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PostPosted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 9:29 am


Here's the prologue to Dream Warrior. Coming out February 2009

Lil tidbit before you start: Dream Warrior is Cratus/Jericho's book. It has Jaden, Jared and Nim as well as Nick and Ash in it-- you will meet Jaden's "boss" in this one too!!!


They would be coming for him.

Cratus stood on top of the highest point of Olympus, staring out at the beautiful setting sun. Ribbons of warm color split the darkening sky, reminding him of a brilliant fire opal glistening and twinkling. Nowhere else was it more breathtaking than here and he wanted to watch it set one last time before he submitted himself for his well deserved punishment.

He wouldn't ask for clemency. There was no need. He knew better than anyone the wrath of Zeus. For centuries, he'd been the Olympian god's hammer, carrying out his justice.

Now that justice would come for him.

"Run and I will run with you."

He glanced down at the small form of his sister Nike. Where his wings were black, hers were a pure white. Her dark curly hair was wrapped with a white ribbon that matched her gown. The personification of victory, she'd been his accomplice throughout his entire life.

They, along with their brother and sister had been the sentinels of Zeus. Beloved guardians, they had been treasured by the father of the gods even above Zeus's own children. Until Cratus had committed an unforgivable sin– he'd spared a life he should have taken. It wasn't his place to question his master, only to do his bidding. He still couldn't understand why he'd done it. The gods knew compassion was an alien emotion to him.

Yet here he was...

Time to die.

Cratus sighed wearily. "I can't ask that of you, akribos. You still have Zeus's favor. Don't jeopardize that for me. Besides, no one can run from Olympian justice. You know that as well as I do. No matter where I hide, they will find me."

Nike took his hand and held it to her cheek. "I know why you did it and I respect you for it."

And that changed nothing.

What was done was done. Now there was nothing left except the punishment.

He glanced away from the sun to see her there by his side. Her beautiful face still tucked into the palm of his numb hand. In all eternity, she was the only one he'd ever really trusted. His sister with the haunting pale blue eyes whose courage and loyalty was without equal. For her, he would do anything.

But he would not sacrifice her for his stupidity.

"Stay here where it's safe."

She tightened her grip. "I would rather be with you, brother. To the end as always."

He stroked her cheek tenderly before he dropped his hand away and looked down to where the gods' temples were nestled like jeweled eggs among the ever green foliage. "Stay here, Nike... please."

She nodded, but he saw the reluctance in her eyes. "For you only."

Giving her his golden helm to keep as a memento of their battles together, Cratus kissed her brow before he headed down the mountain toward the hall of the gods. His embossed shield as heavy as his conscience, he leaned on his thick spear to keep him steady on his path.

As promised, Nike stayed behind, but he could feel her gaze on him as he walked. Her offer to run haunted him. But it wasn't in his nature to run from or submit to anything. He was a warrior and it was all he knew. All he lived for.

He would fight to the end.

More than that, he refused to give his enemies the satisfaction of dragging him before Zeus in chains. He'd lived his life standing on his own two feet and so he would die.

Alone. Without flinching, begging or fear.

It was a fitting end really. After all the lives he'd callously taken for Zeus, this would be his penance.

He paused before the doors that led to where the gods would be gathered. He'd walked here among them a hundred thousand times.

But today would be his last.

His head held high, he threw open the huge gold doors. As soon as he did, silence rang out in the hall as everyone held their collective breaths, waiting to see how Zeus would punish him.

Zeus froze in place before his throne, his eyes dark and threatening. Cratus's gaze went to the right side of the dais where his post had been for all these centuries.

It would be his post no more.

Taking a breath for courage, he dropped his shield just inside the door. The hollow, metallic sound echoed loudly in the silence and mimicked the emptiness inside Cratus's heart.

Still, no one moved.

Not even the gowns of the women rustled.

His gaze locked determinedly on Zeus's, he hefted his spear above his shoulder and threw it hard to bury itself in the wall right above Zeus's head- a last act of defiance that made every god present gasp in shock.

