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 Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:57 pm
It took me a while but I got it!! I did 5 pages, but there in process.
Here's the link: http://jazselup101.deviantart.com/art/Destiny-s-Skies-Ch-1-109199415
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:37 am
...It's...interesting...? uuuh...Get Aud1o over here,SOMEBODY!!
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:07 am
Hm, the link on the second page (the second drawn page) returned me back to the first page, I thought you said that you finished 5 pages? A well, maybe they're not online yet
I like it though, it's cute :3
The style is simple and sweet^^
The paneling style looks a bit more like comic than manga (but there's nothing wrong with that) and maybe you've drawn the fench a bit to much
(if you just simply skim your eyes over the page, you notice the fench immediatly, kind of logical cos it's in about every panel and has thicker lines than everything else)
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 4:06 am
I think you mean FENCE...
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:01 am
Hey, I'm not english and you understood what I meant
So what's the problem with fench? blaugh
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