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 Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:47 am
Hello all and welcome to the general chit-chat thread!
This thread is dedicated toward us having a place to talk about our stories, poems, etc...
However this thread is not intended for critiquing or specialized aid toward a work which is preferred to be posted on the actual thread of the story/poem/other. This thread is for discussion of the work. This thread is for the discussion and general help (if asked for) of the works presented here.
Please follow gaia rules and the rules of the guild, thank you.
Now chat away!
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:57 am
I will accept any comments or concerns you have about my work. Just to let that out there.
I suppose I'll start off with my own works.
I am android_22 and I will be working on Uneskia and A.T.S. (across the stars)
As you might have noticed I have had placed cover images for both stories. However the one for Uneskia is simply the first cover of the first book. The one for A.T.S. will be constant. I like putting images to my stories by the way. Helps me get a visual, plus there fun to do. smile
Anyways I also changed the genres. I did some research, plus I'm in some classes at school with focus on this, and thus have given a more detailed description. I believe that the changes to the genre section will help people get a better idea of whats to come.
I have recently done a lot of work for Uneskia. But I want to work on A.T.S. as it is my first story and is more original then Uneskia. Which is kinda like a darker version of Kingdom hearts and FFX.
A.T.S. can be compared to Star wars but only on certain points.
But I have had some recent trouble with starting A.T.S.
I had a piece for the opening paragraphs but I can't find them anywhere sadly >.<
Well that's about all I can think of now. Feel free to ask questions or discuss either on of my stories. I would also enjoy talking about everyone ele's stories as well.
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:17 pm
Argh! I still got nothing on A.T.S. Been trying to come up with a valid opener, but nothing seems to work right. I have a small draft but it doesn't feel up to par with that of Uneskia therefore I'll keep it hidden for now. I should hope to have something written by next weekend. Something. And after I'll be working on a second edition to it and after that back to Uneskia.
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 9:51 pm
Right now, I'm working on the first book of what I call my mythology. The entire story is long and I really don't want to go into it right now. So far, it's a series of 16 maybe 20, matters how many story lines I can work up. The series is what I call modern fantasy. Magic set in the modern world which means that there are vampires and stuff thought the MC doesn't know it at the time. She's clairvoyant, but she doesn't trust or even want her dreams. She tends to ignore them for the most part. anyway, she nearly dies a couple of times and has to fess up and accept that she can see the future or die. so yeah.
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:47 pm
CyberianTsuinami Right now, I'm working on the first book of what I call my mythology. The entire story is long and I really don't want to go into it right now. So far, it's a series of 16 maybe 20, matters how many storylines I can work up. The series is what I can modern fantasy. Magic set in the modern world which means that there are vampires and stuff thought the MC doesn't know it at the time. She's clairvoyant, but she doesn't trust or even want her dreams. She tends to egnor them for the most part. anyway, she nearly dies a couple of times and has to fess up and accept that she can see the future or die. so yeah. Sounds interesting Cyber, I'd like to see some of it sometime
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Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 3:17 pm
android_22 CyberianTsuinami Right now, I'm working on the first book of what I call my mythology. The entire story is long and I really don't want to go into it right now. So far, it's a series of 16 maybe 20, matters how many storylines I can work up. The series is what I can modern fantasy. Magic set in the modern world which means that there are vampires and stuff thought the MC doesn't know it at the time. She's clairvoyant, but she doesn't trust or even want her dreams. She tends to egnor them for the most part. anyway, she nearly dies a couple of times and has to fess up and accept that she can see the future or die. so yeah. Sounds interesting Cyber, I'd like to see some of it sometime It's in the Prose Section awaiting comments.
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Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:53 am
Yo man what happened to everyone? Mad quiet around these parts. I hope we all come back together soon.
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Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 3:36 am
Thanks for the critique Cyber!
I'm going to be focusing more on Uneskia right now. A.T.S. is just as big as Uneskia in terms of characters, story, setting, and the overall universe. It is a lot of work. So I'm just going to write Uneskia for a period of time. I also have a suspense story I'm working on called "Zombie-Land" I'll get more info released as it develops. Seeya all around people!
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Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:46 pm
Hey everyone, I'll be gone for a little while, I will be focusing on my school work and my stories in private. I hope to see all of you later.
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 6:16 am
I am just getting back into this guild. And I see a lot of new stories. But so little time sad
I'm going to try to read and comment on everyone that I can.
Oh and Cyber's idea of a questionnaire is a nice idea. It allows for people who want to comment to have a idea of what to say if they can't think of anything themselves at the time.
I posted chapter two of Uneskia. I actually haven't been worrying about Uneskia lately. My attention has been divided among all my other stories (A.T.S., MESSAGE, & Zombie Land) It's a real hassle cause I don't know where to work next and often nothing gets done really lol.
I'm going to just try and focus on Uneskia and MESSAGE.
But I want to keep working hard on Uneskia because everyone seems to like that one among most of my other stories.
Hey I got a question...maybe it could be just be me. But when I come up with a story I come up with my own soundtrack of sorts of songs I feel connect with the story. I occasionally listen to it to improve my inspiration.
Anyone else do that?
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:36 am
It seems people are starting to return to the guild. Yay!
Hey I think someone should come up with one of those banner things.
And maybe some sigs so we can advertise n such, ya know?
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:24 pm
I personally am currently working on rewriting Chapter One of Human Clairvoyance (yes, again). I hope to have that up soon, but I keep getting distracted by my Numb3rs fanfiction. If anyone know the show or just want to read and comment, please find it in the fanfiction section. It's also going through a complete rewrite. (I know; I really should stop rewriting sometime so I can actually eventually finish something). That's were I am right now.
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:26 pm
One of my friends says she is going to put a banner together for us. However, she's busy and forgets things so it might take a while, but one is being working on. (Not that no one else can work on one as well.) I'm also going to put together a thread in the Gaia Guild forum to promote the guild. If y'all could help me bump that, it would be great. I'll create a thread when I actually finish it to give you guys the details.
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