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Here is a little snippet of the fanfic I have been working on about the relationship between Anju and Maki.

“Very well.” Anju moved in on Maki. The girl became erratic and started blurting out the kinds of things you would hear from someone afraid they were going to be killed. Anju expected this. She had never fed off anyone who was aware of it before. She always knocked them out first. But this time had to be special. She was taking a huge risk in trusting Maki, but there was little more harm that could come of the situation.

Anju leaned Maki’s head to the side. She could smell the sweet scent of the jealousy in her blood even over the smell of her fear. Anju’s lips brushed against Maki’s neck, the motion was customary. A vampire's kiss possessed mild anesthetic properties, it made the bite mostly painless. Her fangs touched Maki’s skin. The girl shuddered even under Anju’s mind control. The skin broke and Anju could taste Maki’s blood once more. In the countless feeds since her first she had tasted none so sweet.


It is only posted up to chapter three now (though they are large chapters). I think I will try to go to five chapters and not much longer. The relationship is relatively slow for progression and I wrote this work specifically to work on developing relationships for some of my non fanfic novels.

Also I apologize for my site. I realize it sucks and I haven't really had time to work on it, but I did get laid off today so hopefully it will be more fleshed out soon.

*Edit - Chapter three up, though it lacks revision*