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Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 3:16 pm
 You read the banner right! This is the flatsale thread. A mystical thread that contains wonderful Scents that makes you wanna go "ooo" "ahhh" and "WOW". It's like dipping your face in chocolate and having sprinkles thrown on top.
This flatsale we have a wonderful assortment of Scents for you to try for. ranging from faint in smell to dericious in smell. They are the following: Clean Linen(Male), Cucumber Melon (Male), Butterfly Flower (Female).
You will have the pleasure of picking from two different prompts to respond to, and post in this thread. The Flatsale starts March 12th @ 12AM EST, and ends, March 24th @ 11PM EST. The Flatsale cost is 20K per Scent. You may only try for one, so choose wisely. Below are descriptions and examples of the Scents.
Clean Linen: Male; Calm, Down To Earth, Comforting. A soft subtle Scent, Clean Linen portrays that wave of happiness you feel when to put clean sheets on a bed and shove your face in them. Cucumber Melon: Male; Fresh (Interpret as you will), Difficult, Tacky. And you thought this was going to be a nice Scent. The overbearing smell of cucumber hides tee subtle sweetness of the melon in this Scent, making it somewhat difficult to find. Butterfly Flower: Female; Complex, Alluring, Absent-Minded. Butterfly Flower is like stepping into a butterfly garden, with notes of orchids, tangerines, black tea, banana leaf and milk this Scent is both complex and a little flighty making you sit there and daydream the day away.
Note: Previews will not be given, I want it to be a surprise this time.Prompt 1 - Any Age Getting what you want in life takes practice, patience and planning. In learning these things your Scent has seemingly undermined your authority using them. How did they undermine your authority and what did they do it for?Prompt 2 - Child Kids tend to have wild and sometimes utterly ridiculous imaginations. One day your child comes to you with a story so unbelievable you might actually think it's true. What is it?
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Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:08 pm
Do we need to fill out both prompts, or just choose one?
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Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:22 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:57 pm
Name: Menelie Scent trying for: Butterfly Flower Scent name for now: Paloma
Prompt: Getting what you want in life takes practice, patience and planning. In learning these things your Scent has seemingly undermined your authority using them. How did they undermine your authority and what did they do it for?
Paloma had always been a sweet, quiet, truthful child. That said, on the occasions where she’d decided to be untruthful, she more often than not had gotten away with it, just because no one ever expected it. For instance, there was the time that Paloma realized that the babysitter didn’t live with them, and so wouldn’t know all the rules of the house, so she convinced him that Menelie really did let her have a cookie after dinner and one before bed. But this was…amazing, even for her. The fact that she pulled this one off absolutely floored Menelie when she found out. Mene was going away for the weekend, and had left teenaged Paloma in charge of the house and the dog. She’d been planning this trip for weeks, taking the weekend off of work and housekeeping duties and going back home to visit her parents and younger brother. Now, Mene hadn’t expected Paloma to do anything rash, especially because she can’t concentrate for long enough to plot something out like that. So Mene didn’t lay down any rules or anything for Paloma for the weekend, besides reminding her that Duchess, their droopy basset hound, needed to be fed, watered, and walked daily. And so when Mene got in the car and left, she had no idea what she’d find when she got back. Paloma, despite being so quiet and shy, was quite popular at school. It seemed like people were just naturally drawn to her, and so she had many friends. And so when Mene first told Paloma about her proposed trip almost a month ago, the wheels in her pretty head began turning. She decided to plan a huge house party with all her friends and any of their friends. She spread the word around school, gave directions to their old house in the middle of town, and bought food and drink. The night of the party came and, as many parties do, it got out of hand. Very out of hand. A friend of Paloma’s brought a friend who brought alcohol, and from there Paloma knew she was in trouble. She was only seventeen, and she knew the kid from school, and knew that he certainly wasn’t of legal age to buy alcohol. She tried to get the boy to leave, but it seemed that the booze was a hit with the other partygoers. Things started to get more rowdy, valuables were nearly broken (thankfully the only thing that actually broke was a glass, easily replaceable), and the party took a turn for the trashy variety. Miserable, Paloma finally called the police on her own party when she found a drunken, amorous couple doing…something…in the bathroom. She got in trouble, of course, and poor Mene had to come home early from her vacation. She was furious, but ultimately had to be proud of her daughter for having the clarity of thought to know when her party was getting out of hand. In the end, Paloma had to pay for the broken glass out of her allowance, was grounded from the Internet for two weeks, and was instructed to never have an unsupervised party again. Most importantly, though, Paloma learned from the experience, and reinforced her general dislike of rowdiness and unseemly behavior.
