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Care Bear Assassin Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:08 pm
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HAVE ANY STORY IDEAS YOU WANT TO SHARE AND GET INPUT ON?
This is the right place!
Discuss:
Story Ideas
Constructive Criticism
Proper Grammar (please?)
and anything else you/others would like help with
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 7:44 pm
Oh powerful CBA!
What do you think of this?
*shh, I know you've seen it before*
The Thought Stealer
Paige Hentley is a normal girl with normal ambitions. However, she soon finds that things are slipping away and her life is going in another direction. As the severity of unnatural forgetfulness and confusion increases, Paige discovers she’s involved in a plot grander than she could imagine. With help from new friends, Paige must journey through the Underside of the city and solve the mystery of the Thought Stealer before she is lost forever.
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Care Bear Assassin Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:34 pm
A r y k o n a Oh powerful CBA! What do you think of this? *shh, I know you've seen it before* The Thought Stealer Paige Hentley is a normal girl with normal ambitions. However, she soon finds that things are slipping away and her life is going in another direction. As the severity of unnatural forgetfulness and confusion increases, Paige discovers she’s involved in a plot grander than she could imagine. With help from new friends, Paige must journey through the Underside of the city and solve the mystery of the Thought Stealer before she is lost forever. .:♠
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I love that one!
Even though it took a few minutes of you explaining that one part to me XD
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:39 pm
Care Bear Assassin A r y k o n a Oh powerful CBA! What do you think of this? *shh, I know you've seen it before* The Thought Stealer Paige Hentley is a normal girl with normal ambitions. However, she soon finds that things are slipping away and her life is going in another direction. As the severity of unnatural forgetfulness and confusion increases, Paige discovers she’s involved in a plot grander than she could imagine. With help from new friends, Paige must journey through the Underside of the city and solve the mystery of the Thought Stealer before she is lost forever. .:♠
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I love that one!
Even though it took a few minutes of you explaining that one part to me XD
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♠:. XD Do you think towns would be a good place to advertise?
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Care Bear Assassin Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:42 pm
A r y k o n a Care Bear Assassin A r y k o n a Oh powerful CBA! What do you think of this? *shh, I know you've seen it before* The Thought Stealer Paige Hentley is a normal girl with normal ambitions. However, she soon finds that things are slipping away and her life is going in another direction. As the severity of unnatural forgetfulness and confusion increases, Paige discovers she’s involved in a plot grander than she could imagine. With help from new friends, Paige must journey through the Underside of the city and solve the mystery of the Thought Stealer before she is lost forever. .:♠
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I love that one!
Even though it took a few minutes of you explaining that one part to me XD
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♠:. XD Do you think towns would be a good place to advertise? .:♠
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lawl, I wouldn't do it. but you can try xD
some very aggressive people in towns. might bite yer head off.
rofl
lmao, funny picture XD
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 1:36 pm
A few friends of mine have decided to make a horror (mini) movie, and I'm the one that is supposed to write the script. Here is the plot, I need a few opinions on it before I actually start writing the script.
Blaire and Jonathan are brother and sister, and they just moved into town. They moved from New York and they hate the quiet suburbs. However their father‘s job relocated to Princeton and their mother had fallen in love with an interesting Victorian styled antique house. The thing that is even more interesting then the house is the secrets that are held inside of them. While they and a couple of friends were exploring the attic, they stumble upon a couple a few couple hundred of letters. All the letters seem to date back to the years 1942 to 1945. Apparently the person who had lived in the house many years ago was named Olivia. She was in love with Johnson and they were engaged to become married. Then Johnson was called to serve in the war during WWII and he left for Japan. That’s when the letters had started.
Blaire had been really interested in the letters, but Jonathan thought they were just a whole bunch of love crap. However they still thought of the attic as their little hang out place. One day on the bottom of the pile Blaire finds a series of angry letters and reads them to her brother. Apparently the war was over, but Johnson had not returned home. In the letter he says that he settled down in Japan is now married to a nurse who was in the army with him. She is already expecting a child. Then there are a few unsent letters from Olivia that state how upset she is, how much she hates him, and how she is going to kill herself. Then the letters stopped for good.
Blaire just thought it was an interesting story, and Jonathan just thought it was somewhat cool that his name was mentioned within these letters. Little do they know that Olivia’s spirit still lives, and she has never properly got her revenge.
Olivia’s spirit assumes that John is her long lost lover and Blaire is his new mistress. She taunts him in the night until she can’t bear to stay away anymore. Finally she begins to meddle with their lives so much, that she wants them, and all of those who are associated with them dead. Will Blaire and Jonathan escape the clutches of a once young lady gone mad?
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Care Bear Assassin Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 9:25 pm
MorbidGrace A few friends of mine have decided to make a horror (mini) movie, and I'm the one that is supposed to write the script. Here is the plot, I need a few opinions on it before I actually start writing the script. Blaire and Jonathan are brother and sister, and they just moved into town. They moved from New York and they hate the quiet suburbs. However their father‘s job relocated to Princeton and their mother had fallen in love with an interesting Victorian styled antique house. The thing that is even more interesting then the house is the secrets that are held inside of them. While they and a couple of friends were exploring the attic, they stumble upon a couple a few couple hundred of letters. All the letters seem to date back to the years 1942 to 1945. Apparently the person who had lived in the house many years ago was named Olivia. She was in love with Johnson and they were engaged to become married. Then Johnson was called to serve in the war during WWII and he left for Japan. That’s when the letters had started.
Blaire had been really interested in the letters, but Jonathan thought they were just a whole bunch of love crap. However they still thought of the attic as their little hang out place. One day on the bottom of the pile Blaire finds a series of angry letters and reads them to her brother. Apparently the war was over, but Johnson had not returned home. In the letter he says that he settled down in Japan is now married to a nurse who was in the army with him. She is already expecting a child. Then there are a few unsent letters from Olivia that state how upset she is, how much she hates him, and how she is going to kill herself. Then the letters stopped for good.
Blaire just thought it was an interesting story, and Jonathan just thought it was somewhat cool that his name was mentioned within these letters. Little do they know that Olivia’s spirit still lives, and she has never properly got her revenge.
Olivia’s spirit assumes that John is her long lost lover and Blaire is his new mistress. She taunts him in the night until she can’t bear to stay away anymore. Finally she begins to meddle with their lives so much, that she wants them, and all of those who are associated with them dead. Will Blaire and Jonathan escape the clutches of a once young lady gone mad?It seems like I've heard the plot somewhere before. The part where a spirit recognizes someone to take revenge on even though it's not the same person. But other than that, I really like it!
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