Welcome to Gaia! ::

GO! Gaiaonline; Swindler's List

Back to Guilds

A guild dedicated to a fan-based manga created for gaiaonline with artwork and storyline. 

 

Reply Chatroom
So here's my Idea! Goto Page: 1 2 3 ... 4 5 [>] [»|]

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Yes?
  Yes
  No...
  Ehh...
View Results

Tosha`
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 5:43 pm


Here Is meh Idea,
It can be changed,
do not say anything about my friggin spelling.


Kay. So I tried to keep it relatively similar to the other story.
So. The setting is Gaia. And...
You have this group of beta testers, us, who have like individual jobs for each of us.
I had a pre-list that I'll say under this later.
And then we get a new guy who is forced to do community service by helping us test experimental items because our other guy 'mysteriously disappeared'.
The guy is Crucis, with complete attitude and laziness. He also, after the experimenting item for the day, is supposed to help us with our jobs.
So yeah, beginning, get to meet each character, and he has the 'These guys are annoying because they're getting paid for this in real life and they get unlimited gold so they have no idea what a dollar is worth. Rich bastards.' kind of idea going on, so he's not too warm to us.
And that's up to all chaos with whatever we want.
The plot is, one of the people on our crew is in charge of finding people who hack/cheat/cyber and ban them. And he's the bad guy. Bad attitude. Superiority complex, hates everything but money. And [another character who's really girly and nature-filled down to earth likes him a lot.]
And he hates Crucis in particular because nature girl is kind to him, and angry dude gets ticked because Crucis is a flirt & stuff.
And this is bad because he is extremely corrupted. He frames people who make fair trades, blackmails them, and takes their gold, etc.
So he digs up in files up the testers, where is isn't allowed in, and does find some very interesting things.
But he doesn’t blackmail him yet, instead acts kinder to him and waits until his community service is up.
Then he goes straight after him, threatens to blackmail him, and gets away with it for a while.


~ and now there are many ways this could end. But I'd like to see what you guys think.
-What I was thinking like, wait a while, then we catch on to it (we always thought he was corrupted anyway) because like one of us sees Angry guy leave Crucis's home with lots more gold- then we meet with each other, and plan to give the accusation to the highest power, the mysterious creator of Gaia. And I guess like we try, but the angry guy stops the request, so we're in s**t. And then i ono. We somehow get out of it by like setting him up or something...




Now here are like the open character things people we'd need to fill for the ideas:

Crucis: Main guinea pig of the red Group, sorts the importance of suggestion letters, helps when done.

Misaokat: She'd design the items selected to become part of the world from the suggestion box.

Tosha`: Pixelizes the above designs, full scale, then tests them out of the red team>Represented of Red Team when in meetings

Jin: Fixes games/pages/rooms/unseen images/etc Matnence lazy guy.

Feyer: In charge of the beta testing of the fighting part of Gaia they were talking about/Lead hunter of The Red team> Co-leader of the Red Group

Mathem: Beta tester/pixelizes all fighter items/Creates rooms

Mishee: Designs and pixelizes all the upcoming clothes.

>Red Group: In charge of finding /disabling all rouge items/testing items/anything gone potentially dangerous things


>Blue Group: In charge of fixing all items that have gone haywire and frozen items.

[Open]: Pixelizes all Furniture/Food, considered very inferior.

[Toshas Enemy Person]: Designs/Creates all Evolutionary items, arch enemy of Tosha. Because she's a b***h.

[Angry Guy]: Find & bans all Hackers/cheaters/cyberers/rule breakers>Co-leader of Blue Group, in charge of the hunt of blue.

[Aya]: Designs& Pixelizes all Flowers/Bugs/Fish/Grass/Water/basically anything in town, Also in charge of Announcements >Leader of Blue Group

[Open]: Creates the new accounts/In charge of disposing the items &avatar &name of banned people

[Open]: In charge of Sending all beta tested items to the world of Gaia, and quests, and in charge of selecting how advertisements go


Yellow Team: Fully getting rid of all viruses that hackers give

[Open]: Pixelizes all animals/plushies & in charge of handing out gold

[Open]: Creates the Games/In charge of Terrain and stadium of Battle Area

[Open]: Creates textures/Gives color to everything & In charge of Cinema and the movie clips

[Open]: In charge of helping everyone, and starting out the Noobs, so obviously very kind/accepting. Also in charge of all lost passwords. Leader of Yellow Group

[Open]: De-Hacks accounts of Gaia victims. Co-leader of Yellow

[Open]: I ONO

[Open]: I ONO



...........
ALOT of changing can be changed anywhere.
But the main people focused on will be the red group, obviously, and so forth :}


OPINIONS?




