Write your own songs?

[S1ng3r]

heart I love to write my own songs. Sometimes when i read over it later it seems like a 3 year old wrote it. I would love to read someone else's songs or give/get advice. smile

Here is the place to talk about or just post a song you have written or in the process of writing smile heart  

[S1ng3r]

Here is one of the song I have written!!! I hope you like it smile


Save me from this road I'm on
Help me find my way
I know there is a reason why
But it’s too much to take


(Chorus)
Will you help me through Lord?
What can I do?
How should I go about my days?
Will you help me through?


(Verse 2)
I feel like no one is listening
To anything I say
Why is this happening?
Why wont they stay

(Chorus)


(Bridge)
I know you love me
I know you care But Lord
How can I tell your there
Oh Oh lord

(Chorus)