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 3:18 pm
Name: Thaliawen Scent: Butterfly flower Scent name: Jamee
Guardian: Thali Sadril-- Thali is.. unique, to say the least. An elf, she tends to be immature. This sometimes gives her an advantage when understanding children. She tends to be a happy-go-lucky person on the whole. She's always optimistic, and looks for the best in everyone. This doesn't mean she is willing to share her secrets with everyone. No; she trusts only her closest friends with what she deems 'unimportant'. She seems to be a romantic, and plays the game of ‘match maker’ with her friends. She can be stubborn, she doesn't like to be told what to do, especially by her husband. She is someone who won't take no for an answer, perhaps showing her royal blood in that she likes to be in command. If she becomes frightened, or feels threatened, she flees the scene. She isn't one to face her fears.
She seems to have an inability to become angry; or, in a case she actually does, she doesn't stay that way for long. It is almost impossible for her to lie. She can keep things hidden, she doesn't have to tell the entire truth; if she doesn't trust someone, she will stubbornly attempt to be dishonest. You can tell when she attempts to do so, for she will use an increasing number of modern terms; such as 'like, just, I mean, um, or uh'. Normally she would not be so poorly spoken.
She loves the arts, especially writing. She writes for children as a whole, sticking to fantasy stories. Surprisingly, she's also well learned in history. She especially loves when history becomes legend. She is most interested in the gods of the ancients, and myths. Her goal is to become a teacher and share her knowledge.
Prompt: "Getting what you want in life takes practice, patience and planning. In learning these things your Scent has seemingly undermined your authority using them. How did they undermine your authority and what did they do it for?"
Jamee was a charming girl, very passionate, very complex. How complex, Thali had never been able to tell, until she was a teenager. At the time, her daughter was having trouble seeing the silver lining, because it seemed like her siblings, not to mention her friends, had dates for the school dance.
"Love takes time," Her mother often told her. "You'll find the right guy someday, for now enjoy life. You don't have to worry about that yet. Dances aren't that important, trust me. Joshua didn't go to school dances when he was your age.."
Jamee couldn't help it. She didn't believe her mother; she knew her brother better than that. The older teen had, in fact gone to dances. He'd been dating the same girl since middle school, she knew that. Her mother was attempting to cheer her up, and failing miserably. It made her wonder. What did parents know about love? Just because she was married didn't mean she knew everything. She was determined to prove her wrong. Love didn't have to take time--
Her chain of thought was broken when she saw [i[him. The person she could see herself with for the rest of her life. He was perfect. Flawless in her eyes. Tan, muscular, bright blue eyes that sparkled when he looked at--
He was smiling at her! White teeth caught the dim sunlight, shining like pearls. His hair was like a shiny new penny. She watched as he headed towards his car--
No, he was heading for her! "Um.. Your name is Jamee, right?" He asked, smiling at her. Jamee couldn't bring her self to speak, she merely nodded at him. Maybe he was going to ask her to the dance!
"You dropped this." He said, handing her a history book. "I thought you might need it to finish your homework." He turned around, and started to leave.
"Wait!" Jamee said, catching up to him fairly easily. "Do you want to go to the dance with me?"
When the boy shook his head at her, Jamee's heart sank. Her mother had been right, after all. Love didn't come easy. Neither did a date to the school dance.
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Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:53 pm
Name Kotatsu-chan Scent Clean Linen Scent Name Benedict
Caretaker Linnea Mycroft, a caretaker at a rural cemetery. She's a sensible woman and likes the quiet that her working environment affords. She doesn't find cemeteries or death frightening or depressing at all, on the contrary. The cemetery is easy to understand and quiet, and the trees and green life erupting from the ground amongst the solemn stones gives her a place to think. She lives in a small caretaker's cottage not too far away from the cemetery and goes to the city every so often to buy new clothes or somesuch thing.
Prompt Two Kids tend to have wild and sometimes utterly ridiculous imaginations. One day your child comes to you with a story so unbelievable you might actually think it's true. What is it?
The house was quiet, but it was alive.
Filled with a symphony, a night orchestra, the cricket song found its way through the cracks, the moaning wind whipped past the windows, and the trees whispered secrets into the ears of the solemn stones of the graveyard not too far away. The house creaked as it settled, and Linnea listened to it all, lying on her back and staring at the canopy of her four poster bed, hands outstretched to the ceiling. Nights like this were for listening to first, sleeping second. The quiet woman had long ago learned to appreciate the noises that people drowned out too often, the little cacophony of sounds most people took for granted. It was how the world talked to a person, and people like Linnea who spent all their time amongst the dead knew how to listen in the right way.
