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 Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:00 pm
Another idea popped into my head today xd (Why do I always think things up when I'm traveling in the car? sweatdrop (Btw-Toshi means 'mirror image' which I think fits the character quite well 3nodding as for Kato, it's just a common last name xd )
*~*Chapter 1*~*
Another cloudy and gloomy day awaited fifteen year old Toshi Kato as she walked to school clenching an umbrella by her side in case of rain. She had shoulder length, dark dyed hair and blue-ish green eyes that could stand out in a crowd of people. Her skin was fairly pale from not being in the sun often and she wore strange clothes, usually a lblack and grey jacket and a some long black pants that were way to long for her. Toshi didn't come from a rich family at all so she had to buy discount clothes if she went shopping. She also had very low self esteem which caused her to avoid people there fore avoiding heart break. Every so called 'best friend' she had in the past deserted her for the popular crowd. The poor girl just didn't fit in at all. She even dyed her hair black to try to fit in with the girls around her. Before that she had beautiful brunette hair. But you know what they say, people are never satisfied with the way they look right? Toshi looked at the school in front of her with determined eyes. "Today I will make friends! I won't be shy and emo anymore." Laughing a bit at what she said she walked down the halls and into the class room. The class stared at her as she silently made her way to the seat at the back of the class.What are they thinking? I bet they all hate me! The teacher began the lesson for that day as she slowly sunk into her seat pulling out her note book and started to take notes. By the time the break came she was starved. Toshi's stomach growled.No I don't need to eat. It will just go to my hips! There wasn't a shortage of food at home. Her parents have always encouraged her to eat a snack after school, but when she saw those models on tv she would think to herself "I bet they don't eat snacks!" and began to only eat small bits. It was getting unhealthy for her! During the rest of the break she sat down on her bench and quietly read, hoping some one might speak to her. Everyday it was the same thing over and over.
"Are you going to see that movie tomorrow?"
"I got front row seats for the concert!"
"Hey pass the ball over here!"
Clenching the book tears rolled down her pale cheeks. Am I invisible?
All she really needed was a friend. "I wish they'd all go away.. just go away." she cried. Just then she heard some thing different.
"Hey, Did you here about that site? Jigoku Tsushin?"
"Oh yeah! Isnt it that one site where you type in the name of the person you want revenge on at midnight?"
"Oooo sounds scary! And then the Hell Girl comes right?"
The small crowd of girls chattered. Toshi took an interest in this this mysterious Hell Girl. "Midnight huh?" she smirked. "We'll see who gets revenge now."
(To be continued....)
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:53 pm
*~*Chapter Two*~*
Once she got home, Toshi locked herself in her room like any other day sitting at the computer. "Sweetie, aren't you going to tell me how your day was?" her mother asked slightly knocking on the door. "It was ok! I just want to be alone,alright?" she replied furiously typing something on the keyboard. Her mother opened the door and hugged her, "I just wish you would spend some time with me. I'm worried about you!" Toshi shook her head. "Mother I'm just fine. Now if you'll let me I would like to continue writing in my journal." The woman sighed. "I miss when you used to call me mommy." Closing the door she sat down at the kitchen table with her husband. "Dear, I'm worried about our little girl." He sighed, "Don't worry I'm sure she'll be back to herself in no time. The doctor told us she's not going through anything serious." Later on Toshi stared at the clock patiently waiting for the clock to strike midnight. "Eleven fifty-nine. Only a few more s-" the site appeared before her as she started thinking of names to type in. "That Yuki Ito never speaks to me. Neither does..." She started typing in multiple names quickly before the minute was up. Entering she waited for the Hell Girl to appear before her and save her from her 'terrible life'. Her cell phone vibrated, could she have a text? No one ever texted her! Opening the phone her eyes widened. "Access granted?" Behind her stood Enma Ai, the Hell Girl she has been waiting for. She appeared to be around twelve. She had long black hair, pale skin, and bright red eyes. "You summoned me?" Ai asked. Toshi was speechless. "I-I had no idea it wold work! You don't know how happy I was!" falling to the ground she started to bow to her. Ai sighed, "No please don't do that. You still haven't made a deal with me yet. Toshi found herself on a hill surrounded by eternal twilight. Her eyes lit up looking about her. Three other people stood next to Ai. The first was an elderly man with a red scarf around his neck. The second was a handsome young man mabey a year or two older than her, his dark hair covered one of his eyes. And the third was a woman who wore geisha attire. Her hair was in a messy up-do,but it was still beautiful.
Still in awe Toshi stared at each one. "Now.",Ai continued getting full attention of the girl, "Wanyudo, could you please?" The elderly man then turned into a straw doll with a red string around his neck. "If you really seek vengeance-" she was cut off my the woman. "Miss I think your forgetting something?" she stood in front of Toshi along with the rather good looking boy. "What is your reason for this?" the woman asked her. Toshi looked down. "Well, it's just I'm always so lonely. I have no friends and ever day when I go to school people ignore me! They all hate me!" tears started to form in Toshi's eyes. "They all hate me because I'm ugly and weird. The boy chuckled, "Well that doesn't make any sense. Do you think this might all be in your head?" Ai nodded. "I think you might be right, Ren. Miss Kato, you are bringing this on your self. No one is doing anything wrong you just think they are." She shook her head. "No! They all hate me I can tell! No one speaks to me and-" cut off my the geisha woman her mouth seemed to be zipped shut. "Look sweetie, they're right. Your bringing this on yourself. Now let her the finish the sentence please."
