This is a boxing gym, if you want more of a fitness gym uses the schools located in the Lunch break area.
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:52 am
The TV advert:
TV camera is zoomed in on a mans face, he beings to talk.
"Hey guys, I'm local boxer Brad Williams here with my coach Aaron Steel."
The camera zooms out and you see another man by Brads side.
"Hey, I'm Aaron Steel owner of Boxers of Steel Gym, Brad is a top fighter here and I'm hoping soon he will enter at the fight club. But for now we are running out of top fighters to spread are name so we want you, yes YOU to join our gym."
Aaron points at the screen as he said YOU to get them to listen.
"Already we have a few kids here but if your not here then we don't have the best! We have the best coaches here and if you join your sure to rise to the top!"
The camera cuts to the main gym hall. Loads of kids are boxing and kickboxing. Aaron walks in and is about to talk when...
"Mr Steel!" The kids scream and run over and hug him.
Aaron talks "We're one big family here!" The kids, Brad, the coaches and Aaron all say. "BUT the families not complete without you!" It cuts out and the number of the Gym appears as well as the logo.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:05 pm
Wyatt walked in. "Not interupting anything am I?" Wyatt looked around and saw the camera men and kids. "It's just I needed a talk with Brad Williams, I heard your the cream of the crop around here."