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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 5:03 pm
On the outskirts of the North Blue, far away from any town or village is The Peak of Misery. This is an uninhabited island, not even animals exist here. This is because no life survives due the strange energy emitted by the large obelisk in the center of the island. This obelisk has the power to remove a devil fruit ability from a willing person. The obelisk itself is the peak of misery because removing a devil fruit is said to be the most painful process in the world.
See Devil Fruit Forum in Home Page for info A Devil Fruit can only be removed willingly Once a devil fruit is removed, you must make a certain number of posts over a span of days. When making these posts you cannot leave the peak of misery unless someone comes and collects you. During this time period the person who got their fruit extracted will not be able to perform any activities.
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Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 12:41 pm
Jesbero entered the peak of misery, and as he walked into the peak he saw a obelisk in the center, and he felt his body shake just by standing next to it and he said," This must be the demon in side of me." Jesbero then laid down on the Obelisk waiting for someone or something to take the fruit out of him.
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Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 12:46 pm
Jesbero's mind would enter a psychedelic state in which everything he saw would be an illusion created by his mind. This trance was created by the obelisk which shot a beam of light into the sky. This beam came down onto Jesbero this was the beginning of the fruit extraction process. Due to the hallucinations that would be caused by the extreme pain there was no way for Jesbero to know what was going on, by this time the process had already begun his fruit was leaving his body.
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Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:02 pm
Jesbero was in a complete hypnotized state, but all he could think of was what was happening to him. Jesbero saw the demon being pulled out of him and he saw them put it into another rotten fruit. Jesbero fell over of the obelisk, and he was in severe pain almost not even able to stand, but he stumbled his way to the north blue port to rest in the cold.
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 3:54 pm
Krix jumped out of a tree nearby watched the strange fellow waddle away. he almost wnated ot take advantage of him but decided against it, he looked at the rotten fruit which a demon had been placed in and picked it up "ew...thats pretty gross..." Krix tossed it up and catched it again looking around bored.
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:44 pm
(Technique Name: Vital stab.) (I use these attack excessivly in this training posts in battle they are more limited. and more powerful like the vital stab cannot be done rapidly as shown in post three. except when I eat meat...I also do at least three rushes as my attack/ability rush in the Vital stab posts since it is normally a prelude to my attacks but I shall post the trainign for it individually... (I rush in post three/four and five.)this is just where I am dualing my master at the end of my years as an apprentice, so its less of a training and more of a end fight, but has teh requirements.)
Post 1.) Krix and his teacher (Kezar.) slashed violently at eachother spinning around in a whirl wind of attacks and parrys, like to ranging tornados clashing, Krix struck(Stab.) at Kez's arm, Kez blocked it spun an overhead attack at Krix's head krix quickly dodged it and jumped backwards. "I'll have your throat old man, I am better then you now." (this one includes one of three for rush.) Post 2.) Krix Rushed at kez and jumped into the air. Kez jumped into the air to meet him, both stabbed at eachother. krix misses just as the old man but more so since kez managed to put a small gash in krix's arm."Gah!!! I can't belive I got hit..." Post 3.) Krix spun around at lightning speed and rapidly stabbed at Kez, Kez back up moving fast enough to dodge every move except one, krix turned in mid combo and slashed Kez's left arm, blood splurted out then slowly drippled down his arm "feell that?" krix said mockingly, "your a fool Krix always have and always will, you finally get strong and you turn on your master! Post 4.) "Heheheh, so what." krix rushed once again, this time skidding on the ground towards Kez. Kez laughnched himself into the air. "Arrrr!!!!!" Kez yelled as he came down on krix. Krix stabbed at Kez thrusting it deep into the same arm hitting a pressure point paralizing that arm. "Gyahhhh!!!!!" yelled the old man as blood drippled out in quick bursts. post 5.) "Heheha!!!" Krix laughed a creepy throaty laugh as blood slplattered against his face. "I will beat you weith thw techniques you taught me!" Krix twisted the blade and pulled it out, then he kicked a rock towards Kez's face, as kez dodged it Krix did a back flip and another. he then rushedat Kez stabbing fiercly. Kez parried over and over until Kez did a combo of his own Kez had never taught him and in doing so cut kez's left thigh. then back into a normal stance Krix breathed loudly. Post 6.) Kez rushed towards krix he jumped into the air and did a flip kick to the chest, Krix took it and stabbed with both Kaar's inwards scraping the bones on his ankle clean of skin. this was one of the most painful moves of this technigue, it would vertually destory his masters leg, the healing time was half a year. "You are weak." Kez said laughing, he pivoted in the air and stabbed Krix in the back stunning his entire body. then jumped off squinting at his leg which could barely be controled. he charged at Krix for the finishing blow as he thrusted his own pair of Katars Krix's eyes became narrow. Post 7.)Narx managed to brign up his arms and dodge the attack he was tossed seven feet back and regained control over his body which was racked in pain. "You see? none of are former assassins coudl do that! I am the best of our line!!!" Kez just stood there shocked he created a monster of all assassins. he did nto have much stregth but had the speed needed to avoid such. krix rushed at Kez once more and thrusted his blades releasing them to let them fly towards Kez, one impaled him in the heart the other in teh neck. "I told you I;d have your neck...grandpa..."
