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 Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 7:07 am
This is my first - no second - attempt at writing a poem. All previous opinions were from friends and family so I need a double check. It is suppose to be written by one of my characters, a fourteen year old Irish girl. I hope I made it believably by someone like her:
Irish fields,
Gleaming, breathing, living,
My home village,
Overlooking the beautiful sight.
Me and Eric ran, so far, so free, so happy.
Irish fields,
Oh my what a pretty sight.
Irish seas,
Shining, waving, living,
My home village,
Depending on this calming site.
Me and Eric swam so free, so deep, so happy.
Irish seas,
Oh my what an awing sight.
Irish caves,
Sighing, groaning, living,
My home village,
So far from this lordly sight.
Me and Eric braved so deep, so far, so happy.
Irish caves,
Oh how much I miss that sight.
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 5:38 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 9:22 pm
Thank you. Anyone else have an opinion?
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:15 pm
Its got soul smile great job
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:19 pm
I want to go to Ireland now. crying
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