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 Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 7:21 am
I just started learning to draw slightly -just slightly, realistic, and so, I wanna have some critiques to help me better ^^ These two are my first attempts: click hereAs seen above, it's still off proportions, but I can't really pinpoint what's off about it. Any suggestions and/or critiques? smile
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 12:46 pm
very beautiful, what I can tell is that the boobs look a bit unatural they kinda hang over too much they wouldn't sit like that. also if you put more shading in the cheek of the one on the left it should define cheekbone more and not make the face look so wide there. otherwise very impresive
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 4:44 pm
They're amazing!
The only thing I could say is that the breasts on both of the girls arn't aligned correctly.
And maybe the fore head could be slightly longer, on the girl to the left. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 6:19 am
Thanks ^^
I did change that now smile
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Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 12:16 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:58 pm
xI kinda change it by Photoshop, hoping it is better now? :3
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le fading fate Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:11 pm
Wow that looks good
But, something still looks off
I dont know what though.
I love the sketch one though
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Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:12 pm
Opps.
I pressed it twice xD
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le fading fate Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:04 am
I'm thinking that the shadow between eye to eye is not deep enough yet and the mouth is too low =/
and maybe enlarge the breast part slightly? Since the face seems big as compared to the body..... 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:45 am
Yeah the breasts do seem kinda small. They're big, but not width size.
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le fading fate Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:39 am
Yeah, will definitely need to widen it, gonna be a tedious progress again xD
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Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 6:18 pm
For realistic that's really good
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:13 pm
wow, you are amazing, can you tell me where you were taught to draw? i would do anything to get into the art buisness! im also looking for a personal trainer smile
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 6:33 pm
Amazing.
There's nothing much to critique, as this is realism and everyone's features are different.
Except her boobs are aligned awkwardly.
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 9:05 pm
Move the bust down. Its to high up c:
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