Cratus pulled his sword and sheath from over his head and tossed it to the feet of Ares. Next he removed his quiver and bow which he handed to Artemis. With every step he took toward Zeus, he peeled a piece of his armor off and dropped it to the marble floor where it clanked loudly. First vambraces, then his greaves, his cuirass and finally his armored belt.

By the time he reached Zeus, he wore nothing but his brown loincloth. He tucked his wings down and lowered his head in a silent salute to the king of the gods.

Zeus's curse rang out before he pulled a lightning bolt out of his glowing quiver and used it to slash across Cratus's face.

Cratus tasted blood as his eye and cheek erupted with throbbing pain. Covering his face with his hand, he felt the warm blood from his wound pouring between his fingers.

"How dare you come here after what you've done! No one defies me!"

The next blow knocked him off his feet and sent him skittering across the floor. The cold marble peeled at his skin, and bruised his muscles.

He came to rest at the feet of Apollo. Looking down in repugnance, the god sneered at him before he moved back, out of Zeus's line of fire.

Cratus wiped at the blood on his cheek that dripped from his face to the floor before he pushed himself up.

He didn't go far.

Zeus planted his foot on his spine and held him down on his stomach. "You have disobeyed me. I want you to grovel for my mercy."

Cratus shook his head in denial. "I beg for nothing."

Zeus kicked him over and drove a lightning bolt through his shoulder, pinning him to the floor. Cratus screamed out at the piercing agony that pulsed with every beat of his heart.

"You insolent dog. You dare defy me even now?"

"I will not-" his words broke off into a growl as Zeus planted another lightning bolt in his side and then in his other shoulder.

Curling his lip, Zeus stepped back. He swept an imperious glare around the gathered gods. "Is there one among you who will speak up in defense of this defiant maggot?"

With his one undamaged eye, Cratus looked to his brethren.

One by one, they turned away. Hera, Aphrodite, Apollo, Athena, Artemis, Ares, Hephaestus, Poseidon, Demeter, Helios, Hermes, Eros, Hypnos... etcetera. But the ones who really stung were his mother and his brother and sister, Bia.

They stepped back and looked away, shame-faced.

So be it.

In his heart, he knew Nike would have spoken up for him. But she had done as he asked and stayed behind.

Zeus pierced him with another lightning bolt that would have probably hurt too had his body been capable of feeling anymore pain. "It appears no one here cares for you."

Big surprise there. Cratus laughed, spitting up blood, as he remembered the day he'd forced Hephaestus to chain Prometheus to a rock for his eternal punishment. The god had been reluctant to carry out their orders and had called Cratus pitiless for his insistence that they obey Zeus's heartless command.

Cratus in turn had mocked Hephaestus's weak-kneed compassion. He'd told the god it was better to be the punisher than the victim.

Now it was his turn to suffer. No wonder no one would speak up for him.

He deserved no better.

Zeus pulled him up from the floor by his throat. His entire body numb from the pulsating lightning that still pierced his flesh, Cratus could do nothing but stare at the father god.

"Will you pick up your arms and fight for me?"

Cratus shook his head. He would never again serve as a mindless dog obeying his master's every whim.

"Then you will suffer for all eternity and you will beg me every day for my mercy."
PostPosted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 10:26 am


