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 Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:01 pm
Hello. I came up with this topic to feature unknown poets or showcase famous poets. This topic is all about making poetry or giving famous poetry lines. Your poems can be about anything you want or what you feel. Just write down poems on here and you will be judged and maybe featured on the front page of this forum.
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:11 pm
The rules:
1. No spamming.
2. No advertising.
3. No cybering.
4. Foul language is alright up to a point.
5. Be active on this topic.
6. Make sure your talk is a poem, poem related, or about somthing that isnt way off topic.
7. You can critque on other people's poems but don't go and be an a** about it.
8. If you want to give a poem a score, quote it, and give a score out of ten. And don't be a total a** about it either.
9. Please be respectful of other poets.
10. At the end of each week I will pick one poem that I thought was great. I will also pick the highest scored poem each week and put it on the front page. Then I will take your pm's of what was the best poem each and put that on the front page too.
11. Make sure your poems make sense. If I allowed this anybody can make a poem easily.
Falure of these rules will have punishment depending on how severe your crimes are.
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:14 pm
My poem pick for this week!
RESERVED!
Top scored poem this week!
RESERVED!
The audience top pick this week!
RESERVED!
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:18 pm
How to make your poem:
Title:
Author:
First Line:
Second Line (does not have to rhyme):
Third Line (etc.):
Fourth Line:
Fifth Line:
Sixith Line:
Seventh Line:
Eight Line:
Ninth Line:
Tenth Line:
You can have more or less lines depending on how you want your poem to be.
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:20 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 4:59 am
I guess I will start....
Can we really feel happiness?
Can we really feel sadness?
Can we really feel hate?
Or is it all just human reactions?
Sorry if my poem isn't the best. I'm really out of ideas.
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Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 11:14 pm
lol
Rollercoaster
Love goes up, Love goes down,
Couple's getting turned around,
Fighting here, Breakups there,
Life is hard, that I'll swear,
Worse than that, rollercoaster,
All those guys, in the toaster,
Cheaters Left, Cheaters Right,
Now you know, this is my night.
Him and Me
I look at him, He looks at me,
I just wish, He could see,
My true feelings, My true Hope,
He is like, My brand of dope,
I love him, He loves her,
Now I'll cry and suffer.
I entered rollercoaster in a poetry contest, we'll see XD
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HidingFromTheBoogeyMan Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:49 am
Aleka Lonsun lol RollercoasterLove goes up, Love goes down, Couple's getting turned around, Fighting here, Breakups there, Life is hard, that I'll swear, Worse than that, rollercoaster, All those guys, in the toaster, Cheaters Left, Cheaters Right, Now you know, this is my night. Him and MeI look at him, He looks at me, I just wish, He could see, My true feelings, My true Hope, He is like, My brand of dope, I love him, He loves her, Now I'll cry and suffer. I entered rollercoaster in a poetry contest, we'll see XD
Your Him and me gets 8/10
nice jobe
but if love is a rollercoaster im going on the merry go round.
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Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:52 am
Here is another one I made in my free time
In this monocrome world, I will search the very depths of the earth and the limitless skies only to find you"
this....this basically shows what love and our world are like.
We try to find that special someone but either get turned away....or get hurt by others
Soon we turn our backs on everyone....even ourselfs.....
Our hearts rip open and tear apart......
Soon all thats left is remains.....
Then we dont know what love is.....
If there is a chance to find it again its a long and tedious journey......
but for others.....we will never grasp a hold of love ever again....
If you find love....hold on to it.....
Dont let it go......
Ignore all those who oppose and walk with a smile on your face
Hold on to the special one of your life
....And dont forget.....love is special.....
Dont shrug it off....
Just look back and think of what went wrong.....
Then try to correct it.....
Everyone deserves a happy ending.......
Even the ones who deserve it......
And thats somthing you should keep in your heart.....
I entered this in the poetry contest too.
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 9:24 am
Here are 2 of my Diamontes:
Earth
Earth
Majestic, Delicate
Bestow, Breath, Create
Life, Color, Ruins, Aftermath
Agonize, Kill, Annihilate
Earth
Hope and Despair
Hope
Optomistic, Enthusiastic
Renew, Encourage, Inspire
Faith, Expectation, Downcast, Gloom
Cripple, Burden, Depress
Bitter, Anguish
Despair
I hope you like 'em X3
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:03 pm
these are in the arena but i want some CONSTRUCTIVE critsism please
Blindness
The night closes in on us
Scared into beliving
Hiding
We can't show true colors
Sinking into the depths of darkness
Blindness
Friends
I have some friends who clash a lot
I have some friends who laugh a lot
But does that mean I should not be friends
With all of them?
They are fun to be around
They cheer me up when I am down
Some are ALWAYS funny
And some have lots of money
They are compassionate
They are various
They are loyal
They are great!
This is my view
Of all of you!
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:29 pm
here are some of mine
Girl of My Dreams
Her eyes are stars of the night sky
Her smile, the Crescent Moon.
But her heart, my oh my,
Shines brighter than the sun of noon.
And from that shining heard,
Flows a majestic river of kindness,
And to whomever that river flows unto of any part,
Be thankful of her fairness,
Be grateful of her heart,
For those shining eyes you shall miss,
When from us, she does part...
The Girl I Love
I see her so fair
Though she doesn't care
Those sweet eyes
For which my heart cries,
Her heavenly face
That makes my heart race,
Her lustrous voice
To me, the sweetest noise
If only she'd love me,
But this, i shall never see...
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