This night, she heard a new sound, a new creak in the music of the night. The woman slipped from the bed reluctantly, putting on her slippers and grabbing a poker from under the bed. Just in case. Too many teens these days wanted to defile the graveyard to be brave, and some of them might be bold enough to attack the person who tended to the grounds as well. Linnea stepped down the stairwell, onto the first floor, and raised the poker, heart beating like a drum. There was a small figure at the door. "Come into the light," she demanded of it softly, "Or get a poker to your head."
The figure jumped and whirled around, and in the half-light coming from the windows, she saw Benedict's form in front of her, a rush of clean linen scent following his sudden movement. His hands were protecting his face and she lowered the poker. Why wasn't he in bed? The scent was well behaved and sensible, he never stayed up late. "Benedict." she said, and the boy lowered his arms.
Her stomach did a flip flop as his expression became visible, it was terrified. Her son, if one could even call him that, was usually serene, unshakable. Whatever had reduced him to this frightened child trying to lock the door at night had to be bad. "What's wrong?" She took hold of his arm and steered him to the couch, putting a long on the fireplace and setting it aglow. The boy trembled and looked at her desperately. "Ghosts." he stated simply. "I can hear them creeping in my room." His voice wavered and he looked at his hands. "I saw them looking at me through the crack in my closet. They want to kill me and take my body. I wanted to lock the door so I felt safer." He swiped at his eyes. "I'm tired, I can't take it!" he moaned. "I want sleep, but they won't leave me alone."
Linnea frowned. Benedict knew better than to be afraid of ghosts, right? He had never been afraid of the gravestones in the cemetery, he played games with them. He hadn't ever been afraid of death, even watched burials sometimes and asked Linnea if he could help mow the cemetery lawn on sunny days. What had caused this? For a half second she had a wild fancy that maybe he had actually seen ghosts. It was just so wildly out of character, so different, so strange for him to say. But ghosts... Even assuming they were real, why would they want to possess a boy that smelled like clean linen and came from a scented oil? Why would they want to possess anyone at all? It didn't make sense, but why else would he say it?
"Like on the television." he sobbed. "What?" Linnea asked, blinking. They only got four channels, none of which had ghost programs. Sniffling, the scent said "Like on the television at Lennox's house. His mom made us watch it, she told me it was really good and I'd like it because I lived near a cemetery and... And..." He hiccuped. "They're going to get me. I saw it all on television, they had real evidence on camera and everything!"
Ah. Linnea was beginning to see the light. Gently, she took Benedict's hand and led him to the door. "Come on." she told him. He looked at her suspiciously. "Where are we going?" the scent asked. She gave him a measured look. "On a walk." Opening the door, she approached the darkened cemetery, and quicker than a cobra tightened her grip on Benedict's arm as he realized where they were headed. "NO!" he screamed, struggling to get away and in doing so making the air around them smell strongly of linen. "No, no no! It's haunted!" He flailed in her grip, but she manhandled the boy over to the graveyard, thrusting him in and sitting him on the low stone wall around it. "Listen!" she ordered, but she didn't have to. The scent's struggling was getting weaker and eventually he was just weeping softly. "They're gonna get me." he told her tearily. Linnea shook her head. "Listen." she said. "Would the crickets chirp in an evil place? Would the trees whisper, would the frogs croak? There's a symphony of life here if you'll listen. Why do you need to be afraid of things that have died? Haven't you always played on these gravestones? Haven't they been your friends? Why would they try to possess you?"
Benedict couldn't answer. "They had evidence." he said doubtfully, voice trailing off. Linnea tapped next to his eyes. "You do too." she pointed out. "There's nothing to be afraid of here."
The symphony of the night played on, and mother and child went to get some tea. The smell of fresh linen lingered over the graveyard, the smell of new beginnings, of spring, of life in a place so commonly associated with death. Ghosts were only real if you let them be, but life was all around even when you didn't see it.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 12:09 pm
Username: Malhyanth Scent: Clean Linen Scent Name: Lindon Prompt Kids tend to have wild and sometimes utterly ridiculous imaginations. One day your child comes to you with a story so unbelievable you might actually think it's true. What is it?