Dream Warrior Excerpt


Delphine paused to get her bearings as she looked around the old buildings with iron work balconies or elaborate wood trim, many of which had boards over their windows. What a strange city... but then she wasn't used to being in the mortal realm except through human dreams.
This place baffled her.
She jumped as a loud sound startled her while a car went speeding past.
Phobos grabbed her arm and yanked her to stand beside him on the uneven sidewalk. "Be careful. If a car hits you, it will hurt."
"Sorry. I wasn't paying attention."
He nodded before he glanced about the street where several cars were parked before a row of houses that were so close together, she wondered if they didn't share a common wall. "The garage should be that one over there."
She looked to where he was pointing. Landry's Garage, Detail and Repair. "Are you sure he's there?"
Phobos gave her a droll stare. "His presence isn't what's in doubt, his reception of us is." He wiped his hand over brow to remove some of the perspiration. But it was quickly replaced by more.
She'd never been in a hotter place in her life. Poor Phobos, wearing all black clothes, wasn't exactly dressed for it either. He looked as miserable in the heat as she felt. She'd always thought of him as one of the more attractive gods with dark hair and sharp features.
His job was to inspire dread and at one time he and his twin brother Deimos had wreaked havoc on ancient battlefields. In more recent centuries, they'd become warriors for the Furies.
Until two days ago when everything had changed...
"How did we get chosen for this again?" she asked him.
"We weren't there when Zeus banished him and therefore he shouldn't hate us as much as he hates the others."
That was comforting...
Not even a little.
And it didn't mean Cratus would listen to them, never mind actually help them. "You think we stand a chance?"
"Not really, but he was born of the same primal powers that birthed Noir and Azura. Without him on our team, we're screwed."
She still wasn't sure about this. Zeus had sent them here to beg a favor from an ex-god who most likely would gut them as soon as they appeared. She'd never met Cratus, but his nasty reputation was legendary.
He had mercy on no one.
His brutality had only been matched by his single-minded determination. Even though Zeus had removed his god powers, the other gods continued to fear him. That alone said it all about his "winning" personality. Hephaestus himself had warned her that there was no reasoning with Cratus.
The man was angry and mean.
And that was before his punishment had driven him insane.
"Are you sure there's no other way?"
Phobos's features darkened. "Half your brethren are dead and every time mine go out, they get their hides kicked back to the Stone Age. Believe me, belly crawling to this a*****e is the last thing I want to do."
But it was a necessary evil.
"Zeus is the one who should be doing this," she groused as she wiped the sweat from her own brow.
Phobos snorted. "You want to tell him that?"
She narrowed her eyes at him. "This was your bright idea, Phobos. You lead the way."
"What are you? Scared?"
She gave him a nasty glare of her own. With her half human blood, she did have more emotions than most of her Dream-Hunter brethren, but they were muted compared to mankind's. "If I were capable of hate, I would probably hate you."
He sucked his breath in sharply between his teeth. "You know, you get the best sex from a woman when she's angry and hating."
"Since I've never had sex with a woman, how would I know?" She shoved him gently on the shoulder to move him forward. "We're on a mission, Dolophonos. Remember if we fail, your twin dies."
"Believe me, I haven't forgotten." He crossed the street.
Delphine followed in spite of the bad feeling she couldn't shake.
They entered the office of the garage to find a small girl who was doodling on a sheet of paper and a woman around the age of thirty sitting at a beaten up desk. The woman was pretty enough, with small brown eyes and dark hair. Her smile was bright as she saw them. "Can I help you?"
Phobos stepped past Delphine to approach the desk. "We're looking for a guy named Cratus."
She frowned. "I don't know anyone by that name. Sorry. Maybe he's at the garage down the street."
Phobos scratched his head, obviously as baffled as Delphine was. "I know for a fact that he works here in this garage."
The little girl wiped her nose and pushed a pair of glasses back with her knuckle. "Did they lose their friend, Mommy?"
"Do your homework, boo." She turned her attention back to Phobos. "Look, I'm really sorry, but I've never heard the name Cratus before. I've worked here for five years and I assure you that none of our guys are named that. It's not exactly a name you'd forget– you know?" The phone started ringing. She put her hand on it. "Is there anything else I can do for you?"
"No." Phobos stepped over to the large window that looked out from the office into the garage area where men in coveralls were working on various cars.
Delphine followed his lead and froze as she saw the man they sought.
Holy gods...
No one could miss him.
Little wonder he was the god of strength and the son of war... That power and formidableness bled from every pore of his body. Standing well over six feet tall, he rippled with well defined muscles as he wiped grease from his hands with a dark blue cloth. His gray coverall suit had been unzipped, and the sleeves wrapped around his lean waist, leaving his torso covered only by a black tank top that only made those muscles more apparent. Black tribal tattoos decorated both of his arms from the wrists to his shoulders.
But it was his face that made her gasp. She'd never seen a man more beautifully made, except for the jagged scar that ran down the right side of his face, hairline to earlobe. His right eye was covered with a black patch and from the depth of the scar, she wondered if he'd lost the eye completely to whatever injury had caused it.
