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 Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:51 pm
Well, myself and Bella_Swan3 were bored one day and decided to put our imaginations to work and write a fanfiction, and we ended up writing this. Post back your thoughts - healthy criticism and ideas are always good. Hope you enjoy it...
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:02 pm
Chapter 1: Lime Green…
The sky was dismal as we strolled along the sidewalk, a typical day in Forks. Edward was gently bouncing Renesmee in his arms, while Jacob enviously watched on. I was looking forward to seeing Charlie and Sue. The sky thundered as we reached the door of what used to be my home. I reached my ghostly white hand towards the door, knocking softly 3 times. The door swung open and revealed a newly engaged Sue Clearwater. She beamed at us as she stepped aside to let us through.
“Bella!” Charlie’s voice echoed through the house, as he stepped out of the kitchen – covered in flour.
I gaped at him and Sue laughed. “Wow! Sue really has made an impact on every part of your life, hey chief!” Jacob laughed, cheekily.
“Whatever your cooking, it smells… fantastic,” chimed in Edward. Renesmee giggled, shrilly and Charlie’s attention suddenly turned to his bubbly granddaughter.
“Hello little one,” Charlie cooed. Jacob looked on, amused.
“Dad, how are you?” I asked, as Edward reached out and handed Renesmee to Charlie.
“Never better, Bells.” He winked, putting an arm around Sue.
“Alice and I have picked out the wedding dresses – I hope you like lime green!” Sue gushed, excitedly.
I nearly choked, “Lime Green? Umm, no I have never really had a great affection for that particular colour.” I replied, putting it as kindly as possible.
“That’s lucky, because aqua narrowly won over it,” Sue giggled. I breathed a sigh of relief. What was Alice thinking? I thought to myself.
“Excuse us for a moment,” Charlie said, handing Renesmee back to Bella, grinning. I nodded and looked around the house.
“C’mon Nessie, lets go and see my old room,” I whispered in her ear. I jumped up the stairs, 2 at a time, Edward and Jacob following close behind. I opened the door and gasped at what I saw.
“Charlie, what have you done to my ROOM?!” I shouted, turning around and running back down the stairs, lightning fast. Charlie came out of the kitchen, grinning sheepishly. I composed myself enough to re-ask the question.
“There’s a cot in my room… Why?!” Charlie reached and put a supportive arm around Sue’s waist.
“Well, the thing is… I’m pregnant!” Sue squealed. The room became silent as Renesmee clapped her hands together, happily, and my jaw dropped so far I think it hit the floor.
“Seriously?” Jacob asked. Sue and Charlie nodded, excitedly.
“Well, err, Congratulations!” I screamed, pulling them into my arms and embracing them both.
“Yeah, Congrats man!” Jacob cried. Edward nodded and joined into the family hug. Renesme gurgled and everyone laughed.
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“A child, at their age?!” I cried, as Edward pulled me into his arms.
“Everything will be great – Charlie and Sue aren’t that old anyway,” Edward reasoned. I heard light snoring coming from Renesmee’s room and smiled to myself.
“Well, if it makes them happy…” I started, helplessly. Edward smiled and stared thoughtfully into the fireplace. My head rested gently on his chest and I sat contentedly listening to Renesmee’s soft snores.
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Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 7:15 am
cool as man. Hopefully you can post more?? *hinthint*
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