Response
The screams of a small child could be heard echoing throughout the house. Mal ran to the bottom of the stairs, just in time to see Lindon race around the top and fly down the stairs toward him, tripping on the middle step and hurtling towards him arms spread wide. His own eyes as big as they could be, Mal caught the small bundle of Scent child and hugged him close, wondering what the hell could have illicited such a squeal. Lindon clung on for dear life breathing quickly. Words mumbled out, but Mal couldn't hear him.
Carrying Lindon into the kitchen, Mal sat him down on one of the chairs at the table and got him a class of juice. Setting it in front of him and sitting across, Mal looked at him seriously. "What the hell happened up there?"
Lindon took a careful sip of his juice, trying his best not to smile. He swallowed, placed the cup down, and flung himself whole heartidly into his tale, leaping off of his chair and flailing his arms around like a crazy person.
"Well dad!! You'll NEVER guess what I found in the closet!!! It was massive!! As big as my head and it flew at me and looked at me like I was some strange creature, but I'm not dad, it was strange, and I said to it 'What the hell are you doing in my clothes closet?' and it turned round to me and put its hands on its hips and said 'What the hell you doing in my house?' and I said, 'Its not your house, its my Daddy's house!' and it said 'Yeah right it is! I'm going to make you pay for waking me up!' and it started flapping its big dusty wings and it flew around my room and doofed itself against my light bulb and its dust went everywhere, and then it flew at my head, and I screamed and it laughed and then I came down here!"
Taking a huge breath, Lindon sat back on his chair, looking at the bewildered Mal. Mal looked at the boy, then looked at the stairs, eyes confused and slightly worried at whatever was in his son's room. "What... What was it?"
Lindon sighed, heaved his chest and tutted at his dad, throwing his hands up and looking exhasperated. "I TOLD you!!! Its a massive moth!! Its up there now!! I don't know what its doing there!" Looking at his dad as though it was obvious, Mal couldn't help but laugh. This only seemed to provoke Lindon more. "DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!! You got to believe me!! Its in there! Its big and mean!!!"
Mal nodded, and picked up one of the larger glass bowls. "You won't catch it in there, it was HUGE!!!" Mal laughed and winked at his son, leaving him looking exhasperated at his dad's silly antics. Lindon had warned him!! As Mal walked up the stairs, he heard the faint 'ting ting ting' of the moth hitting itself on the light bulb of his son's bedroom. Chuckling, he entered the room. There, sat on the window, taking a break from its restless fluttering, was a small moth, no bigger then his thumbnail. Laughing so hard his side hurt, he caught it in the glass bowl and slid one of his son's drawings over the opening to hold it in. The moth went a little biserck trying to get out, but Mal kept it fast.
Carrying the poor bug downstairs, he could hear Lindon rumaging in the cupboards for something to munch on. "Quick, Lindon, get the door! I caught it!!" The gasp that came from the kitchen was so comical, and Lindon hared past him at full speed yanking the back door open and letting his dad race through first. Releasing his grip on the paper, the moth flew out. Lindon squealed and raced inside, covering his head. Mal laughed. Hands on hips, he watched the moth somersault away.
Well, what could he expect? Lindon did carry the scent of fresh linen!
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 4:10 pm
Username:MayaMage2 Scent: Butterly flower Scent Name: Kallima Rayen (Kallima means butterfly in American and Rayen means Flower in a Native American Language) Just call her Kallima though. Prompt:Kids tend to have wild and sometimes utterly ridiculous imaginations. One day your child comes to you with a story so unbelievable you might actually think it's true. What is it?
Response:
What a beautiful day! The birds sang and the flowers swayed at the gentle command of the cool breeze. Swarms of butterflies glided from flower to flower creating a wonderful rush of colors. This garden was Kalimma’s favorite place in the world. Sometimes she would go from flower to flower, carefully analyzing their colors and counting their petals. Other times she would chase the butterflies around trying to catch one. But most times, Kallima spent her day sitting on a bench in the outskirts of the garden lost deep in her own thoughts, daydreaming. Maya, however, Kalimma’s ever busy guardian, was not taking time to appreciate that beautiful day. Maya always took Kalimma to the garden as a way to keep the little girl busy so she could make her very important phone calls to her list of employers. You see, Maya was an art buyer. She bought art for prominent art collectors and therefore was always busy. Don’t get Maya wrong though. She loves Kalimma with all her heart! The little girl is a handful and someone has got to bring in the money. To Maya, Kalimma was an escape from her ever busy life. A little piece of paradise that came down to bless her.
