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 Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 11:03 am
 Was this what you meant? This is what i assumed you meant by an image and haiku.
If you can't read it, start on the left side of the trunk. It says -
Nature, So Beautiful
Sunsets, Trees, Flowers and Such
Take my Breath Away.....
Let me know what you think =D
By the way, this is my first Writing Workshop entry. just letting you know. I think I did what I was supposed to for it...
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:23 pm
This is seriouse talent 3nodding you're good at this.
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:45 pm
This is really good.
The only problem is the first line is 6 syllables... not 5.
Oh, and, haha, you didn't actually have to draw a picture but that's cute. [:
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 9:53 am
 Ah, oops.
How did I miss the first line thing?
Weird..
Ah well, it was fun, and thank you to both of you! heart
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Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 9:56 pm
Lol, so what if you didn't follow the rules exactly. It's still awesome xd besides, it's ok if kaikus have one or two more syllables then they say. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:11 pm
It's nice that you're so creative! ^.^ Not many people would draw a picture for it, or really even think of it that way. And, despite that latched-on syllable, it was a good haiku!
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