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1jules

PostPosted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 1:33 am


This story is based off of an Rp that I did with some other people, the Rp sadly died but I loved the idea and am now making a story

please Pm any suggestions you have to help improve it.

these are the people who played the characters in the original Rp.

Runea ---------- foxdeamon ninja14
Leane ---------- Reecespuff
Kail ---------- iSkates
Nate ---------- 1jules
Ainsle ---------- Xena the Sorceress
Nicki ---------- Skiies
Clay ---------- The Real Lemon Citrus
Kit ---------- Captain Taro
Luna ---------- Misery_The_Forgotten

Okay, just so you guys know I am going to post the 2nd chapter by its pages so it is easier on the eyes, I am also going to do this with the other chapters as well. Thanks for your pateince and please help find mistakes.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:32 am


The Characters

When Runea was young her father died and he mom decided to move to a little town where they could start a fresh new life, Runea could be seen outside a lot but she would never play with any of the other kids until she met Ainsle, the hyper one in the group, she often spent most of her free time at the library and at home. Runea has red hair and brown eyes, she smiles a lot and never lets other people get her down.

Leanne is a fun loving person who often keeps to herself. She will only really open up to a person she is very close to, her friends are the most important thing in the world to her and she would do nearly anything to help them. Leanne has a great family that consists of her parents and her two year old brother, she is like a second mother to Steven because her mom works long hours and she has to take care of him. She has orange hair and blue eyes, she is always smiling unless she is in the worst of moods.

Kail is a street kid who always gets into trouble wherever he goes, he always gets into fights and was sent to Juvenile detention a few times in his life but he’s not worried and he knows that he has his friends by his side. Most of the kids at school and other places are scared of him because he is the biggest of the group and has a anger problem. He lives away from his parents even though he’s sixteen and has always been able to take care of himself. He is a big guy with black hair blue eyes and he always has tattered clothes and he rarely smiles.

Nate is the smarty pants of the group and is often found in the public library or down in his apartment doing some weird science stuff, most of the time the things blow up in his face but that doesn’t stop him from getting back up and trying again. He is a kind person who likes to tinker with stuff and solve puzzles, he’s quite scrawny and has red hair and bright green eyes, he has freckles on his face and glasses that keep sliding down his nose, he is always carrying around a bag to hold books and other assorted stuff. He also has a small crush on Runea.

Ainsle is the crazy one in the group who doesn’t know the meaning of the word bad and is usually making anything bad seem like a game, all the others love her because she can always brighten up your day, but sometimes she is really annoying and you cannot get her to stop talking making her the best and worst friend in certain situations. Ainsle has orange braided hair which she spends more than an hour on everyday she has blue eyes and wears black and white or blindingly colorful outfits.

Nicki is considered the weird one in the group because she likes odd things, and often tries to make her friends try new things as well, she can sometimes be quite confusing and it ends up with all the others looking at her strangely, Nicki likes Fantasy type things and is a very useful person in the right situations, but overall she isn’t that smart, she is very nice and loves to talk. Nicki has brown hair and brown eyes.

Clay is probably the most serious person in the whole group she is somewhat impatient and fast paced but when she gets the important things out of the way she starts to show what she is really like. She is a arrogant person who takes pride in her work but she is kind and sincere when her friends need it the most, she is a good listener and has mastered the art of conversation, she knows what not to talk about and what to talk about and when the best time to ask something, she has a problem of having work get in the way of her friendship, she isn’t a needy child and does what she is told to do. She has hair and brown eyes with blue glasses.

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1jules

PostPosted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:56 am


The Lost


Kit is a average schoolgir l who has a tendency to steal things, but if you call her a thief than you will get a surprisingly strong punch in the face, she isn’t that fond of sports but she is a fast runner and is very agile for how scrawny she looks, she can’t sit still for very long and finds that people who can are very dull, she likes excitement and fun. Her mother and father died while she was ten and her brother went away to become a modern day pirate, Kit was alone in the world and set out to find her brother, after searching for a while she started to steal things of value and sell them on the black market. She settled down when she got her own apartment. Kit has white hair and golden brown eyes.

