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 Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:22 am
Lose Control
What is it about you that affects me so?
The play of sunlight on burnished auburn hair,
The storm-fire glitter of your eyes,
The touch of your finder and
The heat of your breath?
I don't know.
That scares me more than it should.
Every moment with you leave me weak;
Help me...
I can't stop shivering.
My legs tremble at the merest thought,
My heart beats wildly.
Imprisoned.
Lying here in the warm, still night,
Wandering helplessly,
Desire my only guide.
I burn for you.
You make me forget who I am;
You make me lose control.
Lose myself.
You dance through my dreams,
The ghost of a beautiful warrior,
And I,
Lonely and beguiled,
Can only follow.
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 8:06 pm
I like. Well done. Hm. There aren't many posts in the Romantic section. <_<
What is the most popular genre on here? The one where people post often I mean.
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 8:16 am
Rorschech I like. Well done. Hm. There aren't many posts in the Romantic section. <_< What is the most popular genre on here? The one where people post often I mean. Currently, I believe it is the Emo(tional) forum. I'd like more people to post in the monthly contest though... And there are no, NO, funny poems yet. Can you believe that???
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 11:45 pm
JeanMorgan Rorschech I like. Well done. Hm. There aren't many posts in the Romantic section. <_< What is the most popular genre on here? The one where people post often I mean. Currently, I believe it is the Emo(tional) forum. I'd like more people to post in the monthly contest though... And there are no, NO, funny poems yet. Can you believe that??? No funny poetry? >_> Hm. I have a couple funny poems, I didn't write them...found 'em online and saved them. Can I post them or is that "copy right infrigment"?
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 2:13 pm
Rorschech JeanMorgan Rorschech I like. Well done. Hm. There aren't many posts in the Romantic section. <_< What is the most popular genre on here? The one where people post often I mean. Currently, I believe it is the Emo(tional) forum. I'd like more people to post in the monthly contest though... And there are no, NO, funny poems yet. Can you believe that??? No funny poetry? >_> Hm. I have a couple funny poems, I didn't write them...found 'em online and saved them. Can I post them or is that "copy right infrigment"? Hm.... I think what I'll do is create a seperate forum for other people's poetry. I think that would be best. Keep an eye out for it.
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 10:57 pm
JeanMorgan Rorschech JeanMorgan Rorschech I like. Well done. Hm. There aren't many posts in the Romantic section. <_< What is the most popular genre on here? The one where people post often I mean. Currently, I believe it is the Emo(tional) forum. I'd like more people to post in the monthly contest though... And there are no, NO, funny poems yet. Can you believe that??? No funny poetry? >_> Hm. I have a couple funny poems, I didn't write them...found 'em online and saved them. Can I post them or is that "copy right infrigment"? Hm.... I think what I'll do is create a seperate forum for other people's poetry. I think that would be best. Keep an eye out for it. Okee Dokee. >_>
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 6:04 pm
I love this...it's beautiful.
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 6:34 pm
This one is really cool. I love that I can feel my heart stutter with the speaker's. I can see the subject in a lot of ways. I know I'm pushing the PG-13, but I would have liked to see the speaker and the subject interact or see the speaker react to the fact that they don't.
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:47 am
Fantastic! I've felt that way a few times before. Just a few.
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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 1:29 pm
That was amazing.
I know I've felt that way before.
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