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PostPosted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 12:41 pm


Post your Poetry here.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 12:40 pm


Ok.. I'll start posting some of my songs here.. My friends say it's good, I checked with some gaians who told me it's good, so here they are..

you could be mine
if you could only read the signs
but we're running out of time.
is there any hope?
I'm hanging to the rope
i just wish that you'd be mine

I'm sick of staring at the floor
I want to you adore
I just wanna stare into the eyes
of the girl next door.

My heart keeps breaking
when I see you passing..
with that guy.
I can no more hide
I want you by my side
cause my love for you I can't denay

so you'e driving me nuts
I finaly have the guts
to ask you out..
and my heart jumped to the skies
when you stared into my eyes
and then..
said..
NOT!

That's 1, More will come..

Loki_Liesmith


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 4:26 pm


wow
that's good ^_^
PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 5:37 pm


I just wrote this one today...

Just because I'm Different

Just because I'm different
You think it doesn't matter
Just because I'm "different"
You just don't seem to care

Well, I could say you're different,
And that would be so true
And it really doesn't matter
That right now I'm hating you

Because everything is different,
The night and day, the sun and rain,
But we really hate eachother
Because of how we are the same.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:11 am


If you see by now, I don't have names for my songs.. So if you want, Invent something..

you tried to put up a fight
but the battle has ended
i thought about it all night
'till my mind has been mended

it is over now
we will never be back
i still don't know how
but you stabbed me in the back

i shall never forgive you
for the pain that you caused me
we will never continue
so i leave with no worry

but for the time we had
i shall not be bad
so you now i leave
in the hands of god
PostPosted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:30 am


Wow! That's good!
I really can't think of any names for those at the moment... sweatdrop

Random one I'll write... now.

Inspired Bythis pic (Hyde from Laruku)
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Let me Out

Let me out of this Box
I'm Trapped inside
Don't leave me here,
I've got nothing to hide

I need to let it out
But this isn't what I meant
I need to know
I'm free to vent

Don't make me build up the pressure
I don't wanna hurt anyone
Are you as foolish as I think you are?
Or is this your twisted fun?

Don't make me explode!
I need to know
That I'm free
To let my anger show

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 2:29 pm


part of a song i bega writing yesterday, inspired by a friend.. some of it that is, the rest is me..

of you I can't get enough
so please baby put me in cuffs
Act as if I was a dog in a pound
please honey stomp me to the ground

Whip me and chase me
I think you're doing sadomy
I want my own blood to see
I wanna you to glee...

but don't worry girl
you know I love to curl
when all the wounds burn
When my clothes were ripped and torn.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 2:57 pm


A Really long one... I'll post the description first so I have room for the poem...

This is actualy originated off of a short poem I created in my head today and yesterday... But when I wrote it down, it just didn't sound right. So, I restarted but kept the topic, and listening to "Niji" By L'Arc~En~Ciel, I was able to finish it. Unusualy long for me, longest I will probably ever write. This poem is not based on Niji, only the length and the last line ^_^''

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 2:58 pm


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:25 am


Together ( or : We Have)

I look into your shining eyes,
And suddenly, I don't know why,
I feel so calm, peaceful, and glad,
Remembering all the good times we've had.
We've laughed,
We've cried,
We've yelled,
We've sighed,
So now I notice,
We've been tied.
Together always, by your side,
And you, always by mine.
To stay best friends as we get old,
And always together, as our stories unfold.


Han Sooyoung


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:11 pm


That's really nice! biggrin
PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 4:04 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 2:34 pm


This was really random. I just wrote it. ^_^'

Just a single moment

In the mist that blurs the light
You stand 'midst the unknown,
Without cautioun, without fright
You don't miss the light that once shone

In this so called "Weakness" of my heart,
I feel it's tearing me apart,
Unblocking something in the way
A moment of clarity to see the day

And it's like water, it soothes and heals
Yet breaks on those who shall not feel
And it hides the truth of what belongs
It blurs and mixes right and wrong

And it's like snowfall, that sings in silent glory
Forcing spirits into sleep,
But to rest in a moment of sirenity
A moment of clarity

And in my heart, I feel the mist
In all its clarity
PostPosted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 12:50 pm


I don't know why people think this is good. I wrote it for a homework assignment in five minites before it had to be turned in. My teacher put it in a contest without me knowing and it got published.

The Trap
Call my name in the wind,
Find me and take me away,
Make sure I never go back to the trap,
Like an animal trap.
I'll never go back there again
If you don't let me.
I'm stuck in the place,
Where I hate.
Get the key,
I'm locked in by myself.
Take me away,
And never let me go back.
I promise I won't go,No, I swear I won't go,
I won't go willingly back.

wolfgrl2

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