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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:40 pm
Leave your comments about my story "The Sixth Planet", thanx for ya'll's help and thanx for readin' it
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:47 pm
1st episode comment 3nodding Oh mu god! i luvs it! Awsome writing~ Whee~~ blaugh *waits for next episode*
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Strawberry Raptors Captain
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[ Shards of Setsuna ] Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:49 pm
1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:57 pm
Setsuna_chan6 1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^ HA! TAKE THAT LAWS OF PHYSICS!!!!
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 8:17 pm
creaturelover00 Setsuna_chan6 1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^ HA! TAKE THAT LAWS OF PHYSICS!!!! episode 2 is done, i dont like it personally
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 1:07 pm
creaturelover00 creaturelover00 Setsuna_chan6 1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^ HA! TAKE THAT LAWS OF PHYSICS!!!! episode 2 is done, i dont like it personally Episode 2:
8/10 biggrin
You start off extremly well! But as you end the episode... it gets a lil' sloppy sweatdrop
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Strawberry Raptors Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 3:36 pm
xX_Kera_Xx creaturelover00 creaturelover00 Setsuna_chan6 1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^ HA! TAKE THAT LAWS OF PHYSICS!!!! episode 2 is done, i dont like it personally Episode 2:
8/10 biggrin
You start off extremly well! But as you end the episode... it gets a lil' sloppy sweatdrop i know............but they're hard to end greatly, since these first five episodes all end in a forest.
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 7:19 pm
It was...okay...but weak...
Structure: 4/10
Overall: 7/10
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[ Shards of Setsuna ] Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 8:20 pm
Epi 3 is up, i was planning not to post this till I finished typing epi4 and 5, but then i though a few minutes ago, what the hell, I might as well get some comments, so it's up^^ BTW, epi 4 & 5 are in my "The Sixth Planet" journal, and guess what....
Im making a new story, its gonna be wacked out, its through the eyes of a 16-year-old serial killer, how he finds his vic's, and how he murders them. And then in the same story, its through the eyes of his 13-yr-old sister, who knows about his murders, but tells no one, she even watches quietly in fear, over his shoulder.
Then Im gonna make another story, that only I know what it's gonna be about, ooooooo.....suspense><. So....as you can see im gonna be kinda busy, so you may see a decline in my rp production rate, but ill try and post as much as possible.
And also, if I get a little normal, plz forgive me. It shouldn't be too hard to tell when i do dat, i mean i am the definition of wierd.
Comment about the epi, or what I just said as you wish, i just wish more people in this guild would read my story.
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:13 pm
There all cool but 2 kinda lacked detail (no effence)
AND I wana read the murder story thing, so type it fast.
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:37 pm
Ki-Ya There all cool but 2 kinda lacked detail (no effence) AND I wana read the murder story thing, so type it fast. comment on epi 3 for now, and im workin on it
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 5:34 pm
IF YA'LL HAVENT NOTICED, EPISODE 4 IS UP ^^
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[ Shards of Setsuna ] Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 5:44 pm
I'm not sure what to say about them.
Chapter 3 was pretty good. I like transmorgers.
Chapter 4 felt weaker, because I kinda got lulled away after awhile. Overall ,the rating was 6. Chapter 4 kinda ruined it for me ^^;;
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 5:20 pm
Epi 5 is up, couldnt think of a name for it......... sweatdrop
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