Yet it in no way detracted from his handsomeness. If anything, it added to it. His jet black hair was sweaty and curled slightly around a face that was chiseled from steel and dusted with dark whiskers.
Fierce power emanated from every inch of him. Strong and lethal, it said he should be on a battlefield, sword in hand, killing and maiming. He was everything she'd heard and more.
May the gods help them...
If he didn't kill the two of them, she'd be stunned.
Phobos glanced at Delphine over his shoulder. "He is definitely here."
The secretary frowned as she hung up the phone and saw Cratus through the window. "You're looking for Jericho?"
Phobos faced her. "You mean Cratus."
She pointed at the man Delphine had been ogling. "That's Jericho Davis. He's only been here a couple of weeks. Is he in trouble with the law or something? If you're here to serve process-"
"No. Nothing like that." Phobos gave her an almost charming smile. "We're old friends."
She narrowed her eyes suspiciously. "Well if his name isn't Jericho Davis, we need to know. Landry is a stickler about his people toeing the line. We don't take in convicts or riffraff here. This is a respectable business and we intend to keep it that way."
Phobos held his hands up. "Don't worry, I'm sure he's not a felon. I just need to talk to him for a minute."
The secretary snorted. "I thought you said you knew him."
"I do."
"Then how are you going to talk to a man who's mute?"
Phobos snapped his attention to Delphine who was as shocked as he was by that disclosure.
Surely Zeus wouldn't have been that cruel...
What was she? Insane? Of course he would.
Sick with the thought, Delphine looked back to where "Jericho" had his head under the hood of another car. What exactly had been done to him? Zeus had taken his godhood, his life and most likely his voice and eye.
Getting his help was looking less and less likely by the second.
"You stay here," Phobos said as he put his hand on the knob of the door that led from the office to the garage.
No problem there. She'd rather confront a rabid lion than try to gain a favor from a man the gods had screwed over so badly. Why on earth or beyond would this man ever help them?
Hoping for the best, she walked to the window to watch Phobos. She closed her eyes and opened herself up to the ether so that she could hear their conversation.
The shop was loud with mechanical noises and a radio playing Live Your Life by T.I. Several of the men were chatting and joking while they worked.
Phobos paused by the white Intrepid where Cratus stood.
Cratus glanced up and his face froze an instant before he looked back down and continued working.
Phobos stepped closer. "We need to talk."
Cratus ignored him.
"Cratus–"
"I don't know what you're doing in here," an older man in a coverall matching Cratus's said as he stopped beside Phobos. "But you're wasting your time trying to talk to old Jericho there. Boy can't speak." The man patted Jericho on the arm. "Not that he needs to. The way he works on a car is magic." The man looked at the others and laughed. "Trying to talk to Jericho..." More laughter joined his before he walked off to work on a Jeep.
"Jericho," Phobos tried again. "Please give me one minute of your time."
If looks could kill Phobos would be a distant memory. Jericho flipped the wrench in his hand before he walked over to another car.
Phobos glanced at Delphine who shrugged in response. She had no idea how to persuade him.
Sighing, Phobos followed him. "C'mon, I–"
Jericho spun on him so fast that she hadn't even realized he'd moved until he had Phobos slung over the hood of the car and pinned in place by a tight hold on this throat. "******** off and die, you putrid b*****d," he snarled in the ancient Greek language of the gods as he banged Phobos's head furiously against the hood.
Every mechanic who heard his deep growl paused to stare at them.
"Be damned," a tall, lean African-American man said. "He can speak after all. "Anybody know what language that was?"
"Russian?"
"Nah, I think it's German."
"Dude," a younger guy said, pulling at Cratus's arm. "You're going to dent the hood and when you do, that will come out of your paycheck."
Grimacing, Cratus slung Phobos off the hood like a rag doll. Phobos rolled half way through the bay before he caught himself.
His featured shaken, Phobos pushed himself to his feet. When he spoke, he continued to use their language so that the humans wouldn't understand them. "We need your help, Cratus."
As he moved past Phobos, he drove his shoulder into Phobos's, making Phobos grimace in pain and rub his arm. He went back to the Intrepid. "Cratus is dead."
"You're the only one–"
Cratus growled at him. "You're dead to me. All of you. Now, get out."
Delphine projected her thoughts to Phobos. "Should I come in?"
"No. I don't think it'll help." Phobos turned to Cratus. "The fate of the world is in your hands. Don't you care?"
The feral look Cratus gave him said no. Well that and for him to go to Tartarus and rot.
Delphine sighed. What were they going to do now? They needed the god of strength. One who could pull power from the primal source to combat the most evil of beings. Without Cratus, they didn't stand a chance.
The older man walked over to Cratus. "So what country are you from, anyway?"
Cratus ignored him as he returned to work in silence.
Phobos moved to stand by his side. "Zeus is willing to forgive you for what you did. He's offering you your godhood back. All of it. We need you."
When Cratus still refused to respond, Phobos let out a frustrated breath. "Look, I understand why you're mad. But my brother's life is on the line here. If you don't help me, Noir will kill him."
"I don't give a single s**t."
A muscle worked in Phobos's jaw. "Fine. When the world ends and everyone here is dead, remember you're the only one of us who could have stopped it."
Cratus continued to ignore him.
Phobos turned and headed back for her.
Delphine kept waiting for Cratus to reconsider and stop Phobos. But he really looked like he meant what he said. He didn't care.

