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Iedelia
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 4:16 am


Hello all... how are we doing? Just posting a post to let you know that I started writting a story on my gaia journal and that you are all welcome to read it if you want to out of boredom curiosity or masocism, feel free. You are also entitled to tell me if you thought it sucked or not, which I guess you can post here.

For some background of the story in question is that I started the story when I was fourteen years old, I wrote it as kind of a script for a drama class but it never saw the light of day, and as time went on I figured it would be best a novella, so I started work on it character developement and how it was going to turn out, but then for reasons unknown to myself I forgot all about it, my head was bursting with all sorts of ideas and if I didn't get them all out my brain would have burst (this has resulted in a whole bunch of unfinished tales) so now six years later I've taken it back up again and re-evaluated it, re written about 95 percent of it, becuase lets face it I write better now than I did at fourteen, and what you have is the story as it should have been written a long time ago... I'm always going to be a chapter ahead of the posts, and I will try to post as often as I can, I shall announce it here

So do what you will with it, it's all there. Enjoy and take care...and remember honesty is the best policy smile

- The Menace Bunny
(Liset Campos Manrique)

EDIT: Here be the link to my journal My Journal

Thanks Perry!

EDIT: I am moving the story to My Space
PostPosted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 4:17 am


I recomend everyone to read it, it is very good indeed.


Although I would like to point out the fact that the journal thingy doesn't come up in the guilds so you might want to put a link in the post

Pez Black
Vice Captain


Iedelia
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 5:07 am


Oh my gosh! Believe it you must! I have finally updated the story!!!!! gonk gonk gonk
PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 6:26 am


I wholeheartedly believe.

[Comfort Eagle]
Vice Captain


Iedelia
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 6:21 pm


I think I spend too much editting stuff... damn my perfectionism sweatdrop
I've started on chapter 3 which is good, mood music does so much to make my thoughts run faster.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 9:43 pm


HooRAH! I'll read it when i get a chance

Pez Black
Vice Captain


blk~n~prpl~hrt

PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 1:04 pm


ill take a look
PostPosted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:36 am


Just in case you didn't read the first post I have moved the story here .
Look out for an update in the next two days
whee heart

Iedelia
Vice Captain


valkyrie_lisa
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 9:52 am


Menace_Bunny
Just in case you didn't read the first post I have moved the story here .
Look out for an updated in the next two days
whee heart


Ooh, I'm excited! I like the pics you have there.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 7:47 pm


valkyrie_lisa
Menace_Bunny
Just in case you didn't read the first post I have moved the story here .
Look out for an updated in the next two days
whee heart


Ooh, I'm excited! I like the pics you have there.


Thank you Miss VL ^_^

Iedelia
Vice Captain


Iedelia
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 9:40 am


Oh my gosh! gonk
Chapter 3 is up! After much editing and scurtiny it is indeed finally up! eek
I admit it is rather shorter than the others but that's because I felt the story needed to speed up just a touch, I had to get rid of some lovely mushy things but most of it disgusted even me sweatdrop
Anyway I hope you guys like it, as always you guys being honest helps me become a better writer. 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 12:14 pm


Yay for updates! blaugh
I guess I have to read tomorrow because I've been online too long as is. <.<

I love your mask. I wants it... domokun

[Comfort Eagle]
Vice Captain


Iedelia
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 2:33 am


[Comfort Eagle]
Yay for updates! blaugh
I guess I have to read tomorrow because I've been online too long as is. <.<

I love your mask. I wants it... domokun


If you gave me your address I'd gladly mail you one whee 3nodding The funny thing is that it would cost more to send it than to purchase the mask blaugh
PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 1:47 pm


I just read chapter 3. I like it, but it was so short! I'd like to see more exposition. But I definitely like the story line. 3nodding

valkyrie_lisa
Vice Captain


[Comfort Eagle]
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 3:43 pm


Menace_Bunny
If you gave me your address I'd gladly mail you one whee 3nodding The funny thing is that it would cost more to send it than to purchase the mask blaugh

Hehe. I appreciate the offer but I could probably find one at like Party City or something. I want to make myself an anbu mask like in Naruto. >.>

*still has to read chapter 3* gonk
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