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Blue6
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:14 pm


more. =)

Chapter Nine



Narrator: The Alpha Sector: A large group of rebels who’s primary focus was on liberating Empire slaves. Or so that’s what they will tell you.

Over the years they have raided our mines and outposts, killing our troops and providing refuge for those who they claim we imprisoned by forcing them to work. They have been a nusience really, but have been unable to cause any major damage to our cities.

Occasinaly they will steal a Cristalian…what they use it for we are unsure because they do not rely on its energies for power. It is possible they used them for study to try and revive the old ways.
We have worked hard to abolish the ancients and their blasphemies of spirits and gods and magics, those demons who can spurt fire from their hands and control the elements are all nearly extinct.

Mages.

They wreack havoc, claming to be greater then those of us who are “ungifted”

And yet, we still rely on magic to power our cities and keep our empire strong. But this power is controllable. Critalians: stones forged from pure energy building up and solidifying. The largest one found was the size of a mans fist and contained enough energy to power all of Dagon for a year.



Scar: We are all aware of this, Cain. Yet you still have not explained why you attacked an enemy base without authorization from the concil!

Cain (ie caped man): I wouldn’t have been given authorization!

Scar: because you were chasing a weak lead!!

Cain: HA! That is where you are wrong! The raid on the base was successful in more ways then one. First off, the rebels are now disposed of. We took care of their main outpost, sending all other aplha-sector operations to flee to the outlands. Secondly, the presence of what they call the Stone was confirmed.

A slender women with long blonde hair and a hood covering her eyes by the name of Saige speaks:

Saige: Confirmed but not found.

Cain: But we know the stone exists! A piece of magic so powerful it could expand our Empire- abolish the outlands completely! Restart the world outside the sphere-

A fat man wearing heavy amour stands, slamming his hands on the table:

Fat Man: PROPSTROUS! No magic could restart the world! YOU SHOULD BE SHOT FOR YOUR LIES!

The others all shout agreements. All but one. A dark man sitting at the head of the table. He wears the crest of Dagon on his brest. He stares at Cain for a moment before raising his hand for silence. Instantly the room is quiet. (for now his name will be Z)

Z: Cain of Urbane, you speak of this….Stone very highly. From what we know of magic, there are nine types of energies: (Fire, Water, Rock, Grass, Metal, Air, Sky, Light, and Dark). Critalians have been found in all types of these energies, none with the proper stats to rebuild the outlands. We have tried, and faild. Magic is a threat which we are abolishing, so why should we be chasing after it?

Cain: With all due respect sir, we are abolishing magic from people. We still use these Critalians to our advantage.

Z Nods and waits for Cain to continue

Cain: The nine energies you speak of are what mages would have called elements. Each being something they have a link to and can control, how they do this we know not. But there are two more energies which have never been spoken of before.

Saige: Life and death. Magic is something we can..control. Water Mages have the ability to control mositure, bending and shaping it to their will, the same goes for other mages and their corresponding energies. Life is also something we can control.

Scar: You mean to tell me there are mages which can create life from nothing! HA!

Saige: No. Life magic is rare. It has only ever occurred once in the last decade or so. Human beings with the ability to take what is dead or wounded and heal it.

Fat Man: BWHAHAHA. A healer! That is rich.

Cain glares at him: You should do your research before you speak.

Fat man opens his mouth to reply but Z raises his had to silence him.

Z: Continue Saige, what of this death?

Saige: heh. Death magic. The first to be abolished hundreds of years ago. People who could animate the dead-

Man with flaming red hair finishes her sentence: Necromancers.

Saige: percicly.

Cain: Death magic was taken care of long before the empire. Killed off by other mages. Life magic, however can not be destroyed… it develops in people unlike other magic’s which are born into people. Its apperaces have been rare because it is belived that one has to be born of pure heart and maintain it all through their life. Having a connection to the living….

Scar: psssh.

Cain: I belive that this Critalian, this Stone, is made of Life magic. Possibly the largest and maybe last of its kind.

There is a long silence.

Z: I see you have done your research. Very well. You have permission to investigate the where abouts of this Stone further.

Cain: Thank you Sir.

Z: The council is dismissed.

Everyone but Cain and Saige leave.

Saige: Do you belive it can be done?

Cain walks over to her and removes her hood

Cain: Of course.

