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 Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:59 am
<3-Branded-by PistGurl-Category-Games - Final Fantasy VIII-Genre-Romance/Tragedy-Status-In Progress - 5 Chapters - 4,434 words-Rating-M-Disclaimer-FANfiction...-Summary-Non-con/rape, Shonen-ai: SeiferxZell SquallxZell : Zell wakes up from a nightmare which changes Squalls life...why?
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:01 am
<3-UPDATES- -24th August, 2oo8-Fifth chapter online!
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:05 am
<3-TEASER- -From Chapter One-The muscular, short haired blonde sighed and turned over to try and get back to sleep. His dark blue eyes glittered in the darkness, his breathing uneasily loud and jagged. He took a deep breath, gripped the duvet tight and squeezed his eyes shut forcing the emotions that were flooding out of him back down into his subconcious where they belonged.
The tall shadowy figure at the bottom of his single, SeeD issued bed turned away and stepped into the doorway. He turned and held onto the doorframe, resting his forehead on it; he wanted to say something, but simply sighed, tapped the frame lightly and shut the door
"Night Zell."
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:10 am
<3-REVIEWS- -What About Them?-I would love to have more reviews on this...I put the first chapters up more than 4 years ago...but had some really huge, long-lasting problems to deal with and I didn't update after the second chapter.
I had a few reviewers on the first two chapters...but none since. I don't want to keep adding chapters with no reviewers, because the more chapters I add, the less people are going to want to read it all!
I would love reviews to say "That was perfect, I'm addicted, write more" but hey, life's not perfect, huh? So, write what you actually think.
If I've missed something, mention it...if I've created a bit of a plot-hole, DEFINATELY mention it.
Any grammar errors, plain bad writing, characters FAR too OOC, written too confusingly, babbled on for too long or not described something enough.
Please...anything. =]
The problems I'm having at the moment are mainly memory! I have the whole story written already, but there are some holes caused by questions in the first chapter, which I'm having to edit in...and I haven't played the game since BEFORE I wrote this (so about 6 years! D= ) so I forget everything. It's hard getting them to stay in character now, because I've spent more time with them as my characters than the game characters themselves...so help with the characters would be great.
And I'm having major descriptive blanks...I try describing something so that it's not just all talking (how boring) but then it just seems like the same old words used over and over and I'm getting down about that.
I made this story by roleplaying IRL...so it was mostly all speech...so it's hard to change.
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