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Ayanami_Elena Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:29 pm
I am gonna post some of my [new and old] writings. Creative criticism is welcomed and appreciated.
XD
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:43 pm
Lost and Broken
She gazed around her; territory unknown. Her head throbbed as she attempted to rise from her wretched condition. Well, isn't this lovely, she thought. Her legs were badly scraped and blood was rising to the surface, developing into purple bruises. Her arms were in similar conditions and as she stood unsteadily, a sharp pain radiated from her back, causing her to double over in agony. A wounded hand groped down her shoulder until it rested on a feathery wing and the sharp pain returned. Great. It is broken. The wounded hand returned with more blood and the woman bite her lip to subdue the pain. Hope the other one isn't, as well. She outstretched her left wing, the one she inherited from her father; dark, leathery, and now covered in blood. However, it seemed to have avoided injury, except for a few superficial scratches and tears that would heal quickly.
Well, I guess I should investigate and find out where I am... And with that she slowly set out to venture through the trees. She wondered a few minutes, as the sun, the only sun in the sky (odd, she thought) settled on the horizon. The trees had thinned out and the sky now twinkled with stars and the moon. It was the same moon she loved and hated. It was conforting to know that the wherever she was, the moon was still with her, and so was her magick.
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Ayanami_Elena Vice Captain
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Ayanami_Elena Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:04 pm
I hear you calling, but I'll stay quiet til you go.
You might be that jackal that tries to steal my bones;
Or you might be that preacher man...
The above post is about one of my old RP characters, Mariel Darkstar.
She is half angel- half succubus.
I had thought of possibly writing a story where she is basically ripped from her dimension and lands in a modern setting.
There she would stumble upon some of my other past RP characters, some of whom lived in the modern world, and others who had fallen like Mariel.
But that has yet to be.
I should also mention this was written in highschool, so that's... 3ish years ago.
That tries to cleanse me with his dirty hands;
Or you might be the voice of reason convincing me to stand.
I cannot fall; I'm on the lowest place on earth.
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