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 Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 8:18 pm
[wip]please let me know what you think ^-^
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 9:28 pm
The shadow under the cloth should be darker than the shadow to texture the skin; I think. heart
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 9:32 pm
will do, thank you ma'am!
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 9:34 pm
soulsraine will do, thank you ma'am! welcome.
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 7:02 pm
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 7:12 pm
LOL she's gonna get one sweatdrop the one that i drew in ink just didn't look right, so i erased it after i scanned it. i'm going to paint it on toward the end
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 7:13 pm
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 8:28 pm
wait; this is your avvie, right?
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 8:29 pm
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 8:51 pm
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 11:46 pm
I must say once this is done and fixed up I think it'll be very nice, though if I may, i'd like to point out something you may have overlooked... the legs are out of proportion with the rest of the body the legs look a bit to short ^^; that or the arms are a tad long...but i've found fixing legs easier then fixing arms... anyways the legs are short in the calf and a bit long in the thigh proportionally to itself and the armlength with extended hand should fit into the thigh and calf of the leg roughly and the foot attaches onto that length ^^;; I can wait to see the finished product since the coloring looks so promising ^^,
I also apologize if my critique came off a bit rough, i have a tendency to annoy people with my eye for minor errors and such ^^;
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 2:18 pm
don't apologize for polite critique--it's really helpful.
i've had someone tell me that a character looked like a slut, and somebody else back them up and say that wasn't rude >.>.......
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 2:19 pm
ah--and looking back at it, i can definitely see what you're saying about the calf. though i won't change it on this picture (i don't have anything as nifty as a tablet), it's always good to know for future reference.
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 2:42 pm
Gah umm...oops I kind of screwed up. umm not the post right above me but the one above that I kind of hit edit instead of quote with out noticing and accedently deleted half of your message. Sorry I did not mean too.
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 2:45 pm
ack! O_o....i see that....
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