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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:08 pm


Chapter 1

Father, noooo! Leave Broly alone, he’s done nothing wrong! Ember screamed to the darkness as she woke from what she hoped was just a horrible dream, but as she looked around at what should have been her room she saw walls all around her circular, familiar....A Saiyan space pod! Where am I, w-w-why a-am I-I-I here, she struggled to say as she began to sob. Realizing that she must have been to late to save him. Her body shook with the pain within her heart and the aching of her body. After a little while she began to here noises from outside the pod. Out of curiosity she opened the pod door. Who's there she yelled as the blinding light of day spilled in. The next instant a face of an old man appeared, holding a little baby boy who looked like..... Kakorot!


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as I look at him he says, "Hi! I'm Gohan." She try's to get out of the space pod replying...."G-g-gohonnn?" but before she can say another word she stumbles to the ground and darkness engulfs her.

When she awakens she is in a comfortable bed. At first she can't remember where she is or what had happened she was in a daze. A loud cry pierced the quite she didn't have time to try to remember she had to find out where the baby was. She stumbles out of the room her head filled with pain. She doesn't know from where but she recognized that cry. As she walks out a door that leads outside she seas the little baby, that she vaguely recognizes, calming down in the arms of an old man...

He then looks at Ember you should be resting. she looks at him glad the baby is ok. what happened? I found this little guy (points to the baby) in a crater next to.. whatever that was.. then right next to the crater there was another and you stumbled out of it...

At that moment all the memories hit her like a bolt of lightning with a sad cry she sunk to the ground, as flashes of the fight with her father in order to protect Paragus, flashes of Broly crying, flashes of Bardock carrying her to a space pod asking her to protect His son.


The man named Gohan puts Kakarot down and wraps his arms around her then surprisingly picks her up like she was nothing and carries her back to the bed she just left. after he puts her down and wraps some covers over her he says I'll return for you later after dinner is ready. tell me when ever you're ready little one. as he turns around she calls to him saying. T-the names E-e-mber and thank you Gohan for helping me and Kakarot. his name is Kakarot? Gohan chuckles to himself, that's what I get for naming him the moment I pick him up. Ember looks at him rubbing away tears from her face, What did y-you name him? scratching his head he says, Goku
she smile's up to him, I like that name better lets make that his name
He laughs, Sure whatever you want

that's the end of chapter 1 I hope to do chapter 2 soon.
 
PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:33 pm


dont want to fill up much room so you can continue on your story but I'd like to hear some more if you have more, very creative this is.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:19 pm


Shy Yukii
dont want to fill up much room so you can continue on your story but I'd like to hear some more if you have more, very creative this is.


lol I'll get to it as soon as I can sorry for my slowness I'll post another chapter soon.. hopefully... sweatdrop
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