Luna is a very cheerful person who can always see the brighter side of things, even when things get rough she pulls through and goes about her daily life, she likes to take photos and sword fight. Despite all the good things she has at home she has a mom and dad who work for hours and a brother that goes to school and comes home and plays on the Xbox 360 the rest of the day. She took photography and sword fighting classes so she wouldn’t be alone and was soon a master at sword fighting and taking pictures. Luna has brown hair and brown eyes.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:38 pm


Monsters


Flesh eaters: A terrible thing that has blo od dripping all over it’s body and has a really bad smell that makes it so you know when one is near, a few flesh eaters can go inside humans and start transforming them into a stronger flesh eater, you can tell if a person has a flesh eater in them by a mark that appears on their shoulder.

Parasites: smaller monster that drink the blo od of humans and will go inside a human making that person their mindless puppet.

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1jules

PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 6:14 pm


Chapter 1: The Earthquake

Runea was laughing and enjoying herself at the new nightclub, she didn’t want to come at first but was glad that her friends dragged her down there, Runea is a kind and shy person who doesn’t usually go out and party often.
Runea was dancing and being cheerful when the ground started to shake, the glasses on the clubs shelves came crashing down and than the power went out and she fell to her knees, she studied the crowd to see if she could find any of her friends.
Leanne was at the club ordering a drink when the earthquake hit, the other friends at the club were either dancing or sitting at a table chatting, she wasn’t much of a dancer and was too young for alcohol, and she didn’t like to lie so she ordered a soda. She sat waiting for her drink to come when the ground shook, she was thrown of her stool and onto the floor, the shaking stopped but everyone was in a panic, she called out for her friends but couldn’t see them anywhere.
Runea looked all around for her friends, but everyone was in a panic because of the earthquake. Runea was worried and got up on her feet and jumped up and down looking over the heads of all the people in the nightclub to see if she could find any of her friends. Runea saw Leanne by the bar yelling for the others, she smiled and pushed her why towards the bar.
“Leanne!” She shouted waving her hands in the air to catch her attention.
Leanne heard her name being called over the commotion of the crowd and saw Runea and ran to her giving her a big bear hug.
“Runea what happened?” She had to yell to be heard over all the noise, “What’s going on?” As she said it she looked around the club to see if any of the others where there.


Kail was sitting in a restaurant about ready to take off and make his expensive meal into a free one, he took a napkin and wiped the butter off of his mouth. He looked around the place to see if anyone was watching him. A small kid about seven years old was staring up at him, Kail frowned and tried to be friendly by giving a smile but it scared the kid off.
“Humph, stupid kid” He muttered, just then the ground started to shake and he remembered Runea telling him that she was going to be at the nightclub with some of the others, so Kail made a mad dash towards the exit and down the street.


