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A Place Unseen

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skyler919

PostPosted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 7:06 pm


Haven't posted in a while. sweatdrop Hope you like mrgreen
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You dream on relentlessly
Not knowing what you want
Following something that can't be seen
To a place of beauty you know not

In attempt to find a life made anew
Seeing the light but going on your own
Listening to the whispers you hear in your head
That blow silently by as the wind

Visions of the past
Paint pictures of the future
Leading you on vibrant colors of a path
Though flawed by the darkness that sways idly by

Walking silently you continue on
In reaching a goal set back when
That you'd forgotten on your journey's wake
To find a place unseen
PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 5:30 pm


very beautiful words ^^

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 7:04 am


It is pretty. I love it.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 4:34 pm


I love the wording and description. It's a very pretty poem. I love it.

Kesna


nicole_isahottie13

PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 3:43 pm


i like it, tis very mysterious.....
PostPosted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 7:55 pm


I really liked this piece. I pictured someone walking along the shoreline, contemplating things. =D

Amyane

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Work written between 2003 - 2006

 
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