Requeim for the Innocent is about a boy, David, who is fighting the "war in the shadows" with the demons - even though he himself is one of them. There is a group of fighters who invites him to join him, but they accuse David of being a demon and his is forced to prove to them that he's on their side.


Anyway, I need just some basic editing on it and for someone to point out any inconsistencies. The minor sort of stuff I can't catch myself, nothing too big. I'm also open to expanding on it if there's anything you think needs more explaination. I sort of wrote it in a rush to make the contest deadline.

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