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 Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 4:10 pm
Rose_Buds92's Poetry Contest
I love poetry with a passion so I thought this would be kind of fun. mrgreen This is how it will work:
You may write a poem about anything of your choosing. The poetry will be judged according to creativity, originality of your idea and clarity. I am not going to be mentally docking points for every grammar or spelling error you make but if there are a lot of noticeable errors, it WILL have an impact on my judging, so please proof read your work. You may only enter ONE entry, so choose well.
PRIZES:
First Place=10,000 gold
Second Place=2,000 gold + Black Wulf Tail
Third Place=500 gold + Fresh Grass Hat
ALL ENTRIES MUST BE IN NO LATER THAN JANUARY SIXTEENTH, NO EXCEPTIONS!
Have fun! heart
UPDATE:WINNERS
First Place=Serari Ping "Bloody Massacre"
Second Place=nikkie1357 "Angel Down"
Third Place=polishgrl101
I want to thank you all for participating and I want you all to know that even if you didn't win a prize, you are all fantastic writers. I had some difficulty judging because of that. sweatdrop Thanks again! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 7:14 am
The fat rat was being chased by an even fatter cat that wanted a red and white stripped hat, so it could be like Dr.Suesses "Cat in the Hat". After the very fat cat caught the rat, the cat decided to stop rhyming things like "hat", "cat", "rat", and "fat"
lol I am not creative at all~!!!
and P.S. like this is suposed to be the cat telling the story xd
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:16 am
Hello sarah. =]
Just thought i would say hi.
It was me who clicked no...poetry is for nerd...it made me laugh so i had to.
=D
Cause nerds are awesome...i love " nerds" them sweets sorry candy is awesome. shame cant get them here anymore sad silly england.
Yes i twisted the word smile
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:55 pm
my poem =]
They come once a year for up to 12 months
One is hot and breezy with loads of sun
The other one is cold with lots of leaks
Both can be a bore and/or tons of fun
Summer is the best season for yourself
Theres always so many things to do and
You can always dream up a little elfs
While building their castle out of sand
But, the season of winter is a blast
You can gosledding or build a snowman
Or you can go outside and cast and mast
But be weary of stan's plan of japan
Summer and winter are just half the year
So come quick or youll miss the white tailed dear
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:09 am
polishgrl101 They come once a year for up to 12 months One is hot and breezy with loads of sun The other one is cold with lots of leaks Both can be a bore and/or tons of fun Summer is the best season for yourself Theres always so many things to do and You can always dream up a little elfs While building their castle out of sand But, the season of winter is a blast You can gosledding or build a snowman Or you can go outside and cast and mast But be weary of stan's plan of japan Summer and winter are just half the year So come quick or youll miss the white tailed dear dang girl~!! you got the 10k in the bag already!!
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:45 pm
(This is a Narrative Poem, I hope you don't mind it, I know it's a bit...different but, enjoy ^^)
The First Snow of Winter
By Kyle Von Parry
I rode with my stepmother to the doctor’s office
My throat had been sore for a few days and this afternoon I saw a white spot
When we arrived the doctor confirmed it was strep throat,
Before we got home we stopped to get the antibiotics.
I fell asleep on the ride there and while she was in the drug store I napped
The heat radiating from the heater moved its way from my feet up to my already beard warmed cheeks
The warmth flowed through my body as if it were the ocean, lulling me to a gently napping state.
I’m not sure how long she was in there; it couldn’t have been more than ten minutes
But in my daze it felt like a couple of hours
Then she opened the driver’s door and the sudden rush of cold air jolted me awake
She handed me the bag of meds and we passed small talk on my being sick;
I watched out the window as we made our way home through the oddly heavy traffic
The lights from vehicles and traffic lights seemed more vibrant than usual to me.
The snow seemed the same,
If flew through the air and wafted to the ground were it quickly melted from the previously fallen rain.
We arrived home and I rushed inside to the warmth and made my way down to my room
Still drowsy I laid down on my bed, under the covers and with my stuffed penguin, and napped
I held the penguin the same as every night, imagining my sweet, sweet angel.