(end of Vital Stab.)
(Technique Name: Rush.) (is there a ruel against saying damn it was only used because of the situationXD) Post 1.) Krix rushed at a huge wall, it was a dam. one about exactly 30 feet tall. Krix ran up it but missed the top by just a few feet. "Damn that dam is tall."Krix tried again he came closer yet still didn't make it. "Ahh, I know if I pivot my feet before running I can make it." Krix did so and reached the top flipping on top of it he smiled at what he had accomplished. and headed onto his next step in mastering the Dash(rush.) Post 2.) When Krix had reached his next destination he stretched and then looked around before continuing, it was a long valley with soem horse jumping equipement, only these jumps were higher some were 15 feet tall. "Whoah, I should be able to do this easily...I think..."Krix rushed at the first ten foot tall wall and leaped over it with ease and for leaped smashign into the fithteen foot tall wall sliding down, he recuperated and tried again, he missed. and then once again he decided if he did a flip he could increase the hieght by maybe 3 feet. he rushed once more and jumped. he flipped at the last moment flying over the wall. when he landed he could hardly belive what he had just done, and decided to practice it more till he got it perfected. Post 3.) Krix had mastered most of the dash he had one more feat before he could jump over or off of anything. "now for the double wall jump...." Krix said as he looked up a canyon of sorts perfect for this exercise. Krix then after stretching got into a dash then leaping in teh air he pivoted and pushed off the wall flyign to the next one he pushed of it as well then again and again, he grabbed on the wall scared he didn' have the stregth to do it again, and climbed down the safe way, then for the next few months continued practicing all he had learned so far.
(End Dash Training.)
( Technique Name: Assassins indemnification )
Post one.) "Okay this is the final exam of my training after this I am free...why am I talking to myself? shut up Krix." krix closed his eyes and his mouth and meditated for several hours. then standing up he looked at the targets that surrounded him he spun around throwing his daggers into each one's bullseye. He smirked and looked aroudn he saw soem rocks, Krix got an idea and kicked them into the air and slapped them with his hands into the targets. "Good." Post 2.) Krix jumped into the trees and grabbed some branches breaking them off he chucked them at the argets impaling them, then he jumped to the ground on all four and spun his right leg to sread dirt into the air, if it was an enemy they would be blinded by the dirt. he then grabbed some trigs and aimed carefully throwing them into the argets bullseye like thr daggers., only one went in but it was a start. Post .3) Krix spent all week throwign twigs and rocks and using his surroundings until he found out how to even cut people with leaves. he was confident in his abilities and proved to himself he was ready for any battle without weapons by going into a valley, "this should be perfect," Krix then ran at an imaginary enemy and kicked his foot dep into the round grabbing mud with his foot then shot in into the imaginary enemies eyes then kicked his feet out and stood up, he also reached in and grabbed a root which we felt when he put his foot into the ground and broke it out an dthrew it into the enemies neck. and nodded to himself, if he could find weapons out here the only place he shoudl have trouble in the ocean. Post 4.) "Now the hardest part of them all...precision shot blocking." Krix set up a rifle and a pistol on a stand with a timer to shoot. Krix counted sdown and shopped the area the bullet would go to try and knock it down, such a feat would make his hand bleed but only a small fleash wound in comparison to the possible death blow a gun would have was a small price indeeed, Krix didn;t even come close to hitting it, so he chopped again at the pistol's shorter ranged shot, still no contact. "what am I doing wrong?" he thought to himself. Post 5.) Krix practiced timing himself differently for weeks before he made contact with the bullet, it shot his hand through the center, but now that krix had the timing he could perfect it in as little as a month, slowly he got it down after being shot in the hand 9 times. Krix could now chop a bullet from the air without it hitting anything but his skin. which was relativly painless. "Finally now Imust master the Pistol, and angular shots." Post 6.) Krix practiced the same thing he did with teh rifle with the pistol, he tried several types like the rifle. and after he had matered it he switched the guns to do so alternatley with both hands, this took many more weeks to accolplish but he eventually got it down, then from two different directions. and finally he added more guns he had 7 pointed in directions near him, when the shot he flipped in the air hittign them with his Katar's and cresant kickign them with his feet he knocked four down, he did not know if he could take mor ethen four but would learn eventually. Post 7.) Krix had one more thing to master so far he could have a weapons almost anywhere and block or hit almost anything, but now he would learn if he could block a bullet coming strait at him, he was shaking a bit very nevous he payed a doctor to come out and watch him, just in case he messed up. "I can't belive I am doign this...." as the gun fired he almost just ducked but instead, Thud!he was hit in the shoulder, he fell to the ground as the doctor ran over soon we found himself waiting for a few weeks before he could use his arm well again, he had decided he would master this or die. for this was on the way to his goal. "I can do it and I will." he pointed the rifle at him once more, when the gun fired all fear left him his eyes narrowed and he twisted his hand and smacked the bullet away. he stood there stunned, he had done the impossible. he lifted his hand and saw that he had failed, it was impedded in his palm. "shoot." Post 8.) "I can at leats practice without dying though..." Krix for the rest of the day did this until he finally got one down, he smiled and turned inf ro the night starting the next day, it too many weeks before he got it down and when he did he started on the pistols and different guns and different speeds. he also practiced dodging them while he did this. "I think I go it...but not good enough." he continued until he could gauranteed block one form strait on, even at point blank range. Post 9.) Krix practiced blocking with his weapons, this was easier and more efficient since he could block more then one if they hit within 1 foot of eachother. he also could jump into the air and stop bullets mid-flip, bullet in between his daggers and Katar. that was most memorable. Krix now stood on top of a house he leaped off it as he did so he pulled a line which went to the triggers of 12 rifles he dodged several bullets and blocked three with his Katars and two with his Daggers on his thighs. the rest got away he landed and smiled it was finally time for the final test. Post 10.) krix stood in a field he had 3 doctors there he had mastered blocking and dodging bullets at its hardest, he would pass this test and be on his way. "Okay, this is it....I can do this..." Krix looked around 30 rifles were set up he actually managed to bribe people to shoot at him, some even payed him but most just threw in money for the doctors payment just in case Krix got shot. "fire when ready!" he shouted loudly, he stood in his assassin stance and all was quiet then thr first bullet pieced through the air Krix dodged it and knocked it off course with one Katar, the peoplr were amazed, then two bullets came he spun around and kncoked them both fell down, then 4 and 8 and 12 and the peopel kept reloading and firing soon all thiry were flyign at Krix he leaped high into the air spinning around he knocked 12 and doded 8 and the next ten flew at his he twisted in the air and let teh daggers restign on his thighs block 5 the otehr five headed towards his chest these he stopped with his katar, landing on the ground he smirked and laughed almost insanly, the people left him there as he slept he dreamed of his future. the future of immortality.
(End Training.)
this was three years ago....he is now a Loner...
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:19 pm
Narx left.
(forgot to mention that.)
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Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 7:16 pm
Shō arrived on the Island leaving his Lone Man Boat. He had no regret this was the only way to achieve, true power. The young man did some research, there was a way to take this fruit's power out of him. Once he made it to the obelisk he placed his arms out to the sides of him waiting for something to take his power away. "True power awaits!"
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Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:47 am
It would appear so anyway, but with this true power would come excruciating pain. After Jesbero arrived, it wouldn't take too long for the power of the obelisk to course through his body. Soon he'd begin to feel the pain of the extraction process. As a small beam came down. Due to the immense amount of pain, Sho would have a hard time distinguishing what was real from not. His fruit was already leaving his body.
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Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:06 am
Kale arrived at the Peak of Misery and looked around, with a nervous look. She stared at herself and wondered thoughtfully if this was the best idea? She looked over the Obelisk, and bit her lip. She turned to leave.
However, it was took late. The beam shot down a second time that day, and encompassed Kale. She whimpered a bit, as the pain began. She crouched over, and cried out, as the pain. She couldn't have imagined the amount of pain that she would have been in. It all began, and lasted. Finally she had enough strength to crawl away from the peak, and back to Butter's at the port.
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Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:22 pm
Shō immediately fell to his knee's, he didn't know where this sudden deprived feeling of strength came from. It was as if all the will to live just left his body, he fell to his knee's hard than leaned forward in a lifeless like state slamming his face across the ground. Saliva escaped his mouth while he laid their shivering slightly. Was this really the answer to receive power.
1/15
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Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:24 pm
After a couple of moments the color came back to Shō's left eye that wasn't covered, the yellow. He finally found enough strength to crawl, all he had to think about was Lazy Eyes to push himself to his limit. Crawling across the ground he duck low in bushes, if someone had found him in this weak state it would of been a serious problem. Even marines could be on the prawl he never knew.
2/15
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Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:35 pm
Shō finally made it to his boat, he was laying down still on the sand from crawling away from the obelisk. The young man still had no regrets, he was going to survive this entire situation he knew he could! "Perfect, I can feel the power of moku moku fruit leaving my body. Everything's going according to plan, perfect." He slowly raised his arm grabbing his Lone Man Boat that was still here helping himself up onto the boat. Once he was within the boat he kicked off shore sailing away slowly into a random direction. He didn't know where he was heading, all he needed to do was get some rest.
3/15
Shō's left eye slowly opened, he was now looking at the clouds that seemed to be passing by in very slow motion. Slower than they usually move it was because the young man was still in his weak state. It was a shame to see Shō like this, he was suffering from having the fruit extracted from his body in order to receive more power. Once he was feeling better he would set out back to South Blue, he knew the journey would be more difficult this time around but it was only necessary. Shō was going to become stronger, he would obtain a new fruit and become a completely different person. Smiling at the thought himself obtaining true power he continued to sail away in the random direction not knowing where he was heading.
4/15
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Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 9:44 am
• Berserk Beast Pirates - Tetsuya Ikari •Tetsuya had finally found a place to finish his training he noticed that Shanks was waiting for him with his sword in hand and his missing left arm covered. "You ready kid" Tetsuya nodded and revealed his Cutlass "Let us finish what we started" Shanks then gave a smile "Alright now what you will be learning is Chaos Slash" Tetsuya nodded "You will do multiple Sword Thrust and finish with an Uppercut Slash got it" Tetsuya nodded "Got it"
[ Chaos Slash 1/5 ]
Tetsuya then took his Cutlass and walked over to a huge thick tree that seemed to be here for Hundreds of years and full of strength. Tetsuya then went at the tree with full force doing multiple Thrust with his Cutlass at the word noticing that it wasn't doing much damage and he finally came with the Uppercut Slash as he went up the trunk of the tree Tetsuya lost strength and dropped the sword "Damn it I'm embarrassing myself now lets try again until I get it right" Tetsuya said to himself trying to get motivated and pumped up.
[ Chaos Slash 2/5 ]
Shanks chuckled as he drunk Sake watching Tetsuya "Try not to use so much power relax and go with the flow like when we learned the Sword Thrust" Tetsuya closed his eyes and sighed as he listened to what Shanks said "Relax and hang loose" Tetsuya said to himself and held his Cutlass in his hand loosely and went for the base of the tree once more. Tetsuysa was able to pull off the multiple thrust and until he slowed down and lose grip of his Cutlass once again doing the uppercut "Start smooth and finish strong"
[ Chaos Slash 3/5 ]
Shanks noticed that he was make a great improvement and also knew that Tetsuya knew what his own flaw was and did not need to speak only watch. Tetsuya then closed his eyes and held his Cutlass loosely as the end of the blade was behind him he then went for the base with great force instead he was in control this time his multiple Thrust had put more damage to the tree and as he came for the Uppercut Slash he was able to pull it off but it was not that strong "I need to put a little more strength in the Uppercut" Tetsuya said to himself and took two steps back from the tree.
