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 Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 5:40 am
Thou art the river,
Thou art the sky,
Thou art the spirit within the living.
Thy eyes are like the soul of my heart,
My heart doth be the vessel of thy love.
Come, Fill thy love in me,
Fill it such, that that there's no one but thee.
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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 8:46 pm
aw, it's so sweet! i don't know why, but reading it made me feel nice and fuzzy(what does being fuzzy actually feel like?). bottom line is, it's good!
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 5:32 am
tis good... i don't write poetry but it made me want to see my loved ones... 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 4:50 pm
I'm really at a loss for what to say about this. The sentiment was absolutely sweet! But there was just something about the archaic language that seemed to distract me from the rest of the poem.. sweatdrop
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The Bookwyrm Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2005 12:40 pm
heart Sir, that touched my heart! heart That was very good, I love the ending. I'm not sure why, but I do! heart
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