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My poem, Is it good?

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chibabydoll

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 4:15 pm


Is this good or not? I dont rhyme things in case you ask.

Melody

Music is a poem
a certain way of life
something you're born knowing
or if not
the beat is lost
PostPosted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 11:31 pm


I like it, it has a nice ring. It's short, but that gives it charm. but at the same time you should consider writing a longer version.  

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