So there Maya sat, on a rickety old bench, red pen and agenda in hand while the phone sat lodged between her shoulder and ear. “No sir, he didn’t have the one you wanted, it was sold this morning fifteen minutes before I called him… No sir…ok sir, I will get right on it!” She turned off the phone with a sigh and crossed another name off the list. Just then she heard the approaching cries of Kalimma as the little girl ran towards her, tears trickling down her face like a waterfall, arms outstretched towards Maya wanting to be picked up. Maya put her agenda to the side, got up and jogged towards the little girl picking her up with a swoop. The scent of butterfly flower was intense now that Kalimma was so close, “What’s wrong honey, did you get hurt?” Kallima was sobbing now, and only managed a slow shake of her head as she pointed towards a nearby tree.
As Kalimma pointed, Maya noticed that the bracelet she gave Kalimma for her birthday was gone. Maya frowned and returned to the bench, sitting down with Kalimma on her lap, she turned the girl toward her grabbing a hold of the arm where the bracelet should have been and asked. “Kalimma, where’s your bracelet honey?” Kallima had stopped crying by then and just kept looking at things around her, as if she was looking very farr away from that place, absent from the current situation. Maya was used to that though, so she waited. Kalimma had always been like that. Maya wasn’t sure if she was deep in thought trying to come up with a reply or if she was just daydreaming. At the end though, Kalimma always answered the questions directed toward her as if no time had passed at all. Despite being just a little girl, Kalimma was wonderfully articulate and could lure and lull even the harshest and most hyper of people with her sweet and dreamy voice and overly creative stories.
Finally, the little girl looked up at her guardian, her tears subdued, she looked calm again and in her wistful voice she said, “Mama, I was talking to Rose just now, she is the most beautiful of flowers, she was telling me about this evil squirrel that had been coming out at night and destroying the other flowers while they were sleeping! He’s just evil mama!” Hah! So she was making stuff up again! Maya decided to go along with it this time. “Ok honey, but what does Rose have to do with your bracelet?” Kalimma looked away again, waiting. For what? Maya didn’t know. After a little, the girl answered. “The big squirrel came Mama! And he killed Ms. Rose! And he took my bracelet up that tree and blew a raspberry at me!” Tears welled up in Kalimma’s eyes. Maya hushed her and put her down as she stood up. She didn’t really believe in Kalimma’s story. That girl made too much up! “Ok Kalimma, Let’s go look for your bracelet.” The guardian chose to ignore the tree because she knew there was no way the bracelet could have gotten up there.
Kalimma and Maya looked for a long while with no sign of the bracelet. Maya looked under rocks, around the flower patches, inside the fountain and nothing. Where could this bracelet be!? Maya noticed that Kalimma was really enjoying herself while searching. She skipped around, from flower to flower asking if they had seen her bracelet. All of a sudden Kalimma stopped dead on her tracks and waved her guardian over, “Mama! Look at Ms. Rose, she’s destroyed! Poor Rose!” Maya trotted up and saw that indeed a red rose was in shreds and the petals were everywhere. Could it be that there was a squirrel here somewhere? Maya knew Kalimma wouldn’t hurt a flower. She frowned and went over to the tree where the girl said the bracelet was hanging. In one of the lowest branches there it was! What the hell? Where was this squirrel then? Maya slowly circled the tree looking for the squirrel. Hidden in the back of the tree was a tall wooden stool.
Now she knew what was going on there. She called Kalimma over and asked, “Kalimma did you put the bracelet up on the tree?” Kalimma looked down at her feet, guilt splashed across her face and slowly nodded. Maya sighed and took the girl by the hand, leading the girl back to her bench, “Now honey, why would you do that, you know I have a lot of work to do.” Kalimma looked out into the garden for a while, then she looked back at her guardian “Well I was lonely, I wanted to play with you Mama…” A surge of guilt filled Maya as she stroked Kalimma‘s hair, “Aww honey, you know you can just tell me when you want to play with me, I’ll be more than happy to.” Maya smiled down at Kalimma and received a dazzling, dreamy smile back. “Now what do you say we go play with the butterflies again?”
Sorry I wrote soo much. I just couldn't stop writing! xd
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:39 pm
Name: White Root Scent: Cucumber Melon Scent name: Briley
Kids tend to have wild and sometimes utterly ridiculous imaginations. One day your child comes to you with a story so unbelievable you might actually think it's true. What is it?