+=~-*"*-~=+=~-*"*-~=+=~-*"*-~=+=~-*"*-~=+=~-*"*-~=+=~-*"*-~=+=~-*"*-~=+=~-*"*-~=+=~-*"*-~=+
ANY NEW IDEAS IN THE COMMENTS I WILL CHANGE TO ORANGE, BOLD, AND CENTERD.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:14 pm


EVERY CHARACTER NEEDS TO PM ME OR COMMENT TO CHANGE THEIR STUFF.Unless you have the ability to edit my post :}


-Blank-
User Name:
Name:
Age/Birthday:
Height:
Weight:
Dementions: b: w: h:
Blood Type:
Eye Color:
Hair Color:
Job:
Location:
Family:
Sign:
Hobbies:
Ticks:
Ussual Mood:
Clothing Type:
Personality Type:
Fears:
Loves:
Hates:
Closest to [person]:
Languages:
Average Posts Per Year:
Pets:
'Happy Place'/Place to calm down:
-FAVORITES~LEAST FAVORITES-
Passtime:
Color:
Genre of Music:
Band/Atrist:
Place:
Animal:
Element:
Game:
Movie:
Weather:
Subject:
Store:
Food:



------------------------------------------------------------------
User Image
User Image
User Image

Tosha`
Crew


misaokat
Crew

5,250 Points
  • First step to fame 200
  • Forum Dabbler 200
  • Forum Sophomore 300
PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:25 pm


It's kinda like te comic I made last summer for CAA @_@
PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:45 pm


Dun know what your're talking about @_@

But uhh... I'm unna send you a message

Tosha`
Crew


Taki Desu

Mewling Receiver

7,600 Points
  • Peoplewatcher 100
  • Conversationalist 100
  • Somebody Likes You 100
PostPosted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:03 pm


"Can Aya be the Nature Chick from the Blue Team?" =D =^-^=
PostPosted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:54 pm


If you Want biggrin

Tosha`
Crew


Wakaji
Crew

Peculiar Wolf

PostPosted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 8:37 pm


The spelling and grammar sure did a number on my eyes. But I must admit, your idea is good, Tosha. 3nodding
PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:37 am


Its an intriguing Idea. I say that you write up a first chapter and how you want the scenes to look kinda, and I will draw up a rough draft so we can vote if we want me as the artist. Mind you I might be able to do a chapter a month.

xoxEllieMaexox
Crew

Original Gaian

7,600 Points
  • Citizen 200
  • Forum Sophomore 300
  • Conversationalist 100

Tosha`
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:26 am


K, I say we should all do like a 3-page comic thing reating to the begguining- then see who the artist/s can be.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:49 am


Feyer Brand
Its an intriguing Idea. I say that you write up a first chapter and how you want the scenes to look kinda,.


Well how fast would you guys want this to go? Like BAM, fast- or like kinda stretched out? And I know like, kind of a hook to books/stories is like have a little taste of seeing the bad guy in action, then going to the real story.

And Like in the begguining, I see Crucis like waiting for one of us to show up to pick him up (I'm thinnking aya), and like he either goes off and screws around- and like Aya finally shows up & like sees a note or somthing. Either way she finds him doing somthing bad, and catches him in the middle of it & stops him all angry. Then it kinda says the whole situation>How he's in community service> then she goes back to the cheerful happy girly attitude & kinda makes him think she's weird.

And then like another part of the story would be haveing one of us have to bring him personally to the beta 'tower' (I'm making stuff up) so he can't use it anytime he wanted & he has to be monitered. And then she brings him to the meeting we're in where we are all serious- and then the 'chapter1' full picture. Then the chapter starts. I'll make more up later.

Tosha`
Crew


Wakaji
Crew

Peculiar Wolf

PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 7:09 pm


Just fast enough to show story details clearly to be comprehendable.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 7:16 pm


It was-or it should be? And Like, how many pages a chapter?

Tosha`
Crew


Wakaji
Crew

Peculiar Wolf

PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:32 pm


I'd make it vary from chapter to chapter, depending on what's going on. How long is a chapter in a typical manga?
PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:56 pm


Uh... host club has roughly 28 pages per chapter...

Tosha`
Crew

Reply
Chatroom

Goto Page: 1 2 3 ... 4 5 [>] [»|]
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum