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 Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 6:29 pm
Whispered words of love so sweet,
pool around my withered feet.
They hold me strong in heavy winds
like lifelines thrown with nail at ends.
What could I do without their aid
their beautiful sweet serenade
a symphony of words and sound
holding me fast to the ground.
What could I do, if not for you?
Who, when I hurt, knew just the cue
that as I fall the ground that nears
is softened, now I have no fears
Just whispered words of love so sweet
holding strong these withered feet.
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 12:06 am
That's really elegant. It flows so well and really gives a sense of the emotion without being too over descriptive.
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