It was a misty Tuesday afternoon; the fog floating outside the windows gathered and dispersed repeatedly like a river of wind was gently guiding it. Lizzy was spending this gray day perfectly—by finishing math homework. Sipping her iced coffee, she scratched out unsure answers and listened to the clock tick. But the silence was unsettling. There was no way that Briley would let her enjoy a quiet moment. Like clockwork the front door crashed and in he ran, covered in mud.
“Mommy Baby!” he yelped as jolted towards her, a trail of dirty footprints following him into the living room.
“Briley! The footprints!” Lizzy exasperated back. “Your clothes!”
“Awwweh this ol’ thing?” he giggled as he looked down at the damage done to his “flair.” Birley had watched “Pretty in Pink” with Lizzy last week and now was inspiring to be just like Duckie. He wore a wrinkled pink striped dress shirt with a purple and green spotted vest buttoned over top. Mud was splattered up his black jeans and onto his blue blazer.
“Briley that mud better come out!” Lizzy growled. It had taken them exactly a week to find an outfit that he felt was close enough to Duckie’s. They traveled from mall to mall searching for something that would fit his small stature. Lizzy had wanted to quit after two days; but Briley would not give up until he found his dream outfit. Their last stop, the Salvation Army, turned out to be Lizzy’s savior. There was no way she wanted to spend ANOTHER week trying to find replacements.
“Don’t worry about it.” he said with a wave of his hand, “Mommy baby I gots’ something to show you!” He jumped onto her lap, dried mud flaking off all over her jeans, and gave his mom the sincerest look he knew.
“It isn’t another frog is it?” she asked warily, checking to see if his hands held anything hidden. His last surprise ended up swimming in her cereal; nothing was ever what it seemed with Briley.
“Maybe.” he giggled again. But before his mom could get angry he replied, “No Mommy. I found Narnia!”
“You found what?”
“Narnia, Mommy baby, Narnia!”
“Briley I have this homework I have to finish. I’m sure your Narnia is—“
“Nuh uh!” he growled, frustrated. “You gotta’ see!”
“Briiiileeeeeyyy” Lizzy whined as she glanced at the clock.
“Nooooooooow!” he whined back, as he bounced on her lap annoyingly.
“Alright, alright! OW!”
Briley jumped off of Lizzy’s lap and tugged on her arm until she got up and followed. He dragged her to the front door despite her groans about her papers scattering across the floor. He didn’t let go until he was sure she wasn’t going to leave him. Once in the front yard, he took off running toward the creek.
“Briley!” Lizzy tried to call after him, “Just let me get my shoes on…”
It was no use—Lizzy would have to follow barefoot. The dew struck grass between her toes, the damp air clinging to her neck, the cucumber melon scent left in Briley’s wake, Lizzy took it all in before she jogged to catch up with the little boy.
She caught glimpses of him running through the trees as she pursued after him. Her chest tightened as the air pushed forward out of her lungs. She would have to start exercising, she thought to herself. But then again, Briley was exercise enough.
“Here!” he yelled. With a quick look back, Briley jumped feet first down a hill and into the creek. Before Lizzy could stop her momentum she crashed to the ground and slid down the same path. A flash of water erupted over her. For a quick moment she was unsure what had just happened or where she was. Was she here, in Narnia?
“Over here!” Briley laughed and danced from the other side of the creek. Her surroundings focused and she was back in her neighborhood, sitting waist deep in the creek she knew when she was young. Standing she called over to him as she walked to the other side.
“So where’s this Narnia little man?”
“You’re standing in it!” he snickered, attempting a dance move somewhat like the Robot.
“What?”
“I just wanted to get my mommy baby girl out of the house. All works and no plays ain’t good for the soul.” he laughed as he tackled his mom, covering her in the creek scum. Lizzy was about to groan but the moment was too perfect to ruin. Briley was right. Instead of worrying about the work that needed to be done, she enjoyed the last few hours of sunlight, rediscovering the hidden world of the creek she grew up knowing.