Runea hugged Leanne and shouted,
“I don’t know, a minute I was dancing and the next some massive earthquake hits, I don’t know where the others are, they should be in the mess of a crowd. I just hope they are okay.” Runea was scared, it took her a second to realize it but she was shaking.
Leanne saw that Runea was shaking and put a reassuring hand on her shoulder, it was her nature to be a motherly person.
“everything is going to be okay,” Leanne said trying to convince herself as well as Runea.
“I’m going to call Kail to see if he is alright,” she said as she pulled out her phone and speed-dialed Kail hoping he had his phone on him.
“Please pick up Kail,” she said as the phone started ringing.
Kail wish he had his phone so he could call Runea to make sure she was alright but he forgot it at home, a crowd of people were running out of the night club and he had to shove his way past to get in, When he saw Runea and Leanne he calmed down a bit and ran up to them and grabbed Leanne’s shoulder,
“Are you okay?” He shouted over the voices of the crowd
Leanne looked around at the destruction in the night club,
“We should probably go back to the apartment, our parents will be worried about us,” she said trying to reason what the earthquake might have been, she smiled as she thought about what might have happened. It seemed to small to be an earthquake.
“Good idea,” Kail said to Leanne, he started to leave the night club and put a arm around Runea giving her a comforting squeeze as they left the night club.
“I just know my parents are freaking out right now.” A smile came across his face as he imagined his mom jumping under a table with a cooking pot on her head and a wooden spoon in her hands in a fighting position as if she was prepared to fight the earth % C
“Hey! Where’s Clay, I thought she was with you guys.”
“It wasn’t that long ago that I was speaking to her. She is probably still inside looking for us,” Runea said, “Let’s go back inside and check, I’m worried that this was something unnatural, what I mean is that we never get earthquakes in this area and even if this was an earthquake it seemed to be a little bit to short.” Runea said twirling a strand of her hair nervously.
Leanne nodded what Kail had said even though she didn’t really hear him. She was still in deep thought and was paying more attention to some of the panicked people around her to see if anyone knew what was going on, she couldn’t wait to turn on the news and see what was really happening.
It always killed her when she didn’t know what was happening. As she stared out at the people in the street she couldn’t help but think of what a great picture it would be, she shook her head to clear her thoughts thinking that this was not the time or place to bother with that.
Nicki looked around franticly and started to run, people were running everywhere and was bumping into her.
“Move please,” She yelled over the screams. She held onto her bag strap making sure that it didn’t fall off of herself. She spotted Runea, Kail and Leanne by the new nightclub and ran to them. Suddenly a person grabbed her shoulder and turned her around, who she faced was a odd looking man.
“Run!” The man shouted and then let go of her and ran off into the crowd.
“Kail! Runea! Leanne!” She shouted as she got to them.
Leanne spotted Nicki and sighed grateful that another member of their makeshift group was alright.
“Nicki!” Leanne screamed giving her a hug, “Are you alright?” She asked Nicki even though she didn’t look injured. “Do you know what’s happening?”
Kail looked out at the streets, It seemed different to him, now he noticed that instead of just people running around like a stirred up ant hill he saw people with scars and all over them. He stared out into the chaotic street until he heard a familiar voice, he turned around and saw Nicki.
He liked Nicki because ironically her crazy personality kept him sane, he ran over to her and gave her a big hug.
“I’m so glad your okay.” He said holding back some tears..
"I'm fine." Nicki said looking around at the wreckage of the nightclub and out the hole where the door used to be. "Well, from what I'm seeing right now, people are very scared of earthquakes." She said, Nicki was pretty calm. Maybe her experience of her wild adventures into the forest and other places might come in handy
Through the dust and the smoke Clay managed to see Runea's tamed and silky hair, she almost felt guilty when she grabbed it and tugged on it slightly to catch her attention in the thick crowd. Tears were in her eyes from fear of what was happening.
"Runea." she said sobbing, but caught her composure and stopped shaking and tried to remain calm. “What’s going on?”
Runea let out a surprised scream when she felt her hair tugged on, she turned around and found Clay standing in front of her crying, "Clara!" Runea said saying her formal name, Runea gave her a big hug.
"I’m not sure myself, but there was an earthquake and now there are people running around everywhere, I’m scared too." Runea tried to stop herself from shaking how could a night of fun turn into this and panic.
Leanne heard Runea scream and turned around to figure out what was wrong.
“Clay!” She yelled embracing her friend. "Clay! You're alright! Thank goodness!" It seemed as if their whole group might be alright, but they were still missing some people. "We need to keep going guys, our families are bound to be freaking out." The truth was, she didn't really care about her parents, but she really wanted to see what was going on. She was sure the news would give her some information at least.
"Clara!" She was glad everyone was okay at this point, Everyone in the streets was still running away from some unknown thing. "I want to see what's happening." She said and looked at her friends as if she was the only one who wanted to.
Leanne looked at Nicki. "I do too, but how? No one around here knows what is going on!" She sighed and looked at all the frantic people running around. She was beginning to wonder why everyone was so scared. If it was just an earthquake then it was over and people wouldn't be freaking out as much. She got quiet again as she thought this through.
Clara broke herself away from the embrace and now was being more serious having regained her thoughts and wasn’t crying anymore, Clay couldn't help but get slightly agitated.
"Our families are out there and we shouldn’t be just standing here waiting to see what will happen!” She yelled and once again tears welled in her eyes at the thought of the of her family, she turned away from the group. Never before she let anyone see her broken times, and now was not a good time to think of negative feelings.
"Anyway, we should go find out what's going on and what's happened to our families" She was now looking up at the direction the apartment was trying to hide her tears away from the other.
"We should go now," Kail said in a very serious voice. He started to walk towards the door but almost fell over, he had hurt is ankle running to the bar but only just realized the pain. He pretended nothing was wrong and did his best not to limp as he headed towards the doors.
Nate was at the library quietly reading a book about experiments that have been done on hamsters when the earthquake happened, he book the book into his bag and ran out of the library and headed home to check some important stuff that he was working on at home, while he was running to his house he noticed that there was an odd amount of people screaming and running about, he didn’t give it much of a thought and dodged around all of them until he got to the nightclub, he thought of his friends and also of how weird this whole situation was.
"hey guys are all you alright?" He yelled over the crowd and ran up to them.
Runea nodded her head at Nate, "Yes, but I think we should give the others a text or call to tell them to meet up with us back at the apartment gates."
She pulled out her cell phone and started to dial some numbers, "Once we do that we should go and check with on our families." Runea placed the phone to her ears and her eyes widen in surprise she was pointing at the sky in the direction of the apartment. "What is that!?" Smoke was rising in the air, "That’s near the apartment!" Runea was really worried and felt the panic once again to rise up in her, she d this feeling of panic and being fragile with this whole mess.
Nicki looked at where Runea was pointing and noticed the smoke. She gave a small yelp and started to walk off toward the apartment. "Come on!" She yelled and opened her bag to get her hat.
Clay didn't react to Nate because she couldn't help but stare at Kail for his change in pace and reaction to the situation. She didn't notice him until he was already in front of the group. When she heard Runea's shriek, her eyes widened too as she followed her eyes towards the apartment. Clay almost let out a curse but shook it away and followed Kail and Nicki.
Nate looked up and saw the smoke and nodded at Nicki and started to follow the her but looked back and said to Runea. "it might be a fire in the apartment! hurry up with those phone calls and lets go!"


