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 Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 2:18 pm
I love to write. I write stories, poems, tons of things. It's a hobby. I mostly write mystery books and nature poems. One day I would like to publish some of them. Im gonna post some of them in this forum. Some of them might be ones I just thought of, so dont be mad if there are misspellings.
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Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 2:23 pm
Here is a poem I wrote a couple months ago:
The Sunset
The sunset at dawn spreads a rainbow shadow across every lawn. All different colors, red,purple,orange, and pink, shall it gently sink away when night comes here, the beautiful lights, they shall dissapear. May that sunset come back next dawn, and spread those colors all around, as the birds chirp silently making a harmonious sound.
Feedback?
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Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 5:51 pm
a little monotonous for me, but as a poem it stands by itsself... good job...
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 1:58 am
Xenos Dagger a little monotonous for me, but as a poem it stands by itsself... good job...
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