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Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 4:33 pm
||Username|| EverlastingRitz ||Scent|| Cucumber Melon ||Scent Name|| Jesse Forsythe ||Guardian|| Everlinde Forsythe [Nickname Ever] ||Prompt|| "Getting what you want in life takes practice, patience and planning. In learning these things your Scent has seemingly undermined your authority using them. How did they undermine your authority and what did they do it for?" ||Response||
“Mom, I’m leaving now” Jesse called from the hall. “No you aren’t” Ever popped around the corner anger lining her words. “Room, dishes, cat box” Jesse pushed his green streaked hair back. “Don’t be so uptight mom, it’ll get done” a laugh escaped his lips as he pulled his coat on. Ever waited for a moment then grabbed the back of his coat pulling him down the hallway “I’m not doing your chores again.” Her voice was level though the anger was seeping through more. “You’re a lazy good for nothing teenager, now clean” she pushed him toward the full sink. “Mom they aren’t going anywhere, my friends on the other hand, are.” He complained reluctantly taking off his coat and rolling his sleeves. “And it looks like they’ll be going places without tonight” Ever walked out leaving him alone. “I’m tired of doing your chores” Jesse mimicked sloshing the water everywhere. ”You can just leave them there mom, I’ll do them later” he complained “No you won’t, you sleep till minutes before school and come home just in time for dinner and then disappear again.” He sighed softly throwing the last few dishes in the washer before stomping out towards the garage. “So, do I really sound like that?” Ever asked as Jesse came around the corner. Jesse jumped a bit standing rigid “Of course not mom” he stooped and kissed her cheek then took another step towards to garage. “Think you can just play me off like that?” Ever asked frowning a bit “You just try and be fresh, I was a teenager too believe it or not, and I know this ploy.” She pulled the door to the garage open looking at the clock “Better hurry.” Jesse sighed walking in pulling the kitty litter of the shelf. His eyes caught the street light through the half open garage door. “I love you mom” he whispered softly. He peeked inside to make sure Ever was nowhere near. “Perfect” he whispered with a chuckle sliding across the garage and out the door making out into the fresh air and moonlight. The screen door creaked open and Ever’s face appeared in the crack “Finish the cat…” Ever stared at the empty garage and then at the garage door. “He’s grounded.” She clicked the door trigger and the left the garage dark.
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Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 5:10 pm
Username: PandaLily Scent trying for: Butterfly Flower Scent name: Elianna Guardian: Basically, he’s 27, male, single and pretty darned dorky. Anthony Su was everything his parents didn’t want him to be. His parents wanted him to be a doctor and be good at math; the stereotype with Asians. But he was the exact opposite to what his parents wanted. He was never that good in Mathematics, but his visual arts were fantastic ever since he took up water coloring at the age of 6. He now works as a full time pet surgeon and an occasional web-comic artist.
Prompt: Kids tend to have wild and sometimes utterly ridiculous imaginations. One day your child comes to you with a story so unbelievable you might actually think it's true. What is it?
Prompt Reply: The sun was shining with its golden rays. The grass was turning greener as each day passed. The tulips were even coming out of the ground. Sitting on a lawn chair with a sketchbook, pencil and eraser, was Anthony. He wanted to capture the first essence of spring, even though he was still suffering from winter congestion. With a few sniffles and a drop of his pencil onto his sketchbook, he wrapped his scarf tighter around his face. Clinging onto his jeans was a small girl. She was his so-called ‘daughter’ that had grown from an oil burner.
“Okay, Elie honey. How about you go over and play by the tree.” He said to her as he tried to get her clutch to loosen. It was uncomfortable to be sitting on the ground near the neighbour’s flowers with a young girl. It was unlike a gentleman and it made him look creepy.
Elianna did nothing but nod, stand up and toddle off on her own way. She stood by the trunk of the tree and stared up at its bare branches. There wasn’t a sign of a cloud in the sky; it was a soothing blue colour. She stayed like that for a good few minutes and her neck started to hurt. She plopped down carelessly onto the grass and lay on her back; eyes staring straight up at the tree’s branches.
“Papa don’t want me there. He is drawing.” She said softly. Her voice didn’t make it far, because it was silenced by a howling wind.
’Finally. Some peace and quiet.’ Anthony thought to himself as he continued to draw the budding tulips that his neighbour had planted in their front lawn. On the exterior, he shows Elianna that he doesn’t really love her like a real father, but deep down inside, he loves her as if she were his own. Once in a while, he’d lift his head and peak at the young girl who was laying on the ground, moving her mouth with an inaudible voice. He smiled and often chuckled to himself as she made conversation with a tree.
Back with Elianna, She was giggling her head off and telling the tree that he was hilarious with his leaf jokes. “You’re so nice, Tree” She said as she rolled over and hugged the tree as best as she could. Her arms were too short for the large oak tree that grew in the middle of Anthony’s lawn and the neighbour’s. She released the tree from the hug and there between the bare branches, was something that she had never seen before. Her eyes widened as the wind blew the branches back and forth violently. Her face went sour and her arms wrapped around her body. The wind was angry and there in the sky, something angrier. It took the shape of a monster and descended towards the earth. The tree shook even more violently as if it were fighting back.
