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No-Self
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 10:34 pm


This is for the literally-inclined, for those who use lies to tell the truth. Present your grammatical confabulations here; either for feedback from others, or simply to make yourself heard. If you do not wish for others to comment on your works, simply state so somewhere in your post. You don't have to tell everyone their poems are great, but please don't flame.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 3:33 pm


Not sure if there is a certain subject the poems have to be on, I just came home from a very tiring day at school, so I can't think. I have a poem, and if it doesn't fall under this "subject" then please, feel free to delete it.

Best to slow down, don't dance too fast.
Time is short and the music won't last.
When you run so fast, just to get somewhere
You miss half the fun, of getting there.
When you worry and hurry through the day,
It's like an un-opened gift just tossed away.
Life is not a race, so take it slower.
Stop and hear the music, before the time's over.
-Kentallion210

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 3:36 pm


I also have a bad one I did when I was younger...

I see a butterfly flutter by,
and I suddenly wonder why?
Why do they look so happy?
So peaceful, so free?
How do they become so beautiful,
out of something so ugly?
Butterflies will always be a reminder,
that things can change.
First impressions can be deranged.
They are my favorite animal,
because they can change my point of view.
Can they do the same for you?

I don't mind people commenting on my work, whether it's good or bad, because I want to see what other people think whee It's mine and as long as I like it, I'm fine
PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:37 am


"Fair fallen, I've fallen

N'er seen to thee

My my, you've grown so slowly.

Heart tries harder than head to believe,

But lies are the seed, the death, the veil.

Taken, Fair fallen,

Yours no longer.

Keep your hands to yourself

Another is better.

No steam, no heat, no heart have you.

Though through no fault of mine is this, of you.

You fail yourself, Fair fallen, and it shall be

The reasons, of many, I have forsaken thee.

Commitment, Dedication, Appriciation, Understanding

All absent were you from our bond.

And so fair fallen, blame me if you must.

But in your depths of selfisness and mistrust

Lies the TRUTH.

Fear me forever, fair fallen, for I shall haunt your endless need,

And this, the last scrap I bestow your endless greed."
 

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