like bowling balls
and landing on my toes
ouch.'
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 7:19 pm
my poemI always thought cutting and suicide were different things.
There are some differences,
You might not be the one cutting.
It might have been that possed tree you hit while you were drunk. fingood poem dudes
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Parari~Flight~ Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 2:29 pm
xp i'm inherently bad at this...
my eyes are pouring rain
rain of devastation
this rain draws a red hue
the frozen sunset reflects upon my loneliness.
the knife in my hand flashes into being
the person beside me could care less
his eyes focused on the treacherous road above
but his heart going straight into the reaches of my dreams
i wonder... what will happen first?
will my knife strike first, or technology?
and then all goes black.
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Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 3:31 am
Wow, someone actually made a poem that doesn't appear satyrical. Hey! That's a good complicated word! Keep writing. It's interesting.
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Parari~Flight~ Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:22 pm
Jehosaphat Wow, someone actually made a poem that doesn't appear satyrical. Hey! That's a good complicated word! Keep writing. It's interesting. haha. thanks! I would keep writing in this thread--it's fun-- but I haven't been feeling emo enough lately... xd
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:43 pm
N one would get mine they read it and say What the f---k!?!
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 3:05 pm
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