Saige looks up and smiles wickedly, her eyes are a blood red.

END VOLUME ONE


Side Notes: The Empire

The Emprie Consists of Seven colossal cities where the human population lives. (think Final fantasy 12 ish cities…minues the weird creatures). Their main goal is to clense the land of all magic users, seeing them as monstors and demons. However, they still rely on magic in the form of crystals or stones which power their cities.

There are Seven major cities all built within the Sphere, an enclosed area where the earth is still “healthy”. Outside the sphere is whats left of the world after global warming, wars, explosions all that jazz. Basically a wasteland where those who are banished from the Sphere live. The emprie has drained the outland of all their resources to build and power their cities. They look towards ancient magics to try and restart the wastelands so that they can expand and so that they have a fresh supply of necessary resources.

The Seven Cities and City heads are:

Dagon- governed by ‘Z’

Dagon is the largest city and is the capital of the Empire. The ruler is Z, who is also head of the concil. A Generally calm man who is willing to kill anyone who gets in his way. He dresses in all black with the red dragon crest of Dagon embroderd on his chest.

Urbane- governd by Cain

Urbane is where the Empires military is Centerd. The general, Cain, is the most down to earth of the Empire. He has messy brown hair and usualy wears Empire armor with a flowing cape.

Azure- Governed by Saige

The archives are located in Azures library. Only government officals are allowed entrances as it is where all the records and documents from the past are kept. Nearly all of these documents are books and scrolls which were stolen from the mages when the emprie destroyed their shrines and cities. Saige is a slender and graceful women with long blonde hair. She wears deep hoods to cover her eyes.

Lilathu- Governed by Scar

A dark city located close to the boarder of the sphere and the outlands. The empires secret military is trained and housed here. Their duty is to defend the boarder of the Sphere from any Outland attacks.

???- Governed by Biren (fat man)

A dirty dusty city set in the mountains where the mines are located. All precious metals and Critalians are dug up and prepared here before being shipped off to other cities within the sphere and an unknown location outside the sphere.

????- Governed by Siren.

Siren in a tall slender man with flaming red hair and rust colored eyes. He governs over the city ???? Which is the empires communications center.

NEED ONE MORE

Mages:

A mage can be identified by their unusual features and by the necklance they wear around their neck. There are 9 types of known mages and 2 types of extinct
PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:18 pm


VOLUME TWO

Chapter One

Kas is leaning up against the side of the alpha sector truck when Blue walks up to him.

Blue: where are the others?

Kas: Already inside.

Blue: any idea of how to get out of here?

Kas: there’s a tunnel round the other side of this cavern. They keep it blocked off with a rope and a do not enter sign.

Blue: any idea where it leads?

Kas: hopefully out.

Rika pokes her head out the drivers window:

Rika: Blue! You’re here! Lets get a move on before they find out we’re missing!

Kas: You heard the lady! Lets get the hell out of here!

He walks over to the drivers door and pulls it open. Blue grabs his arm and her turns to look at her

Blue: No one is forcing you to come Kas.

Kas turns and flashes her a wild grin

Kas: good! Cuz if they were I’d sock ‘em one! Now lets go!

Blue returns the smile and goes around the front to the passengers side. M Aze and Rika are all seated on pull out seats in the back. There is a large sack on the floor beside Aze.

Aze: extra supplies.

Kas: ahhahhaah.

The engines starts up and Kaz drives around a curve in the cavern and through the rope into darkness.


Madura and Paia are walking through the market place when Larry runs up to her

Larry: Madura, our guests have taken off

Madura: wut ya mean, takin’ off?

Larry: one of the mechanics saw them pile in their vehicle and drive off one of the tunnels in the underground.

Madura: you betta not be ********’ round wit me!

Larry: I swear! They left down the western tunnel.

Paia: Madura! They’ll die down there!

Madura: der ain’t nothing we can do. Dey wanna go, dey go.

Larry: so that’s it? All that troubble of savin their asses and we’re juss gonna let them take off like that!

Madura: Da tunnels are too risky fer us. Der’s soemtin ‘bout dat group, Larry. Dey gonna change da world.

Larry snorts and looks annoyed.

Paia: E-excuse me, I forgot I have something to do today in the market. Farewell.

Madura and Larry nodd farewell as she takes off.

Paia follows one of the smaller crevaces down a side ally. The hosues appear less and less until she reaches the end where a cave entrace has been turned into someoens front door. She pushes the vibrant cloth aside and enters a small candle lit circular cavern. She steps down into the small house where a cloaked woman sits on a large pillow.

Paia: Helena?

The woman pulls her hood back. She is very pale with wavy black hair. Her eyes are coverd with a black cloth.

Helena: is that you child? (Helena is Saige’s sister SPOILER)

Paia: I’m over here.

Paia sits beside the woman and takes her hand.

Helena: Ah, there you are. What of our..guests?

Paia: they left this morning without any warning.

Helena: did they know?

Paia: no! of course not! I was unable to discover much about them from the stupid one. Kas I think his name was… ugh.

Helena: but the stone, they have it?

Paia: no. only a small piece of it. Madura gave them another shard-

Helena: What! Madura gave them our shard!

Paia: y-yes.

Helena: incompetent twit! She should have given me the shard for safe keeping! Now she’s given our only chance of finding the stone to those Fools!

Paia: I’m sorry. I did not know she would-

Helena stands suddenly and crosses to the other side of the cave where a table sits.

Helena: Leave me child. Speak not of our meeting. I will summon you when I need you.

Paia stands and rushes out. Helena presses a button on the table and a screen appears. Saige’s hodded image fills the screen.

Saige: what is it?

Helena: they have left.

Saige: what do you mean they have left!?

Helena: the group escaped into the tunnels early this morning. Your scout ships must have frightend them off.

Saige: I have sent no scout ships into your area!

Helena: well someone did.

Saige: what of the shard? Do you posses it?

Helena: they left before I had the chance to retrive it. And Madura gave them the second shard as well.

Saige: WHAT! Kill her. Her idiocy threatens all we have worked for.

Helena: as you wish. What of the others?

Saige: it is too dangerous to send anyone after them in those tunnels.

Helena: but not anything….

Saige: heh. very well. Do what you must. If you fail, I will have a group posted at the tunnel exit, should they make it out alive. I must leave. Contanct me at our usual time.

Helena: very well.

The screen closes. Helena crosses her home to a decorated chest which she opens. Inside is a staff made of twisting dark wood. At the top rests a rough purple stone. She smiles and leaves her cave.




Chapter TWO

Kas: Well this was a ******** brilliant idea!

Blue: Well if someone would learn how to ******** DRIVE we wouldn’t BE in this situation would we!

Kas: well it wasn’t my stupid idea to turn Left at that last fork!

Blue: and it wasn’t my stupid idea to get our truck stuck in a ******** HOLE

Kas: well if you think you can drive so good why don’t you drive us out of it then!!

Blue: YOU got it stuck YOU get it out!

The two are sitting in the front seat of the Van arguing back and forth. Outside Aze, M and Rika are behind the truck which has its back tire sunk in a deep hole.

Aze: can we get out?

Rika: yeah, it shouldn’t be that hard.

she is lighting the cave with a green orb. M is holding a glowing electric lantern and is standing a few feet away.

M: You may want to time this carefully, it’s a long way down.

He flicks the lantern to high and the cave is lit up more. The group is on a natural stone bridge over a dark pit.

Rika: alright. KAS!

Kas sticks his head out the window

Kas: Holler!

Rika: When I say now, hit the gas.

Kas: roger!

Rika: and Kas!

Kas: yeah?

Rika: Lightly.

Kas grins wickedly and returns inside the window. Rika sighs and skaes her head.

Rika: alright. Stand back boys!

Rika spreads out her hands, palms facing the earth. Her amulet glows faintly and the earth presses together slowly under the wheel

Rika: Now!

Kas hit’s the gas and rolls out of the newly filled hole.

M: Well done.

Aze: that was amazing!

Rika: It was nothing really.

Aze: are you kidding! That was so cool! I’ve never seen you actually use earth magic like that! Can you teach me!

Rika: Magic isn’t something you can just learn, Aze. You’re kinda born with it.

Aze: but you’re no different then me! I’m sure I can learn.

Rika: alright, I’ll teach you.

Aze: Sweet!

Kas: Would you two hurry it up!

Rika: Aw, is Kas afraid of heights!

Kas: listen missy! I don’t like you’re attitude!

Helena is standing at the entrance to the cave, holding her staff and black robe.

Blue6
Captain


mmpr
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 2:16 am


keep em coming. razz
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