I'm currently writing a fan-fic, and I'd like to know what you guys think of it. Critizism is appriecated because it helps me to get better. The fan-fic can be found here: http://www.zeldalegends.net/index.php?n=fanfic&f=d&id=986
My fic is rated PG-13 for mild swearing,violence,and alchohol usage. Just thought I'd tell you that. And it's an original storyline so some of the villiansmight not be villians anymore...

Thank you!