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 8:09 pm


Chapter 2: The Apartment

Kail quickly hugged Nicki and then ran towards the smoke with the others close behind him. He ran to the front of the group ignoring the pain in his ankle. Him and the others ran towards the apartment and the closer they got the more smoke he saw. Pretty soon they stopped; there was so much smoke that his eyes and throat started burning. "Where the heck is the fire department!" he screamed in rage.
Nicki listened to Kail and held onto his shirt. "I think they already arrived.." She said, seeing the small flashing lights through the smoke. She reached back in her bag and grabbed a small fan. Then she grabbed a flashlight and handed it to Kail. "Use it!" She said and turned on the fan.
Leanne ran with the others and swore under her breath. She forgot all about her friends and broke off in a sprint towards the apartments, not thinking about what the consequences may be. She needed to see what was causing that smoke and make sure her family was okay. Everyone was running in the opposite direction and she had to shove through a few people, but she didn't break stride.
"Leanne!" Clay screamed when she saw her sprint. Whatever was happening, it was probably not wise to run blindly run in. She wanted to be the one to go grab her hand but, Leanne managed to shove all the people away in her direction. Clay crashed into a middle-aged woman, who knocked her down and stepped on her shoulder. “Dang it!" she said as she struggled to sit up while holding her shoulder. "That woman was heavy."
Runea left a voice message on the phone and ran after Leanne, "Lee!!! Wait don't run off!! We don't know what’s going on!!" She shouted at the others to follow. "Come on if we don't move now we will loose her!!" Runea kept a close eye on Leanne, once she caught up with her she grabbed her by the shoulder and stopped her in her tracks, she was panting hard, "Wait. others...call friends.. not sure...what’s beyond us. worried." Runea slowly caught up with her breathing.
Nate ran with Runea to catch Leanne and still didn’t have a clue what was going on, “Don’t scare us like that Leanne,” he said as he caught his breath as well. “Okay can any of you tell me what in the world is going on!!!.”
Leanne could hear the frantic yelling of her friends but kept running until Runea caught her shoulder. She whipped around and stared her friend in the face, tears running down her cheeks. "Runea please let me go! I need to see if my family is alright! They are in there!" She was rambling, trying to keep herself from crying harder than she already was. She knew it was stupid to just run in, but she couldn't just stand there.
Runea shook her head at Leanne, "Alright you can go, but I’m coming with you. I think the others are going to search for there families as well." Runea smiled and they went in the apartment leaving Nate behind. Runea started to cough and couldn't see any where in the smoke. "Lee!! Are you still there? I can't see anything in this smoke!!" she coughed.
Kail felt Nicki holding on to his shirt and he pulled her hand away from his shirt and held her hand in his. He knew there were too many people for the fire department to handle. "Were your parents at?" he said as they caught up with the others at the front door of the apartment and went in going right past Nate and following Runea and Leanne.
Nicki got nervous, Kail's hand in hers. "I think they're in their room!" She said and a small tear ran down her cheek but she still kept her hopes up. She then dropped her fan on . "Wait! Where is everyone!?" She shouted and looked down at the floor, something was moving across the floor but it could have been mice.



