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 Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 12:47 am
Title : No Title( I Did It As Freestyle)
Author : SamsuL/Firezz3One And Two
Can I Let Go Of You
Feeling Kinda Wanna Do
Everyday We Feeling Blue
Blue Colour As a Clue
Murdered Scene We Found a Clue
Playing Detective We Gonna Do
Solving The Case That Should We Do
We've Done The Murdered Case
Like Thousand Other Case
Problem Solved
Case Solved
Now What We Gonna Do ?
This Is Been a SamsuL/Firezz3 Service Freestylin'
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Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 11:04 pm
Interesting, and I like how it does tie into something you're going through. (Sorry, couldn't resist rhyming with you.)
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dramaartwriting Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 5:00 am
Reply
Thank You Sir~
That Is My Style Of Freestyle~
It's Ok Sir~
This Is Been a SamsuL/Firezz3 Service Reply
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 6:49 am
Title : Me
Author : SamsuL/Firezz3
Me , Me , It's All About Me
I Do Love Me
Like I Do Love Me
He Say , She Say , I Say I Love Me
Art , Unusual , Creative It's All In Me
Inside , Outside SamsuL Is Me
Firezz3 Is Just Imaginary Me
Gaia Online Is Not Me
But Gaia Online Played By Me
And Me , Me , I Am Me
He Say SamsuL , She Say Firezz3 , I Say Me
This Poem Got To End By Me
Specificly The Poem End By SamsuL , That Is Me !
P/S - Inspired By Lil Wayne . LOL .
NOTICE : Sorry , I'm Not Active Lately . I'm Too Busy With School Stuff . I'll Try My Best On Posting Lots And Lots Of POST (LOL) .
This Is Been a SamsuL/Firezz3 Service Announcement
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dramaartwriting Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 11:37 am
That's ok.
By the way I seem to get my kicks by being about others.
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 8:06 pm
Thank You For Understanding Sir ~
That's Good For You Sir .
I've Been Busy Lately . Huh~ Tired Me ~
And And And The Basketball Tournament Is Just Around The Corner . Wuwuwu . I'm Getting Nervous .
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 12:58 am
Title - ........
Author - You Know Who ~
Nervous Breakdown
But Their Not Gonna Be Down
They Gonna Beat It
They Gonna Kick It
You Can See More And More War
But We Wanna See NO WAR ! ( scream )
Don't Be a Macho Man
Because You Killed Lots Of Human
You Leaved Your Land When You're In a War
Now You Wanted Your Land Back And Started a War
Just Stop It
I Said Just Stop It ! ( scream )
P/S - I Don't Wanna Hate You But You Force Me To Hate You .
Another P/S - Please Pray ~ Stop The War , Stop The Battle , Stop Every Cruel Things ~ And Let Us Bring The Peace ~
This Is Been a SamsuL/Firezz3 Service Announcement
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:57 pm
The only hope I have for changing people's minds to not supporting the war is by treating them with respect and presenting a loving outlook by example and teaching the young to love instead of hate or it will lead to the same thing, the division that leads to violence, on both sides people hate because they don't understand each other's ways and the leaders they want more and more power because they already have so much and don't know what else to do they don't want to stop and they say that war is peace and that hate is love in their TV lies all the time and a lot of people believe but what we need is for to show them, make them see that there can be a better way and that deep inside there really is nothing to hate about the person their life, only the violence they do, and that's the same no matter who you are.
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dramaartwriting Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 6:09 am
Yea~
I'm Sad~
I'll Do Whatever I Can Do~
Peace!Peace! No War!
Hehe~
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 6:31 am
Title : ...........
Author : SamsuL/Firezz3
She Got Free To Talk
He Got Free To Speak
We Never Stop Talk
They Think Their Real Speak
I Need Time To Talk
You Give Me Time To Speak
I Give You Time To Talk
You Need Time To Speak
This Is Been a SamsuL/Firezz3 Service Announcement
P/S : I Was Bored And I Had To Go To Sleep So Quick Freestyle Poem Before I Go To Bed And An Art Is Born . Hehehe~ I Love Art .
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dramaartwriting Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 9:42 am
It's a poem about expressing oneself, right? Though it's a little redundant, maybe make it more concise or else go the other way and get into specifics about what you're talking about instead of generalities. (Like what are they talking about? What's keeping them from talking? Why don't they have time?)
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:00 am
Errr....No~ Hehehe...Let Me Explain Sir ~ Freestyle Poem Can Be a Poem Without a Meaning Or With a Meaning Or a Poem Just For Fun . What I'm Doing Is a Freestyle Poem Without a Meaning . Could Say a Poem Just For Fun Because I Do It Spontaneous With Out Any Inspirational Or Anything . Like Rapping Spontaneously . Do You Understand My Explanation Sir ? I'm Not a Good Explainer ... Hehehe .
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:28 am
Title : Nature
Author : SamsuL/Firezz3
You Hurting Our Mother Nature
I'm Healing Our Only Nature
How Could You Do Like That ?
With Out It We Are Dead
You're Happy With Those Green Paper
I'm Sad The Tree Gonna Be Paper
I Set Birth To Tree
You Set Death To Tree
I Try To Save The River
You Try To Destroy The River
You Say You Doesn't Care
If It's Gone Do You Care ?
Now You're Crying , Right ?
Do You Feel It Right ?
Repent Right Now
So We Can Save It Now
This Is Been a SamsuL/Firezz3 Service Announcement
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:35 am
PEACE ! PEACE ! NO WAR ! This Is Been a SamsuL/Firezz3 Service Announcement
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