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Taco Muffins

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:52 pm


: D
I'm really proud of myself.
Please tell me what you think,
criticism is appreciated as well as
compliments.


Do your homework and get good grades.
Smiles are big, so I persuade.
The media can tell us lies.
If they can, then why can't I?


Wear tight clothes, show off my assets.
Dye my hair completely black.
All my friends on these diets.
Why can't you just stay on track?


Smoke that weed and be a loner.
Everybody loves a stoner.
Teenage drinking while in school,
automatically makes you cool.


Start big fights, attract attention.
Laugh while your in detention.
Stupid teachers don't know squat
Text in class but don't get caught!


Teens are smarter than adults.
Join a myspace scene, chick, cult.
Takes those bathroom toilet pics.
Comment all; don't be a d**k!


Sleepovers every weekend,
and new inside jokes are made.
Best friends become sisters.
Cuz' family never fades.


So ask me what I know.
And ask me what I've learned
High School was an experience.
An experience that I've earned.

-Raja
PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:02 pm


I like your ryming cuplet and it really expresses alot about high school. Excilent job.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 3:54 pm


I think it describes how most of the highschoolers feel, but not every one. which, you know, is okay. Stanza's 3-5 don't apply to me, so I feel less connected to the poem. However, I can see where most students would be like "That totaly discribes it." So, good job.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:54 am


Nice poem =P
I usually don't like poems that rhyme but that was a good one.

Ryan-Tye

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