I awoke again an hour or so later and went upstairs to look out the window and then I saw it;
The freshly fallen bed of snow that laid outspread on our yard
The grass and the walk, and the street and the houses
They were all covered, but in their stead was a new beauty
A cold beauty, the winter’s first snowfall
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 8:10 pm
polishgrl101 They come once a year for up to 12 months One is hot and breezy with loads of sun The other one is cold with lots of leaks Both can be a bore and/or tons of fun Summer is the best season for yourself Theres always so many things to do and You can always dream up a little elfs While building their castle out of sand But, the season of winter is a blast You can gosledding or build a snowman Or you can go outside and cast and mast But be weary of stan's plan of japan Summer and winter are just half the year So come quick or youll miss the white tailed dear hey great job, I really enjoyed this, best of luck to you smile you've got some real talent, keep up the good work yeah? *hugs*
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 12:46 pm
Victor Curio polishgrl101 They come once a year for up to 12 months One is hot and breezy with loads of sun The other one is cold with lots of leaks Both can be a bore and/or tons of fun Summer is the best season for yourself Theres always so many things to do and You can always dream up a little elfs While building their castle out of sand But, the season of winter is a blast You can gosledding or build a snowman Or you can go outside and cast and mast But be weary of stan's plan of japan Summer and winter are just half the year So come quick or youll miss the white tailed dear hey great job, I really enjoyed this, best of luck to you smile you've got some real talent, keep up the good work yeah? *hugs*
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:18 pm
polishgrl101 Victor Curio polishgrl101 They come once a year for up to 12 months One is hot and breezy with loads of sun The other one is cold with lots of leaks Both can be a bore and/or tons of fun Summer is the best season for yourself Theres always so many things to do and You can always dream up a little elfs While building their castle out of sand But, the season of winter is a blast You can gosledding or build a snowman Or you can go outside and cast and mast But be weary of stan's plan of japan Summer and winter are just half the year So come quick or youll miss the white tailed dear hey great job, I really enjoyed this, best of luck to you smile you've got some real talent, keep up the good work yeah? *hugs* to each writer may a decent prize go to biggrin
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:46 pm
Well me and my friend made up this kinda poet thing together, but since she doesnt have gaia i put it on my pro <33 hope u enjoy (:
Remember when getting high meant swinging at the playground.The worst thing you could get from boys was cooties.Your worst enemies were your siblings.Race issues were who ran the fastest.War was a card game.The only drug you knew of was cough medicine &;; wearing skirts didnt mean you were a slut.The only thing you smoked were the tires on your bike. The only thing that hurt was skinned knees &;; the only thing that could get broken were your toys. Life was simple and carefree. But what i remember most was wanting to grow up...&;; now i would give anything to go back.
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:48 pm
polishgrl101 They come once a year for up to 12 months One is hot and breezy with loads of sun The other one is cold with lots of leaks Both can be a bore and/or tons of fun Summer is the best season for yourself Theres always so many things to do and You can always dream up a little elfs While building their castle out of sand But, the season of winter is a blast You can gosledding or build a snowman Or you can go outside and cast and mast But be weary of stan's plan of japan Summer and winter are just half the year So come quick or youll miss the white tailed dear boo u stink!! HAHA THAT DIDNT EVEN MAKE SENSE!!!! haha j/k Love , ya sistaa
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:24 pm
-Loopy_Brunch- Well me and my friend made up this kinda poet thing together, but since she doesnt have gaia i put it on my pro <33 hope u enjoy (:
Remember when getting high meant swinging at the playground.The worst thing you could get from boys was cooties.Your worst enemies were your siblings.Race issues were who ran the fastest.War was a card game.The only drug you knew of was cough medicine &;; wearing skirts didnt mean you were a slut.The only thing you smoked were the tires on your bike. The only thing that hurt was skinned knees &;; the only thing that could get broken were your toys. Life was simple and carefree. But what i remember most was wanting to grow up...&;; now i would give anything to go back. That was very beautiful and so so true, I remember those times...they were better times ^^
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 3:57 pm
z -Loopy_Brunch- polishgrl101 They come once a year for up to 12 months One is hot and breezy with loads of sun The other one is cold with lots of leaks Both can be a bore and/or tons of fun Summer is the best season for yourself Theres always so many things to do and You can always dream up a little elfs While building their castle out of sand But, the season of winter is a blast You can gosledding or build a snowman Or you can go outside and cast and mast But be weary of stan's plan of japan Summer and winter are just half the year So come quick or youll miss the white tailed dear boo u stink!! HAHA THAT DIDNT EVEN MAKE SENSE!!!! haha j/k Love , ya sista
haha >;D lol jkjk love u 2 sis =PP
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:06 pm
polishgrl101 z -Loopy_Brunch- polishgrl101 They come once a year for up to 12 months One is hot and breezy with loads of sun The other one is cold with lots of leaks Both can be a bore and/or tons of fun Summer is the best season for yourself Theres always so many things to do and You can always dream up a little elfs While building their castle out of sand But, the season of winter is a blast You can gosledding or build a snowman Or you can go outside and cast and mast But be weary of stan's plan of japan Summer and winter are just half the year So come quick or youll miss the white tailed dear boo u stink!! HAHA THAT DIDNT EVEN MAKE SENSE!!!! haha j/k Love , ya sista
haha love u >;D lol jkjk hate u 2 sis =PP
hey i was tring to be nice ):
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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 5:10 am
here go's my poem but let me warn you that i haven't done this sorta thing in like 7 years....
my body so cold,
my heart slowly stops,
my color fades,
and my life is almost extinguished,
won't you miss me when i'm gone?
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