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 Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 5:26 pm
Fate.They say it is meant to be.Really?Is it really?Well what if your always right and then one day your wrong?I wondered this as i walked down the old roads of Anata Town.I was heading home to make an apple cake,when suddenly a boy steps in front of me. eek .who are you?i asked.He said nothing.He leaned in and quickly gave me a kiss on the cheek.I am your one and only lover,He whispered.Then he ran away.His voice was enchanting,i almost wanted to believe him,chase after him,talk to him.But when i looked in the direction he ran,he was gone.I didnt know he could run that fast.I never met him before,but i already fell in love with him.Was this fate?
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 5:28 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:59 am
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Good Day Miss~
Yes , This Story Got Dramatic ! Good .
Try Making The Character More Confuse At The Beginning Of The Story . To Make The Story More Interesting .
Overall Quite Good .
Keep Up The Good Work Miss .
This Is Been a SamsuL/Firezz3 Service Comment
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 5:15 pm
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