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1jules

PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 6:52 pm


Clay had lost her friends in the mess of people now moving around her, some stepping on her. No, a lot were stepping on her. Somehow she managed to stand again, only to be pulled away from the crowd. 'Crap, crap crap!' she yelled in her mind as she got pulled away in the crowd. Clara had gotten so disconnected that she ended up near the library where she grabbed the wooden flag pole and started climbing it. (Yes, she climbed a pole. ... Get over it.) The wood splintered her fingers, but it gave her a better view of what was going on. When she got high enough her eyes widened in fear.
Soon, the crowd started to die out and she was able to get down and started running towards apartment. If she lost her friends, she probably would have gone into insanity. When she got near the hotel she saw her parents walk out with her father carrying her grandmother and her grandfather trudging along, looking depressed. "Mama! Papa!" she yelled as she ran towards them. They looked at her and their faces brightened a little. She them all a quick hug and turned her attention to her grandmother. "What happened?" she asked seeing that she wasn't breathing well. Her father shook his head and then she looked at her mother
"C’mon we have to go now!" her mother ordered grabbing her hand. Clara ed her hand away, backing away from her family and shaking her head.
"No... I have..." she started. "I have my friends in there!" she yelled before dashing off and clearing the rest of the distance to the apartment She was happy that they were alive, now all she wanted to do is get her friends out of there. She stopped at the now looming building, she was at the side entrance of the apartment and now that she was there she was weighing if this was really worth it, in the end she went in.



Leanne grabbed Runea's arm through the smoke and pulled her along with her. She ran into the building and went straight to her room, the door was already open. She coughed as she went in and shielded her eyes from the intense smoke. “Mom! Dad! Steven?! Is anyone here?!" She screamed, running through the small apartment, but no one was there. She swore again and ran back to Runea. "No one is here! Let's go find your family!" she said, a determined edge to her voice.
Nate was utterly confused now and instead of standing in the middle of the street like a moron he decided it would be best if he actually did something. He didn’t really care for his family and he knew that they were safe because they’re room was in the concrete basement, so he went and looked for Runea and Leanne still annoyed that his question wasn’t answered yet. He looked upstairs but he didn’t see them so he decided to check to lower level thinking that they hadn’t come up yet.
Runea grabbed onto Leanne and started to lead the way up the stairs, Runea let her hands run along the wall so she could find her way around, as she let her hand slide on the wall she felt something warm and liquidy. "Eee what is this!?" She lifted her hand close to her face and screamed "Blo od! There’s blo od on the wall!!" She tried wiping the blo od off her hands feeling more frightened then ever. Her voice was shaky "Come on the next floor is where my family should be, Oh gosh please let them all right."
Leanne was wiping the tears from her eyes as she ran with Runea. It was getting harder and harder to run as the smoke filled her lungs, and she really wanted to know where her family was. Part of her was relieved that she didn't find them in the apartment, but most of her was wondering where they could be. She heard Runea say something about , which scared her even more. She ran a little faster so she was next to Runea.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 10:58 pm


Kit was outside when the earthquake struck. It was a surreal feeling to have the entire ground beneath your feet shake as if it were merely paper. Falling to her knees, she cursed as her newly bought groceries went flying, sending an array of tomatoes and various other vegetables into road. She winced as the concrete tore the skin from her bare legs, clinging to the pavement curb for what seemed like hours.
When the shaking finally stopped, she turned her head to hear a huge crunching, tearing sound followed by screams behind her. Thinking a building had collapsed; she scrambled to her feet and rushed over to help. But at the source of the screams she found no rubble or debris blocking the way, but in fact quite the opposite. A huge, gaping hole cleared the entire centre of the road, a strange purple gas rising from its core. Kit gasped, peering over the edge and into the darkness. There was nothing. It was almost as if the hole went to the very center of the planet itself.
Of course, she had very little time to contemplate the matter, as a large hand grabbed hold of her ankle with a grip unknown to man-kind. She screamed, falling backwards as she was dragged nearer to the hole. A pair of dark eyes stared at her from the blackness of the hole, with a menacing crimson glow that seemed almost hypnotic. She opened her mouth to scream again, but no sound came. Her face became blank as the creature drew nearer, its foul stench her making her nauseous. With its other hand, it took hold of her throat and a strange humming sound filled her head. For some reason, she was unable, almost unwilling to fight back as the beast moved ever closer to her shaking body. Her eyes rolled into the back of her skull and she dropped limply onto her back as the creature climbed into her soul, and the two bodies finally merged as one.


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