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 Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 10:01 am
My story is like this: Certian people can control the natural energy in the atmosphere and channel in different ways. But when people that can control the energy start to disapear Aislin investigates and finds with the help of Alex Rider the shadows are trying to take over the new government by killing all the energy users.
It's still in the works but so far do you guys think it can go somewhere?
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Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 5:24 pm
Do not write for others. Write for yourself. That is the greatest law of every writer. You write your stories because you like them, the only thing that you do for the readers, is to make sure they are not unintrigued and do not have to ask the common questions that should have been answered in your writing.
My opinion is this, write the story, THEN let everyone decide whether it was or not. ^^ Sorry if this is no helpful.
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Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:14 pm
Ah, skittles, you have a point *huggles* She's such a good girl *pats head while glomping*
Yup, sweets, you should consider writing it first. It sounds interesting and you're free to ramble your ideas, but I want to see it written *sparkly eyes* Pwease?? An writer's idea is only to be judged by him/her until it's in literary form. We can't affect your ideas; that's why you have to decide if it's good, first.
Write it, and then we'll see ^^
Note: I wonder if anything I said made any sense xD
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:41 pm
It kind of seems interesting. Write it anyway and once your done lemme see it! xD
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Desirable Conversationalist
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Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:47 pm
Show me an excerpt from it and I'll tell you what I think.
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