Ai looked at the girl. "She is hurting,but I'm still not sure." Turning to Toshi she tried to compromise. "I can't make the deal with you because no one is causing this. But I will do one thing. That is if you keep your end of the deal." Toshi nodded having her mouth still zipped shut. "My companions and I will watch these next few days to see what's really going on. If it is self infliction then you may never use my website again, even if it's a crisis. If some one is causing you pain I'll give you the option to send their soul to Hell. Do I make myself clear?" The woman un-zipped her mouth giving Toshi speech again. "Alright. If that's the way you want it fine." she sighed. In a blink of an eye she was back in her room sitting on her bed.
Tomorrow was going to be interesting.
(To be continued.....)
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Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 4:53 pm
*~*Chapter 3*~*
Walking down the side walk she remembered the chilling words Ai said. Some how she had to prove that everyone was against her so they could finally get what they deserved,but what if she couldn't? Was she really bringing this on herself? All these thoughts were speeding around in her head. Opening the school doors and walking down the hall Toshi did as she normally would every day. Keeping her head down staring at the ground she clenched her hand with the other making her way to the locker. Still no one asked what was wrong,as always.Oh no! I forgot my make up! She thought rummaging through the messy locker.Toshi felt a tap on her shoulder.Mabey some one is gonna say good morning! Instead it was one of Ai's companions....the handsome one at that! "Gah! I- good morning..?" Toshi nervously mumbled staring at her sneakers. He slightly chuckled, "Is good morning a question now? I think some one has a self esteem issue." Leaning back against a locker he stretched out and yawned. "So does anything interesting happen at this school? What's your reason for even summoning the Miss in the first place?" Is he trying to question my motives? The nerve of some people! Toshi pouted at what he said crossing her arms. He just stood there still smiling. "What's your name anyway?" he asked trying to get a closer look at the girl. "It's Toshi." she blankly replied.
(to be continued....)
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 5:41 pm
*~*Chapter 4*~*
"Toshi eh?" he chuckled, "That explains alot." She just stared down at her feet nervously. "Look if your going to make fun of my name-" Paused by him she learned to keep her mouth shut. "Who said I was making fun of your name? It's pretty cute." Toshi hid her blushing face in her locker pretending to look for something. "Umm..where did I put my books?" she fakely mumbled. The boy laughed. "Your books are right next to you!" handing her the books he turned around and started to walk away. "Hey wait! Toshi tried to catch up to him. "I didn't get your name!"'
He smiled, "It's Ren Ichimoku. Ptff.. I can't believe you forgot me from yesterday." She giggled slightly, "But I didn't!" Sarcasm made her laugh for a strange reason. Rinnnng~! The bell started to ring for the first class. "Well," Ren sighed, "Looks like I better hit the books." Toshi stared in disbelief. "W-what? Your in my class?!" Before she could get a reply he vanished. More like ran down the hall to the class room. Sprinting to class she started to think. Wait a second..he must be at least a year or two older than me! How the hell is he in my class? Bang! She went face first into a wall and fell flat on her bum. Recovering from the fall she limped to the door only to go right back into 'shy mode' Taking a seat at the back of the room she noticed a certain some one sitting right next to her. It was none other than Ai herself dressed in a sailor uniform, tapping a pencil against her desk. Toshi sweat dropped.Ok how is a twelve year old in my class?! Wh-what's going on here? "Attention class!" A voice called from the front, "Your teacher became ill this morning so I'm substituting for the next two weeks." Toshi turned her head to see that the substitute was that geisha woman from yesterday. I guess Ai wasnt kidding when she said that she and her companions would be watching over me the next few days...in this case weeks!
(to be continued......)
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 3:18 pm
OOO this is cute Neji-chan! 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 5:04 pm
Awww thanks whee
I'lltry to add a new chapter when I can sweatdrop I still need to think about what happens next..wont anyone notice a creepy girl with red eyes at the back of the class? eek
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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 6:07 pm
*~*Chapter Five*~*
Just then Ren entered the room with that adorable smile on his face that Toshi just found so cute, but would never admit it. "Class," the woman said, "This is my helper Ren. If your having trouble on a certain problem and I'm not available, he'll help you." Almost in unison the girls started to giggle.
"He's hot!"
"Now I'll have to play dumb~hehe!"
