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Croakers
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:40 pm


Leave your comments about my story "The Sixth Planet", thanx for ya'll's help and thanx for readin' it
PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:47 pm


1st episode comment 3nodding


Oh mu god! i luvs it! Awsome writing~ Whee~~ blaugh *waits for next episode*

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[ Shards of Setsuna ]
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:49 pm


1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^
PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:57 pm


Setsuna_chan6
1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^
HA! TAKE THAT LAWS OF PHYSICS!!!!

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Croakers
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 8:17 pm


creaturelover00
Setsuna_chan6
1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^
HA! TAKE THAT LAWS OF PHYSICS!!!!
episode 2 is done, i dont like it personally
PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 1:07 pm


creaturelover00
creaturelover00
Setsuna_chan6
1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^
HA! TAKE THAT LAWS OF PHYSICS!!!!
episode 2 is done, i dont like it personally

Episode 2:

8/10 biggrin

You start off extremly well! But as you end the episode... it gets a lil' sloppy sweatdrop

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Croakers
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 3:36 pm


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creaturelover00
creaturelover00
Setsuna_chan6
1st Eppy: *squee* I give it 8-10 stars ^^
HA! TAKE THAT LAWS OF PHYSICS!!!!
episode 2 is done, i dont like it personally

Episode 2:

8/10 biggrin

You start off extremly well! But as you end the episode... it gets a lil' sloppy sweatdrop
i know............but they're hard to end greatly, since these first five episodes all end in a forest.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 7:19 pm


It was...okay...but weak...


Structure: 4/10

Overall: 7/10

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Croakers
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 8:20 pm


Epi 3 is up, i was planning not to post this till I finished typing epi4 and 5, but then i though a few minutes ago, what the hell, I might as well get some comments, so it's up^^
BTW, epi 4 & 5 are in my "The Sixth Planet" journal,
and guess what....

Im making a new story, its gonna be wacked out, its through the eyes of a 16-year-old serial killer, how he finds his vic's, and how he murders them.
And then in the same story, its through the eyes of his 13-yr-old sister, who knows about his murders, but tells no one, she even watches quietly in fear, over his shoulder.

Then Im gonna make another story, that only I know what it's gonna be about, ooooooo.....suspense><. So....as you can see im gonna be kinda busy, so you may see a decline in my rp production rate, but ill try and post as much as possible.

And also, if I get a little normal, plz forgive me. It shouldn't be too hard to tell when i do dat, i mean i am the definition of wierd.


Comment about the epi, or what I just said as you wish, i just wish more people in this guild would read my story.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:13 pm


There all cool but 2 kinda lacked detail (no effence)











AND I wana read the murder story thing, so type it fast.

Ki-Ya
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Croakers
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:37 pm


Ki-Ya
There all cool but 2 kinda lacked detail (no effence)











AND I wana read the murder story thing, so type it fast.
comment on epi 3 for now, and im workin on it
PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 5:34 pm


IF YA'LL HAVENT NOTICED, EPISODE 4 IS UP ^^

Croakers
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[ Shards of Setsuna ]
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 5:44 pm


I'm not sure what to say about them.

Chapter 3 was pretty good. I like transmorgers.

Chapter 4 felt weaker, because I kinda got lulled away after awhile. Overall ,the rating was 6. Chapter 4 kinda ruined it for me ^^;;
PostPosted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 5:20 pm


Epi 5 is up, couldnt think of a name for it......... sweatdrop

Croakers
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