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Harpe Eolienne

 
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 8:56 am


Easy for
one to fall in love
--Difficult to stay in love!
Learning to hate is
easy, too.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 8:27 pm


This is pretty short, but you could shore it up even more by getting rid of "For" and "One" in the first 2 lines. If you gave "too" it's own line at the end then it would make the poem balance in an interesting way with the two isolated "easy"s

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