Toshi sighed. Well I guess he'll have no problem blending in,but what about Ai? She glanced at the red eyed girl blankly staring into infinity.You think they wont notice anything supernatural about her?! Everyone continued to go about things they way they normally would, well except for most of the girls squealing over Ren. Pulling out her Math book Toshi started working and trying not to notice Ai staring at her.Does she ever blink?She thought looking back at her. "Are you having trouble,miss?" Ren tapped her shoulder. Toshi blushed panicking a little. "N-no I'm doing f-fine thank you..!" He smiled looking at her book. "Well it looks like you haven't finished that problem or that one or that one. Are you sure you don't need help?" Some of the girls crowded around her in envy. "Excuse me...Ren? I'm having trouble on this problem,could you help me?" a girl asked. He tapped Toshi's head. "Sorry I'm helping Toshi-chan at the moment. I'll help you right after." Toshi's face turned red. T-Toshi-chan..?she seemed to melt in her seat.The entire class time he pretended to help her with the math problem,not really knowing what it was. He wasn't really a human after all so how should he know?
~Ringggg! The bell rang and it was time for the break. This time Toshi-chan wouldn't be alone. She had some what 'friends' now. If you could call it that. It's like she barely met Ren but she was already falling for him. Toshi was still a bit frightened by Ai though. Walking down the hall she saw the petite figure of Ai following her without a word. She really was being watched! Turning around she decided to speak first.
"Hello?"
To be continued...........
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:51 pm
*~*Chapter Six*~*
Ai stared on at the poor, now shivering in fear Toshi with no reply. An awkward silence rang on throughout the hall.It must have been the longest five minutes of her life. The red eyed girl nodded turning around and disappeared. Other students walked through the hall glancing in shock at Toshi's pale, even paler face. It's not clear whether her expression was 'Wtf?' or 'Omg!' she was practically lifeless! "Toshi are you alright?" Ren tapped her shoulder. "Ah! Stay back demon girl!" she shrieked pushing him away. "Demon girl? I'm guessing you ran into the miss haven't you?" he chuckled.
Toshi turned red from her terrible mistake. "Uh, I'm sorry..I thought you were..umm.." Staring at her sneakers, her 'deep thinking' came into action. Oh great! I thought he was the Hell Girl. He probably thinks I'm a geek now. Mabey I should escape..? No! He might tell her I called her a demon girl and she'll send me to Hell! Stupid karma! Gulping she decided to make a run for it anyway.Toshi sprinted down the hall to the gymnasium, it was safe there!
"So is this girl as strange as the miss claims her to be?" the elderly man asked Ren who was trying not to laugh. "S-she's defiantly up there, Wanyuddo." The two talked for a while until they heard a loud crash.The 'geisha woman' came out of the class room practically steaming in anger. "Eh? What's wrong, Onna?" Ren asked. She grunted and plopped herself onto the floor. "One boy asked me my age. You know what he guessed?!"
"No,but I'm sure you'll tell us." Wanyuddo sighed thinking 'There she goes again'.
"Fifty five! I'm not that old! I didn't even have a grey hair when I died. I was young and beautiful, not a shriveled up old woman!" Onna continued on until interrupted by Ren. "When did you die? B.C. or A.D?"
" I'm guessing B.C.. although her bones are quite preserved." Wanyuddo laughed.
Meanwhile while the two were beaten to a pulp by Onna, Toshi was hiding in the girl's locker room afraid to move. I know what will brighten my spirits.she thought. Pulling out an ipod from her jacket pocket she plugged the earphones in as quickly as possible. It was a gift from her fourteenth birthday her very favorite. Turning up an upbeat tune, her head swayed back and forth.All her worries always faded away when it came to music. It was her escape from the world. Humming along to the song she failed to notice the locker room was now full of girls watching her 'dance' if you could call it that. "Ummm excuse me?" a girl spoke up, "Could I listen? I've never used an ipod before." Toshi froze. Was some one talking to her?
(to be continued...)
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 5:39 pm
*~*Chapter Seven*~*
"Umm.. ok." Toshi said slowly handing the girl the ipod. Hey..isn't she one of the girls who ignored me before?she thought. Mabey they're using me for what I have. I can't feel comfort..I can't! I wont let that happen again..! Snatching the ipod from the gir'ls hands she ran out of the locker room as fast as she could looking for a place where no one could find her. Tears streamed from her eyes. No one could ever care about her. There has to be a fault in every relationship that can make it crumble. Not paying attention to where she was going, she slammed into a wall. At this point the only thing that hurt was her heart. Toshi just sat there crying as if there was no hope in her life at all. "Go..away..just go away.." she sobbed. Thunk! She felt a hard basketball hit her in the back of the head. "H-hey! Leave me alone!" she sniffled looking behind her. Ren was standing there with a cross looking face much the opposite of the smile he had on. "What's wrong with you?!" he yelled. The tears started to gush even more now. "I-I don't need you asking what's wrong!" she sobbed. " I wasn't asking that! What's wrong with YOU is what I asked. You just had the chance to solve your problem of being alone and you just dash off like an idiot?!" He sat down in front of her just waiting for all the emo stories she was about to tell him. But, instead she wiped off the water in her teary eyes with the sleeve of her jacket and tried sucking up the tears. She really didn't know what to say. What was wrong with her? Ren was puzzled from the strange silence. "Aren't you going tell me all about your sad childhood now?" Toshi shook her head staring back down at her lap where she twiddled her fingers. "Did I say something?" he asked.
(To be continued)
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