Even she who had nothing save muted emotions had more feelings than this man showed.
"We're so dead," Phobos said in a dire tone as he rejoined here. "Maybe we ought to join the other team before we're more than a distant memory."

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 8:19 pm


My dad just down loaded this and a whole lot more onto something. I get to read every book she's written including as Kinley Macgregor. It helps that he put them on the new Laptop's me and Rave got for Christmas(Tradition is to open one gift on Christmas Eve, since we're having it a day early because my brother has work we got to open one gift early).
PostPosted: Fri Dec 26, 2008 10:07 am


Sounds like you had a great X-mas!!! I'm happy for ya guys ^__^

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 9:28 am


This thread is now open for Book Discussion, so come on in, have some hot cocoa (lil fluffy marshmallows included xd ) and let us know what you think of SK's latest creation!
PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:26 am


I just finished this Thursday. I had to wait a while for my turn with the library book and then I was so busy last week I couldn't read it. I'm so glad I got to read it before it was due back today. sweatdrop
Anyways, I totally loved this one. Jericho is one of my new favorites. Delphine kicks a** too. I like her naive and innocent side because it reminds me of myself. I just wish I could fight like her too... blaugh
When Jericho alludes to Jaden and Jared's relationship as like "brothers, lovers, or really close friends" I almost had a yaoi-fan-girl moment where I was like "They're lovers! Yes!" But then I remembered Kenyon had mentioned on her site the different arks and that one or both had their own arc (like Ash's that just finished) and sadly, I was forced to come to grips, that they most likely had a female heroine waiting in the wings. (Even Ash would have made some really hot yaoi fanfic- ie: AshxNick, lol.)
I also like the curious twist they threw in at the end. I won't give it away, but what does everyone think of Jaden's comment at the end?

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:17 am


I agree with everything you said! Good grief I've been racking my brain with that comment at the end. What does it mean? What's gonna happen? Why do we have to wait so long for the next book to come out?!?! **eye twitches** eek

There was a bit of yaoi in this series, can't remember the book but it was between Stryker and some other guy he was feeding of off.
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