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Tears Of Blood

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UhNoMissDino
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:54 pm


A lonely girl stands on the sidewalk
You glance at her as she glances back
Slowly she starts fading away into the air
You realize it’s only a figment of your imagination

Waking to screams
You turn your head
The girl is there
Against the wall

You get out of bed and walk towards her
She screams “Get away!”
But you don’t listen to what she says
Again she slowly fades away

She appears in your dreams every night
You awake to go grab a knife
Standing in the mirror you look at yourself
There and then you commit suicide

The girl appears before you
You hold her hand and pull her close
Whisper in her ear something nice
She smiles in a way that gives you a curse

Forever together you shall stay
Crying away your tears of blood
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:56 pm


very nice, i like how it concludes in a way that maks you think a bit.. .kudos...

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:41 pm


Thanks. : D
PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 1:53 am



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 6:11 pm


Nice  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 7:45 pm


Thats beautiful! Very very nice work. It should be published smile

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