[ Chaos Slash 4/5 ]
Tetsuya inhaled deeply and slowly exhaled afterwords "Last time" he said as he closed hi eyes and placed his Cutlass on his right side the end of he Cutlass pointing behind him he then slowly opened his eyes and sprinted for the tree quickly and began again doing multiple Thrust within the tree from horizontal to vertical and finally his finish he took both hands and came up with a powerful Uppercut flying up the try and slipping through it like butter. Tetsuya then came back down and smirked "That's how it is done" Shanks applauded Tetsuya on his good work "Nice now you are ready for the next technique"
[ Chaos Slash 5/5 ]
[ Chaos Slash - Learned ] [ Total Exp: 5, 000 ] .:I Am Known To The Wold As The Silent Wolf:. .:I Shall Bear My Fangs For My Captain And Nakama:.
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Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:33 am
• Berserk Beast Pirates - Tetsuya Ikari •Shanks looked at Tetusya as he drunk the last bit of Sake from his small cup and filled it up from the large Jug that was behind him "Aright now on to the next technique Merry Pirates Slashes" he took another sip of sake then continued speaking preparing to explain the Technique "Alright this is fairly simple you only have to slash multiple times using either on or two swords" Tetsuya sighed "This is weak learning stuff that I already can do"
[ Merry Pirate Slashes - 1/6 ]
Shanks chuckled "Yeah but this more powerful if you can do it than you should be able to get through that same tree easily" Tetsuya was over to the tree and sighed as he held both Cutlass one in each hand they were both filled with the tip of the Blade pointing behind Tetsuya he then closed his eyes and sprinted for the tree. His first slash came in with a sweep forming an "X" on the tree then he continued slashing but was not able to cut through the tree. Tetsuya then looked in shock "What no way that is impossible"
[ Merry Pirate Slashes - 2/6 ]
Shanks spit out his sake and began laughing "What happened to you knew this already" Tetsuya turned and glared at him "Shut it obviously these Cutlass aren't that sharp" Shanks was still chuckling "Yeah blame it on your weapon" Tetsuya turned back around and got into his stance again. he then sprinted for the tree once more except with his fist slash eh came with his right then with his left and finished with a dual slash. Again it did little damage to the tree "man this is ridiculous I need to focus"
[ Merry Pirate Slashes - 3/6 ]
Tetsuya stood away from the tree and practiced a few swing with his Cutlass then did it with his other arm "My arms are not tired then whats up" Shanks looked at Tetsuya "You lack the Ambition" Tetsuya looked at him and glared "I have the Ambition I will be this Worlds Strongest Swordsman" Shanks chuckled "Then prove what you say Tetsuya and cut through that tree" Tetsuya walked over to the tree and got into his stance "I can do this I will do this" Tetsuya said to himself before he began.
[ Merry Pirate Slashes - 4/6 ]
Tetsuya then closed his eyes and inhaled deeply then slowly exhaled afterwords and opened his eyes quickly and as soon as he opened his eyes he sprinted for the tree and came with a power right slash that once it connected with the tree it created a shock wave that Shanks could feel. Shanks smirked "Good now show me what you can do" he said to himself watching Tetsuya. Tetsuya cam with another power slash with his left that created a shock wave as well but not as strong as his first.
[ Merry Pirate Slashes 5/6 ]
Tetsuya had gained more Ambition from Shanks calling him out and continued slashing not even noticing that he was slashing through the base of the tree with each stroke. Tetsuya continued until he was at the end of the tree almost all the way through he finished with the same slash he hand done the first time which was a dual slash that formed the shape of an "X" when he was done finally splitting through the tree. Tetsuya was on the other side of the tree as it fell "I have the Will old man" Tetsuya said panting Shanks stood to his feet "Good now we can go on to the next technique"
[ Merry Pirate Slashes - 6/6 ] [ Merry Pirate Slashes - Learned ] [ Total Exp: 6,000 ] .:I Am Known To The Wold As The Silent Wolf:. .:I Shall Bear My Fangs For My Captain And Nakama:.
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