Spiffy-Its Hard to be a Drow [Note- OCs used, incomplete]
That links to the prologue, the other chapters so far don't have links to one another, but are easy enough to find. The next is not well spaced at all, and has some awkwardness. If you can get past the pickier details you should find a pretty fun story with a whole bunch of potential.
Three Little Pigs [Note- epic author insert, complete]
It was cute, and fairly well done. I'll be looking at the other pieces by this author more, only because it seems she caries on interacting with the characters- who know they are being abused in fanfiction. Not very professional, but it's fun to read well done crap now and again. Also there was the matter oft he ridiculously long forward... seriously... why do that?
Blood and Wine [Note- OC used? bad poetry, complete]
More serious than Three Little Pigs, that was a plus for me. However, the author is really, really, really wordy. Maybe she was just trying to make it look longer? It depicts a priest of Vhaeraun who upon being captured tortured and put on display sort of interacts with a number of visitors.
The afterward oft he story has the author again interacting with the cannon characters.
Unspiffy-Homeland- Rewritten [note- MarySue FMOC, other OCs, complete]
The title says it all. The author also did one for Exile and Sojourn. It wasn't done too badly, but I'm not a fan of rewriting a book just to add in your shameless OCs... At least the author admits that it was all done for 'personal satisfaction' (proving the author isn't a retard) but it still dissapoints me.
Prank for a Lesson [note- complete]
It was trying to be cute, but it failed epicly. It's so terrible I was left speechless... This is one of the two kinds of fics that turned me off of fanfiction for years.
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