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 Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 3:36 pm
[[i wrote this during school and its my first one so go easy on me]]
Prologue
Its been 70 years since I've become a vampire,30 since Charlie died,and 40 since Renee' passing. Charlie died from a gunshot and Renee' died from cancer. We left Forks 5 months after the run in with the Volturi, but Jacob stayed with us. He told his pack to stay with Sam's and protect La Push. Him and Renesmee had 3 kids: Alexa, Jade, and Edward the III. The girls look like Nessie but little Eddy looks like Jacob. We stayed in the Olympic Peninsula for a while, then we went to Tanya's. They were happy to see us but they were still grieving over their sister. A lot has happened in 70 years but now we're back in Forks. I'm so happy! But its sad to be here without Charlie. I knew this when I chose to become a vampire but now I know what it feels like.
[[sorry its short ill post the next one on wednsday or thursday]]
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Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 7:43 pm
Chapter 1
"Well Bella what does it feel like to be back here?" asked Jasper
"Its fine. I guess, its just different without Charlie." I said in a saddened voice. But immediatly Jasper lifted my mood. "Its going to be fun being at the same school twice" I said sarcastically. "Well, thats a good way to put it I guess." Edward said. "Hey mom, can I actually go to school this time? I want to actually meet new people." asked Renesmee. "Fine. Go ahead...." I said. "Alice do you see anything bad happening in the near future?" Edward asked. Alice closed her eyes and looked like she was concetrating. "Gasp! I see....I see..." she struggled to say. Carlisle said "What Alice what do you see??" Alice replied "I see Emmett and Jasper killing all the humans in the school. And the rest of the town."
Everyone gasped even me. "We MUST go now!" Esme said frantically.
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Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 7:55 pm
Well this story certianly has a few curveballs but that makes it unique! I REALLY want to see what happens now since curveballs tend to lead to interesting results. *twirls non-existant moustache* indeed *arches eyebrow mysteriously* but seriously keep it up I want to see where this leads!
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Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 4:46 pm
thanx. it will be up on either friday saturday or sunday. i just have to write it stressed
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 8:01 pm
[[i know most of you are begging for more so here it is]]
chapter 2
"We MUST go now!" was the last thing I heard. If I could faint, I probably would. But of course my perfect body would'nt let me. "Gah, I really wanted to be back here." Rose said in a sad voice. "Well if it wasn't for Uncle Emmett and Uncle Jasper we could stay here". Jade said. "Oh, Jade be quiet! Its not his fault! You've had your lapses too." Renesmee said. "Edward, I just want to see the cottage." I said in a whiny voice. He was smart enough to see where I was heading."Fine lets go". He replied
Edward POV
Im not dumb but I didn't see where Bella was heading. Oh yes I remember the cottage. I could see why she wanted to go there now. Oh well Ill just go with her. "Edward have fun!" I heard Emmett think. I shot him a venomous glare. "Why does Bella have to choose to do this now Edward? Why can't she just wait till we go to wherever we're gonna go? Rosalie whined. I shot her a glare too. "See ya in a bit Edward". Alice thought. She was the only polite one. Well........we're heading there right now..............
[[sorry its another short one. i really couldnt think of anything. youll see soon enough whats gonna happen]]
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:03 pm
It's nice that you're trying to put in a twist, but that is overstepping the bounds of the series. If Alice was joking, it would be better, but that's just wrong.
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