“PAAAAAAAPAAAAAAAAAAA!” She wailed with tears running down the side of her face. Her fear was indescribable. That… THING just came out of nowhere.
At the sound of her enchanting voice, Anthony dropped all in his hands and ran over to hold his little girl. “Wh-what’s the matter, honey?” He asked her as he tried to shush her calmly. She rubbed her face in his fleece scarf, her cries muffled in the fabric. “shhh. There, there Elie. It’s alright now.” He said as he patted her back to get her to calm down some more.
“Dere wuz ah hic g-giant white monstur.” She said in between her hiccups. They were a result from her crying. Her enchanting voice turned into nothing more than babble.
“Shh… Honey, calm down and tell me what the monster looked like.” He said. He wanted to go back inside, but she refused to with all her might. She wanted to sit by the tree. He was beginning to think that the tree was a bad influence on her.
“W-well… It was big… and white.” She said, stating the obvious.
“Yes, I know. What else did it look like?” Anthony was a little annoyed at how her descriptions were like that of a four-year-old's. But who could blame her? She wasn’t more than a child.
“It had fluffy fur all around. And a BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG grey stomach to eat up our tree! It also had a mean look and tore up the SKY!” She said as she waved her arms around and nearly fell on her back when she was describing the stomach. “It was all, GEEERRRRR to the tree! And tree was fighting back and went PEWPEWPEW! With his branches and defeated the monster!” She said to Anthony.
’That is… the strangest thing I’ve ever heard…’ He thought to himself. At first, he doubted a monster came and attacked their tree. Nothing ever attacked the tree. It wasn’t even the nicest tree on the block. “It’s okay honey. Where was this monster?” Anthony asked as another large gust of wind blew past them. Anthony held onto his scarf with a hand while supporting Elianna with the other.
“IT’S BACK!!” She shouted suddenly as she cuddled her face up to Anthony' scarf.
“What?! Where?” He asked her in a panic. He sort of wanted to see this monster from a first hand experience.
“U-up there…” She said as she looked and pointed to the large cloud that moved quickly overhead.
Anthony couldn’t help but laugh at the naïve nature of Elianna. “Elie. That’s a cloud. It’s not going to hurt anyone!” He reassured her. “It’s like fog.” He told her.
“R-really?” Her voice quivered as she was turned around to look straight at the cloud. “It… doesn’t look that scary anymore…” she admitted; her face flushed with a reddish tint.
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Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 9:05 pm
I will say I was greatly pleased with how many took to the Imaginative Story-Telling prompt. I didn't expect many to go with that one as it requires more thinking and less experience than getting away with something without your parents knowing XD;
That being said you all did terrific jobs. It takes skill to mold something grand when you're given very vague guidelines on what is expected and let loose with everything else. I can tell you it's one of the hardest things in the world, especially when we all have grown up having things laid out for us in procedures with a bulleted format.
And now for the winners...
This character was both fascinating with the way she approached her child's dilema, and interesting in her career choice. You see a lot of characters either well off to begin with, completely humble to start, or off in a plain of existence all their own. Never do you expect, however, to sit there starring at an entry about someone who works in a Cemetary.
For Clean Linen, I chose Kotatsu-chan and her character Linnea! Congrats Kotatsu, and we'll be happy to see Benedict in a graveyard near us soon.
Thought a short entry, this applicant displayed I motherly tone I am all too familiar with. So much that I heard my mother calling me down to do the catbox while writing this up (which she did, scary lady that she is). And a similarly heard response from kids who just know how to get out of anything. The direct approach.
For Cucumber Melon, I chose EverlastingRitz and her character Everlinde. I'm sure Jesse will be marking a calender with grounding sentences of life soon enough.
Being absent-minded needs the right kind of touch. Luckily you have a classic text-book definition running this event. Only in her little world do trees fight heroic battles against clouds, while crying maidens run to their single dorky father's (I will marry him. I love dorks <3) who draw the next door neighbors flower-pods.
For Butterfly Flower, I chose Pandalily and her character Anthony. In the end I think it'd be Elianna who would tell the bed time stories.
Thank you everyone who participated. Please, please, PLEASE stick around for the rest of the event. Hell, stick around forever. Just because you may not have won a Scent in the FS doesn't mean there won't be anymore opportunities to arise and doesn't mean you have to fade back into the lurker-mode. We encourage non-owners to RP and establish themselves in our world, because without all of you there wouldn't be one.
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